Devakshi Drabble|Hide and Seek With Emotions - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

I always find it reasonable to come closer without flings...
And I appreciate the fact that you opted them to spring apart rather than falling for a kiss until they sort their differences out...
The palpable sexual tension between them was thick to cut, nevertheless they did what was appropriate at the moment...
Playing hide and seek in person and playing hide and seek of emotions simultaneously, it was a nice touch to the current scenario... Absolutely true...
For a change, she confessed that she missed him too, but there are still lot of things to talk about before they can finally move together...
Now it's Bigcha's turn to search... How about he searches a hidden Sonakshi along with her hidden emotions? This time, they might talk?
Anyway, bohot ho gaya mera blabber... I really have forgotten the skill to write a review... haven't written it in a longer time... I hope, I didn't bore you out...

PS: This is the first time I am giving you a review...
Me in Salman Khan style - Swaagat nahi karoge humara? 🤣


Aiye padhariye Pyaari Azeen Di-In Daya style
Aapka comment dekhkar I am dancing like this

I am very happy to read your review Di and I am glad that you like it and Thank you for Giving such a detailed review
This is for you

And also this
And I will think about continuing this and write if a good secene comes in my mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
It was awesome kiss toh nahi bt shayd serial kuch cozy moments zarurat hoon

N since u said u wanna clear d air so ab aap next part bhi likh hi doon
N I don't mind 1 hr wala if this is how u write
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

It was awesome kiss toh nahi bt shayd serial kuch cozy moments zarurat hoon

N since u said u wanna clear d air so ab aap next part bhi likh hi doon
N I don't mind 1 hr wala if this is how u write


Aww thank you so much for such a sweet comment dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: rahulvats13

Wow...

It was short but beautifully written👏


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
its awesome dear
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: raji91

its awesome dear

thanks for pm


Thank you so much I am glad that you liked it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
its amazing loved it.😃will u continue as ss or ff..thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Agrata23

its amazing loved it.😃will u continue as ss or ff..thanks for pm😊


Thank you dear
And No I don't have any plan to continue this but if everything goes well in my life then maybe will come back with another work
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Thank you 😃

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