Devakshi Drabble|Hide and Seek With Emotions - Page 7

It's beautiful 😳 n somehow I feel it's very much similar to our current track n awesome title 👏 they are playing games with eo with us also 😲 😭

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice Drabble dear
Liked the way she hide her emotions but then let him know that she is still his & waiting to finish that game.
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Thank you so much and I am really happy that you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

It's beautiful 😳n somehow I feel it's very much similar to our current track n awesome title👏 they are playing games with eo with us also😲😭

Hahaha you are right dear and I am glad that you liked it 😃

Its very beautiful Ankita..

Originally posted by: Sharica

Its very beautiful Ankita..

Lovely..

Kiss ke baad bhi issues sort out ho jaate😉

Anyways loved reading this nd wish to see this happening in the show..

Thank you so much and Next time when I will write something I will make sure that their kiss is not interrupted 😛 😳

Ahh something I wnted to happen in the show. Y won't they play games n have moments like these. U penned it down perfectly btw

Originally posted by: PY18

Ahh something I wnted to happen in the show. Y won't they play games n have moments like these. U penned it down perfectly btw

Thank you so much 😃I am glad that you liked it

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Okay so I penned down this in exact one hour so please bear with this crap.I don't even know what to call this piece of work because it turned out longer than a drabble and shorter than an OS.Do comment your views.Criticism is always welcomed

@ bold... Call it a half OS...
Drabble se zyada, Os se kam...
Just like half girlfriend? Friend se zyada aur girlfriend se kam? 🤣

I always find it reasonable to come closer without flings...
And I appreciate the fact that you opted them to spring apart rather than falling for a kiss until they sort their differences out...
The palpable sexual tension between them was thick to cut, nevertheless they did what was appropriate at the moment...
Playing hide and seek in person and playing hide and seek of emotions simultaneously, it was a nice touch to the current scenario... Absolutely true...
For a change, she confessed that she missed him too, but there are still lot of things to talk about before they can finally move together...
Now it's Bigcha's turn to search... How about he searches a hidden Sonakshi along with her hidden emotions? This time, they might talk?
Anyway, bohot ho gaya mera blabber... I really have forgotten the skill to write a review... haven't written it in a longer time... I hope, I didn't bore you out...

PS: This is the first time I am giving you a review...
Me in Salman Khan style - Swaagat nahi karoge humara? 🤣

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

@ bold... Call it a half OS...
Drabble se zyada, Os se kam...
Just like half girlfriend? Friend se zyada aur girlfriend se kam? 🤣

Hahaha Good Idea