Devakshi FF: Reaching Out (Updated Chapter 29 Epilogue AN- Pg 142) - Page 95

Enjoyed it royally. Wow. Thank you so much.

OMG!!!!😲

This is really a crazy but a wonderful chapter. I wasn't just laughing heartily but was ROFLing throughout the whole chapter literally.🤣🤣

My cheeks, my stomach were aching & still couldn't stop laughing.🤣 My eyes were getting blurred due to tears...😆 I had to stop reading in between to breathe, or else my laughter was uncontrollable.😳😆

I usually read silently, but the dialogues were so damn funny, I tried to laugh silently closing my mouth, but couldn't control my loud laughter,🤣 it sure did disturb my family members' sleep. They were very annoyed, as I was reading in the middle of the night.😆

You are a very talented writer. Great going.👏👏 Try ROMCOM type of stories next time.😳

How do you come up with such hilarious dialogues? Absolutely brilliant.👍🏼 Dev's annoyed face, his thoughts, his action, and to that, reaction from Ranveer, his sisters and Tina is so beautifully explained. I was visualizing their every move and was laughing crazily...🤣 like when they were hiding behind the plant, Dev's antics, his glares especially,🤣 Ranveer's hold on Dev etc...😆

I loved the scarf part.😆
Enjoyed thoroughly. I am not able to control myself, I am still laughing and typing...😆

Waiting for the Sunday update. Sonakshi kya kahegi, Dev ka reaction kya hoga...?? I know he will be like this admiring his girl.😆 Will he listen to what she has to say or just stare her??? Looking forward eagerly.😃

Loads of thanks.🤗

Woah thst was unexpected
Sudden twist from intense situation to s full on comic one
I was like W*F is going on..With all possible goof ups done by these 5 it turned out to be an absolute entertainer..Gosh LMAO
Now that Its time for a real face off..The siuation is very scary yet gripping..I am having goosebumps
Its Sunday tomorrow
HURRAYY !!

Originally posted by: JALK2000

I would like to quote the entire chapter here but that dsnt make sense so I'll refrain. U have a definite flair for comic timing. Well, they did tell Dev he was childish so he's not really wrong in doing that, is he?? And Ranveer, Zeher??? seriously??!!!! That was a ROTFLOL moment indeed and so was the plant thing. The manager wud have thought they are a entire family of lunatics. One person wants a plant, another want to eat right after dinner again. Poor man, must have been totally confused.

What an update this was!!!!!! Best part is Sona and Dev are facing off. Bechara Jatin kaha reh gaya??

Originally posted by: 8310497jah97n01

poor Jatin🤣🤣🤣

it was an amazing chapter 👏

Originally posted by: CUTE_K2

Nice one di par cliffhanger par chor diya now waiting for sunday

Originally posted by: StardustBliss

🤣 This is me throughout the chapter..
Oh my goddd.. Too good yaar... After many emotional, intense chapters, you gave us a perfect light-hearted one.. And it's super hilarious. 😛
And tell me, we are getting Dev-Sonakshi face-off in next chapter. Coz I can't cope with the excitement. 😉

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Your chapter pulled me to IF again, and I simply laughed my lungs out. 🤣🤣

Poor Jatin doesn't know ki Sonakshi ke saath restaurant me jaake usne kisse panga le liya. Dev ko bhi maanna padega, usey jitni jali utni mirchi Jatin ko khila di. 👏 Along with Dev, rest of the gang also became kiddos with such brilliant ideas plant, scarf and zeher.. 😆🤣

Now the Bengal tigress herself has acquired her best form. Dev would soon learn the consequence of messing with her. 😉

BTW, Jatin is 4 inches short of 6 feet. In fact, Dev is 6 inches taller than him.

Amazing and entertaining! Waiting for next. 👍🏼

- Tia.

Originally posted by: cscs

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

This was my reaction throughout the chapter.

Dev is totally boka. 😆

Sonakshi is gonna murder him. 😛

Nice one Mishti.

Originally posted by: armvedant

Enjoyed it royally. Wow. Thank you so much.

Waiting for the next update.

Regards

Renu