Devakshi OS-Love at first sight - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb os
Knew it he was one who made her fall in
But hey his friends did him a favour as he got to play hero
Awe he was a lovely mess trying to cover up when she asked him if he know who pushed her
lol Dev winked at sona to distract her he was flirting
N she ended up pouting
How cute was he to apologise the way he did
Liked how their relationship grew
N he's still the doating lover
Awe he confessed it was love at first sight for him but she didn't hear as she feel asleep
Loved ending with him telling baby bump it's their little secret
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Superb os
Knew it he was one who made her fall in
But hey his friends did him a favour as he got to play hero
Awe he was a lovely mess trying to cover up when she asked him if he know who pushed her
lol Dev winked at sona to distract her he was flirting
N she ended up pouting
How cute was he to apologise the way he did
Liked how their relationship grew
N he's still the doating lover
Awe he confessed it was love at first sight for him but she didn't hear as she feel asleep
Loved ending with him telling baby bump it's their little secret
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Aww thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.I am really overwhelmed with your comments.I am glad that you liked it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely one❤️
Keep writing more.
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: komal793

Lovely one❤️
Keep writing more.
Thanks for the PM😊

Thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful story, loved it ❤️
It was cute, especially when he was talking about how he fell in love with her but it turns out that she was asleep therefore it just had to stay a secret between him and their baby. 😊
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
its amazing
thank u so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm nice os like it
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Posted: 7 years ago
So awesome!!😃
The scene with the earrings was so cute❤️
Truly you are an amazing writer
This was just so beautiful and mesmerizing.
It felt like I was inside Sonakshi's soul.
Keep writing😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Beautiful story, loved it ❤️
It was cute, especially when he was talking about how he fell in love with her but it turns out that she was asleep therefore it just had to stay a secret between him and their baby. 😊
Thanks for the pm

Thank You so much dear for such a cute comment and I am glad that you liked it 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyj7

So awesome!!😃

The scene with the earrings was so cute❤️
Truly you are an amazing writer
This was just so beautiful and mesmerizing.
It felt like I was inside Sonakshi's soul.
Keep writing😊😊

Thanks dear,I like that earrings wala scene too and woah that was a huge compliment 😃
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