Devakshi OS-Love at first sight

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: NiharKhan
Oh my God. Wow.its totally awesome.Dev was the one by whom she fell,but when he told ,she was asleep.Loved it to the core.The os was beautifully penned down.

Thank you so much dear and I am glad that you liked it 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Hi!

Loved the OS...I would like to thank you for introducing me to your Index...or else I wouldn't've been able to come across so many beautiful stories!

Loved the journey between two care-free people to mature would-be parents! Sonakshi and Dev's love has only grown with time, and they have their baby as a symbol of their endless love! The way you described Dev and his baby's conversation about his secret is absolutely remarkable! Wish you could continue...😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Muskan2001
Hi!
Loved the OS...I would like to thank you for introducing me to your Index...or else I wouldn't've been able to come across so many beautiful stories!

Loved the journey between two care-free people to mature would-be parents! Sonakshi and Dev's love has only grown with time, and they have their baby as a symbol of their endless love! The way you described Dev and his baby's conversation about his secret is absolutely remarkable! Wish you could continue...😃

Thank you so much dear for such a beautiful comment. I am glad that you liked it 🤗

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

it was on Asya before? if am not wrong.;) ..

bdw loved Devakhsi version also... :)

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
it was on Asya before? if am not wrong.;) ..

bdw loved Devakhsi version also... :)

Yeah it was originally written on Asya but I made some changes and made the Devakshi version.Thanks 😃

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A.K.Aggarwal

@A.K.Aggarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Awww
Though I also don't believe in love at first sight as u need to knw d person bt i guess sometimes ur soul recognises ur better half
It was really cute splly d moment with d baby

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal
Awww
Though I also don't believe in love at first sight as u need to knw d person bt i guess sometimes ur soul recognises ur better half
It was really cute splly d moment with d baby

Yeah you are right I also don't believe in Love at first sight. That's why I wrote Sona's POV because my thinking is same as that and I am glad that you liked it 😃