Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 54

I can imagine ishwari's shocked expressions lol. Sona burned her like anything. Awesome update

Fantastic update.

I was like OMG! When i read all the chapters yaaar! Actually i was on a break from india forums for some days sooo i read the 3 chapters just now and was shocked to hell! What disaster have you done yaaar! Awesome chapter! Update soon!

😲 Dev ko kia hogaya hai??? I wish ye sab jaldi sort out hojaye. I feel sorry for Sona, poor baby ! Wohi q phans jati hai hamesha yar 😭

Firstly di thank you so much for the regular updates...😊

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

uff I love dark stories but not too dark your one is bearable because dev is not forcing himself on her
But uske attitude Se to mai hi dar ja rahi Hun to sona kya cheez hai
Asha could sense that something is wrong
Lol Ishwari ko jhatka laga
Do continue soon

Daro mat anki
Dark fictions aise hi hote
where one character amongst the leads has to be bad
Aise darogi to kaise chalega
Abhi aurbohot kuch hona baaki hai

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

Yeppy update on d way
Looks like n hopes aaj a lot of updates as Sunday n shah ka bday

Update diya
Ab comment bhi karlo

Originally posted by: _RS_

Dev Dixit to dehshat faila raha h😆😆

Sona kya mujhe bhi darr lagg raha hai padhke😆

Agla bhi kardona jaldi se update.. Wait ni horha ab..😉

Phailane de jitni dehshat phailani hai use
Abhi to udna shuru kiya hai
Udne de use aur thoda jyaada
Agle update mein aur kosoge tum mujhe
Mereko to jaise pyaar ho gaya hai is dark Dev se

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

WOWWW! Too good ..how do you write like this...dark side of Dev is very scary ...why is he behaving that way to his mom?? I mean his hatred is towards Sonakshi because he thinks she destroyed his love life with Natasha...but he has no idea his mom had all this...so why the indifference ?? I pity that poor girl...hopefully both will start falling in love with each other...

Please do update the next part soon...eagerly waiting ...

Thanku diii
Glad u liked it so much
Dev jo bhi karta hai uske peeche koi na koi wajah jaroor hoti hai
Iske peeche bhi hogi
Jab nafrat itni jabardast hai to pyaar kitna hoga
Jaldi update doongi
Stay tuned