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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

uff I love dark stories but not too dark your one is bearable because dev is not forcing himself on her
But uske attitude Se to mai hi dar ja rahi Hun to sona kya cheez hai
Asha could sense that something is wrong
Lol Ishwari ko jhatka laga
Do continue soon

Edited by Devakshilover - 8 years ago

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A.K.Aggarwal

@A.K.Aggarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Yeppy update on d way
Looks like n hopes aaj a lot of updates as Sunday n shah ka bday

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

O god.. Main khud kitna darr gyi thi yeh sab padke.. I m still shivering with fear.. Heart is pounding zor zor se.. Sach..

Par pehle thanks to you.. Coz u cleared in this chapter ki dev wll never force himself on sona ever.. Thanks a lot for this.. Par fir bhi u r unpredictable... Still i trust u..

Now update.. Well mera pehla line hi kaafi hai.. I guess.. Bht dangerous update tha.. Bht.. Dev ke dialogue and attitude and harkate... Sab Ekdom bang on tha.. I can feel his intensity... I know he thinks sona has hurt him and he is super angry.. Par ek baar bhi nhi suna sona ki baat.. Aisa kyu.. He used to love his cheeku... And now...

So now bedroom affair mein dono strangers and bahar dono Ekdom despos.. Achha hai.. And bura lag rha hai bht.. Sona.. Life is so unfair.. Girls ko kitna kuch jhelna padta hai... And now sona ko..

Bt ek baat achhi lagi.. Ki ishwari ko koi bhav nhi dega dev.. And also asha saw the fear in sona's eyes.. I hp sona at least usse sach bolde... Nt now bt sometime later.. Hopefully...

Dev dev dev.. Kya bolu.. I m nt hating him.. Bt woh jo kar rha hai i cant love him also.. Pls di yeh confusion aur na badana.. Matlab mera confusion...

And do update soon... I m waiting for the next one abhi se hi.. Actually i m myself a despo.. Lol

Edited by AnanyaGhosh - 8 years ago

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_RS_

@_RS_

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Dev Dixit to dehshat faila raha h😆😆

Sona kya mujhe bhi darr lagg raha hai padhke 😆

Agla bhi kardona jaldi se update.. Wait ni horha ab..😉

Edited by _RS_ - 8 years ago

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

WOWWW! Too good ..how do you write like this...dark side of Dev is very scary ...why is he behaving that way to his mom?? I mean his hatred is towards Sonakshi because he thinks she destroyed his love life with Natasha...but he has no idea his mom had all this...so why the indifference ?? I pity that poor girl...hopefully both will start falling in love with each other...

Please do update the next part soon...eagerly waiting ...

Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 8 years ago