Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 56

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Originally posted by: Prizi

o man this is scary.. dev is scary
bt why he's behaving lyk this with his mom?? i can understand why he's behaving lyk this with sona bt y ishwari?? the way sona behaved with ishu that was kind of odd

Sona behaved this way with ishwari coz she was forced to do so by dev
Isshu to pehle se hi use tez samajhti hai
Dev isshu se aise behave kyun karta hai yeh aage pata chalega

Originally posted by: Dystopia

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What has happened to Dev???? I was literally shocked. Dev is scary. I hope he redeems himself and hope Sona eventually stands up for herself and clears everything between them.

I loved the idea of this FF. It is unique and I can't wait to read more.👏

Please update soon.

Dev is my dark character
He has to be scary
He will redeem himself
Don't worry
Will update soon

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

O god.. Main khud kitna darr gyi thi yeh sab padke.. I m still shivering with fear.. Heart is pounding zor zor se.. Sach..

Par pehle thanks to you.. Coz u cleared in this chapter ki dev wll never force himself on sona ever.. Thanks a lot for this.. Par fir bhi u r unpredictable... Still i trust u..

Now update.. Well mera pehla line hi kaafi hai.. I guess.. Bht dangerous update tha.. Bht.. Dev ke dialogue and attitude and harkate... Sab Ekdom bang on tha.. I can feel his intensity... I know he thinks sona has hurt him and he is super angry.. Par ek baar bhi nhi suna sona ki baat.. Aisa kyu.. He used to love his cheeku... And now...

So now bedroom affair mein dono strangers and bahar dono Ekdom despos.. Achha hai.. And bura lag rha hai bht.. Sona.. Life is so unfair.. Girls ko kitna kuch jhelna padta hai... And now sona ko..

Bt ek baat achhi lagi.. Ki ishwari ko koi bhav nhi dega dev.. And also asha saw the fear in sona's eyes.. I hp sona at least usse sach bolde... Nt now bt sometime later.. Hopefully...

Dev dev dev.. Kya bolu.. I m nt hating him.. Bt woh jo kar rha hai i cant love him also.. Pls di yeh confusion aur na badana.. Matlab mera confusion...

And do update soon... I m waiting for the next one abhi se hi.. Actually i m myself a despo.. Lol

Dari hui bacchi shaant ho jaao
Abhi se darr jaogi to aage kaise padhogi
Rem its a dark fiction

Dev jo bhi karta hai extreme karta hai aur bina aage peeche soche karta hai
Usne sona se dosti ki to dil se ki
Natasha se pyaar kiya to dil se kiya
Sona se nafrat karta hai to bhi dil se karta hai
Jab aage chal ke pyaar karega tab bhi extreme hoke karega

Woh bass sab ko yeh dikhana chahta hai ki sona ki galti hai saari aur woh bilkul innocent hai
Kaafi hadd tak sab sahi se kar bhi raha hai woh

Agar tune sahi se padha hoga to dev kabhi isshu ko bhaav nahi deta
Kyun yeh aage pata chalega

Nahi mere dev se nafrat na karna
Kyunki main usse bohot jyaada pyaar karne lagi hoon
Just have faith in me n keep going with the flow
Will update soon

God I am seriously scared by dev's this attitude. I would have committed a suicide if I would had been in sona's place.waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Res😃

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">*unres*</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Hey Maa Matajee!😲</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Uribaba!😲..</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">*keeping my hands on mouth*</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Baba re!...Yeh kya tha!</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">I'm still shocked enough to decide what to write in the comment!</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Dev toh pura Rakshas bn gya!😕😆</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Poor Sona...how's she gonna live in this hell!</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">This is worse than death for her for being caged by Dev's hatred(or love for others)😭</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">But I'm happy atleast he didn't touch her against her wish...atleast he's not taking advantage of hers...😛</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Glad that atleast somewhere down the heart..he still cares for her😊</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Waiting for the next part!😉</font>

<font color="#6666ff" size="4">Update soon Gaddi😳</font>

Dayaben
Itna decide karke bhi itna accha comment likh daala

Mere dev ko rakshas na bolo
Woh mera sabse fav character hai ab tak ka
Sona ko tang to karta hai par uske apne reasons hai
Sab thik hoga tension na le bachua

The main part is he cares for her and some where deep down is worried for her

Will update soon

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Firstly di thank you so much for the regular updates...😊

Kya bana diya aapne hamare bhole bhale dev ko

Jo apne cheeku ki itni care karta tha

Uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta tha...

Uski khushi ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta tha...

Aaj wo uski life ko barbaad karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai

Kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai...

Use hurt karne ka koi moka chodna nahi chahta...

Par haan ek baat hai...

Care...jo ab bhi uski nafrat ke neeche kaheen dabi hui hai...

She still cares for her...

Par dikha nahi sakta

Mujhe to morning scene best laga...

Sona jab ishu ko wo sab bol rahi thi...

I wish main uska face dekh paati😆😆

It would be worth watching

Overall I loved the chapter...😃

Welcome dear
Actually mujhe bhi yeh story likhna accha lagta hai to main jaldi jaldi likhti hoon

Dev ko maine dark dev banaya hai anji
Jo sona ki care to karta hai par usse nafrat bhi utni hi karta hai
Wo use rulata hai dukh deta hai par koi aur use chot pohunchaye to woh unhe jawaab bhi deta hai

He still cares for her
Woh abhi bhi uske liye choti bacchi hai
Bass uski nafrat uske dosti par haawi ho chuki hai

Morning scene to mera bhi fav hai
Isshu ki dhulai sona ke haatoan is my biggest dream
Iss waale mein mera sapna poora hoga

Stay tuned will update soon

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Mujhe reply nhi kiya😭

Kiya hai pagli
Check kar

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Dari hui bacchi shaant ho jaao
Abhi se darr jaogi to aage kaise padhogi
Rem its a dark fiction

Dev jo bhi karta hai extreme karta hai aur bina aage peeche soche karta hai
Usne sona se dosti ki to dil se ki
Natasha se pyaar kiya to dil se kiya
Sona se nafrat karta hai to bhi dil se karta hai
Jab aage chal ke pyaar karega tab bhi extreme hoke karega

Woh bass sab ko yeh dikhana chahta hai ki sona ki galti hai saari aur woh bilkul innocent hai
Kaafi hadd tak sab sahi se kar bhi raha hai woh

Agar tune sahi se padha hoga to dev kabhi isshu ko bhaav nahi deta
Kyun yeh aage pata chalega

Nahi mere dev se nafrat na karna
Kyunki main usse bohot jyaada pyaar karne lagi hoon
Just have faith in me n keep going with the flow
Will update soon

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

God I am seriously scared by dev's this attitude. I would have committed a suicide if I would had been in sona's place.waiting for next update.

~KET@K!

Agar suicide karna har problem ka solution hota to kaafi log yahi karte
Suicide kamjor logon ka kaam hai aur meri kahaani ki sona kamjor nahi hai
Woll update soon dear
Dnt wry sab thik hoga