Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 51

Originally posted by: binuuu

Gayuudiii🤗finally ur lazy partner is here...one day to read story n one day to comment😆

Superb update thi...u knw wht i luv emotional n revenge stories...so this will b my ever time fav...mix of emotions n symthng lyk revenge...

Dev is hurtng too much sona dii...his words will create deep cut in her heart...while readng i was lyk y r u sayng all these to her dev...finally he made her marry him n brought to his house...Ish got shock of her life...

Felt very bad for sona...update nxt part soon dii...

Binnudiii my lazy partner
Aa gayi tu
Tera hi wait tha
Haan yaar mujhe bhi yeh dark genre pasand hai sort off
Meri naani humesha kehti thi ki thappad se lagi chot to insaan bhool jaata hai par kadwe shabdo se lagi chot kabhi nahi bhulta
Sona ke case mein bhi yehi hoga dekhna

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Binnudiii my lazy partner
Aa gayi tu
Tera hi wait tha
Haan yaar mujhe bhi yeh dark genre pasand hai sort off
Meri naani humesha kehti thi ki thappad se lagi chot to insaan bhool jaata hai par kadwe shabdo se lagi chot kabhi nahi bhulta
Sona ke case mein bhi yehi hoga dekhna

Wooww amazing parts.. read 3 parts in a go..

Originally posted by: binuuu

Hihi...i knw diii...

Areh wah...u too love dark stories...

Aapki naani ne sahi kaha diii...he vent out everything through his words...he will regret about this...

I knw sona can never forget his words...those words were danger than poison...

Yess binnudiii mujhe bhi dark stories kuch jyaada hi pasand hai
I love angry young man revenge seeking type heroes
Woh mujhe kuch jyaada hi hot lagte hai 😳

Originally posted by: moonlight3094

Wooww amazing parts.. read 3 parts in a go..

I must say, you've penned down really well.. and the story is just getting more and more interesting.

Now they r married too.. that's awesome!!

Now it's love-hate.. waiting to see who falls for the other in the first ;)

Lol ishwari had her own dose. Dev's gonna regret for forcing sona into the marriage, when he finds she wasn't the reason behind Natasha's disappearance.

Thanks for the pm! :)

Hey thanks dear
Yes finally they are married now
N it'll be interesting to see who falls first

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Tu nahi sudhregi anji
Exams chod yeh padhne baith gayi tu
Haan surprise diya
Actually jaldi likh liya to de diya

Yaar yeh baat sahi kahi tune
Dev ko natasha ko khone se jyaada cheeku se dur hone ka dukh hai
Chot khayi hai to dard to hoga
Aur dard hoga to akele thodi na jhelega

Dont worry sab jaldi sort out hoga
Agla update??????
Bohot jald

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Yeh hui na positvity waali baat
Sahi kahan nafrat itni strong hogi to pyaar kitna gehra hoga

Waise yeh waale update keliye u shd appreciate yourself too
For reasons best know to us 😉

Haan yaar positivity to main doondh hi leti hu...waise b hamare Dev aur Sonakshi lade ya jhagde atlast banenge to Devakshi hi... 😳
It's all ur creativity dear...n u only deserve the appreciation...
Jaldi jaldi karna next wala Bhi. 😊

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Sudhar hi gayi hun di

Ye to exams ki wajah se late aayi nahi to issey bhi kaafi pehle aa jati😉

Aapke upar poora trust hai...aap jaise story chalaoge wese hi acchi lagegi

Arey waah!

Next update fast...😃

Thank you so much

Aap to bhut acche ho😳😊

Haan na nahi to update ke baad turant res aata
Good going anji
Mere upar trust 😭 itni khushi ho rahi hai mujhe

Will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Haan yaar positivity to main doondh hi leti hu...waise b hamare Dev aur Sonakshi lade ya jhagde atlast banenge to Devakshi hi... 😳
It's all ur creativity dear...n u only deserve the appreciation...
Jaldi jaldi karna next wala Bhi. 😊

Haan yeh baat to pakki hai
Jo bhi kare end mein to ek hi honge
Waise agle waale mein bhi aapka support jaroori hai

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Yess binnudiii mujhe bhi dark stories kuch jyaada hi pasand hai
I love angry young man revenge seeking type heroes
Woh mujhe kuch jyaada hi hot lagte hai 😳