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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Keep gracing this page...[DIV]You guys are anyway getting to read in the morning...[/DIV][BR]

yeah ..good night ...ab good morning hum aapki update se karenge

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
yeah ..good night ...ab good morning hum aapki update se karenge

Good girl...😆

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

I am extremely sorry everyone, especially Ankita, this OS is not coming out exactly the way I had expected it to be...

Forgive me already if it doesn't come upto the mark...

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Aapppi🤗 ur message brought a big smile on my face today...it was d first msg i opened tdy n directly landed here...

U again made me speechless...

Tears brimmed in my eyes😭

U made me feel their emotions...my throat was dry all the time...

Sona missed him...what she want all time was dev...but he was never with her..😭😭 she missed him in each phase of her pregnancy...😭

Finally she too talked heart out...

Lack of Communication was their major problem...

Now everything cleared...👏

Was that last chapter aappi???

Wanna read more like family moments...

Thankuu somuchh for writing this appi...

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

It was beautiful Di so many bottled up emotions finally opened both sona and dev accepted their mistakes communication is very important for any relationship to survive healthily and the way SONAKSHI missed him during her beautiful journey of pregnancy was beautifully penned by you so dev asked for a second chance and sona agreed to live all the moments with him again

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
I am extremely sorry everyone, especially Ankita, this OS is not coming out exactly the way I had expected it to be...
Forgive me already if it doesn't come upto the mark...

It's OK Di
I can understand the pressure you are going through with so many demands
You have written What I wanted,I loved it 😃

Edited by Devakshilover - 8 years ago

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Arey waah waah

Aapki update ne to meri morning ko aur bhi good kar diya😃

Di agar yeh upto mark nahi thi...

to aur kya hoga???😲

It is beyond perfection👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

You so beautifully penned down every emotion, every pain...

Excellent⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Issey zada perfect or kya hoga😲😲😲😲

My favourite part is when dev's hand unconsciously came over sona's tummy

that brought tears in my eyes😭😭

dono ne apni mistakes ko accept kiya...

And when sona described dev as his perfect prince charming..

Dev wanted to feel everything

His every lost moment with his wife at the time of her pregnancy till delivery and to see their baby

hold baby in his hands...

So emotional update😭

Every thing is perfect⭐️

Di please is update ko CVs tak pahuncha do...

I want to see this happening in show... not fighting dev and sona

Aisa hi confrontation chahiye

CVs sun lo meri pukar...

Aisa hi kuch de do hume bhi

Aur Aaazeen di ko aap log show ka hi writer bana lo...

faayde me rahoge😉😉

Di ke paas sabki wishlist hai...

to wo wahi dengi what we want

Aazeen di...

You are the best

You are the best👏⭐️⭐️

I hope you like ny lamba sa comment...

once again...👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Superb⭐️⭐️⭐️

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Beautiful so beautiful. I was literally crying. Damn! I loved it so much.

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Rula diya aapne [:^(]
Amazing ...
wonderfully written aazeen [>:D<]
I dunno if even 10% of it dey decide to play out in show where dev and sona have an emotional breakdowm for their pain ...how much i will cry ...i really dreak dat day ...
thanks for pm

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LiveLife321

@LiveLife321

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Aazeen, God bless you dear.👏

You cant even imagine what kind of emotional mess i am right now after reading your OS. Your brilliant piece of writing with my all time favorite song is just the killer combination. Just now in Sam's thread I said, If these 2 keep their fake guards down and have a heart to heart convo then it wont take more than one episode to clear the complete mess. You just gave a proof with your fabulous OS. Cant ask anything more than this. Thank you my dear.

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