OS: Tum Bin Jeeye Jaaye Kaise (Cont. of Tadap Tadap ke)updtd pg-1 23/2

Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Dii aapne mujhe phirse rula diya
Couldn't control myself from crying
This was just beyond words
I don't even know how to appreciate ur writing
Aur jis tarah they kept coming closer to each other
That too involuntarily
👏
But the way sona described him as her Prince Charming was the best
And sona agreed to build that relation back again
And give him the fatherhood he so longed 👏
Thanks for the pm
Apna agla os bhi jaldi update karna

Edited by Soumya21ag - 8 years ago

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Good girl...[LOL]

ohh dat i am [B)]

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sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aazeen02
I am extremely sorry everyone, especially Ankita, this OS is not coming out exactly the way I had expected it to be...[DIV]Forgive me already if it doesn't come upto the mark...[/DIV]

stop being so modest madam ...[LOL] It was even better and emotional dan i was expecting it to be ...i never thot i cud cry by reading abt sona ...but u made me

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cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Very well written Aazeen, its very emotional and heart touching.

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Sharica

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Aazeen...you again made me cry😭

You always do that..you know right...

This is how Sonakshi would have felt without Dev...

From the time they held each others hand till the hug in the last...It was like they are moving towards a new beginning with a clean slate...no more complains and distress, only them, Soha and their love...

Outstanding...

I will be back again...going to read it again...

Will comment again...

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Ashwini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Aazeen👏

Tumne tho rula diya mujhe😭😭

Brilliantly written dear!!

All the emotions...the way you penned them..JUST PERFECT😉❤️

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

😭 you left me crying aazeen
Dev ki tarah mere aansu bhi nahi ruk rahe
It was tht impactful

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Beautiful , Soulful and Emotional

Sonakshi had missed Dev cried in pain for her loss until she was told it would cause danger to the pregnancy resigning she allowed herself to feel the love of Dev growing inside her making her strong with each passing day though she yearned for him though she wanted to believe her pregnancy her family was enough but she missed every moment with Dev

Dev on the other hand listens to every word of Sonakshi from the time they married to the separation and her pregnancy which brings even more pain to him knowing he was not there when she needed his support his love and his care

oh how I wish DevAKshi can have a similar conversation in the future

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