Devakshi FF- Pyar Ke Rang Kuch Aise Bhi(Chapter 14 updated at page 10)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

2728..1113

@2728..1113

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Thank you so much guys to love this story..😊😊

You all are inspiring me. Thank you again...

Quote

2728..1113

@2728..1113

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

I think now it's the time to post the next chapter. So let's start...

Chapter- Five

Sona moved to mama. She helped mama to stand properly. Dev and Tina came out from the car.

Sona: Aap thik hain? Jyada chot to nahi lagi?

Mama: Ha, main thik hoon.

Sona(to Dev): Aap dekh ke gadhi nahi chala sakte? Aisa koyi karta hain kya?

Dev: I am really sorry.

Sona: Sorry! Sorry kahne se kya hoga? Gadhi chalane samay dhyan rakhna chaiye na.

Dev: Main manta hoon meri galati huyi hain.

Sona: Mujhe samajh nahi aata aap jaise logo ko licence dete kyun hain. Aap log to shayad paise dekar hi licence kharid lete hain.

Dev: Dekhiye aisi baat nahi hain. Jaldi jaldi main kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hain.

Sona: Itni jaldi hain toh helicopter se jana chaiye na. Gadhi kyun chalate hain? Aam logo ki jindagi ke saath khel ke kya milta hain.

Dev: Aap baat ko kaha se kaha leke jaa rahe hain. Maine sorry bola na.

Sona: Usse kya hoga? Tomar matha kharap(hindi-tumhara dimaag kharap hain).

Dev: Kya?

Sona: kuch nahi. Agar kuch ho jaata toh?

Dev: Unhe kuch huya toh nahi na.

Sona: Agar hota toh? Aur chot bhi lagi hain.

Dev: Dekhiye, main ek doctor hoon. Aap(to mama) mere saath mere clinic chaliye main dawa de deta hoon.

Mama: Nahi, uski jaroorat nahi hain. Mai thik hoon.

Sona: Nahi chaiye aapki dawai. Main inko kisi "achhe" doctor ko dikhayungi.

Tina was watching this. Before Dev could say anything she said

Tina: Aap inse aise baat nahi kar sakte. Jante hain yeh kitne bade doctor hain. Aur inhe(mama) bhi toh dhyan se chalna chaiye na.

Sona(to Dev): Ek toh aapne galati ki, upar se aapki patni humehi dosh de rahe hain!

Dev and Tina: Patni!?(Tina became happy)

Dev: Kiski patni?

Sona: Aapki.

Dev: Jee nahi, yeh meri patni nahi hain.(Tina became a littile sad)

Sona: Patni nahi hain toh girl friend, girl friend nahi toh kuch aur; jo bhi ho mujhe kya.

Dev:(losing his tolerance) Aap faltu ki bakwaas bandh karengi? Main aapki help karna chahta hoon, aapko help ki jaroorat nahi hain. Maafi mang raha hoon, woh bhi nahi kar rahe aur yehan itna hungama kar rahe hain.

Sona: Aap ki wajah se inhe chot laagi hain, aur main aapko maaf kar doon? Kabhi nahi. Aur yeh hungama mere wajah se nahi, aapki wajah se ho rahi hain.(Looking to the crowd) aap logo ko koyi kaam nahi hain? Ya yeh tamasha dekh ke maaza aa raha hain?

Hearing this, people began to move from the place.

Mama: Sona, ab tu chal. (To Dev)Aap iski baat ka bura maat maniye.

Sona: Aap kya kar rahe hain-

Mama: Tu chalegi?

Sona: Lekin..

Mama make Sona to calm down and they were moving to their home.

After their living, Dev felt relaxed.

Tina: Dekha sir, kitni jiddi ladki hain. Baat manne ko tayar hi nahi.

Dev: Seriously,... hmm.. Lekin unki bhi galati nahi hain. Mujhe hi dhyan rakh na chaiye tha. Ab chalo, tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon. Mujhe bhi ghar jana hain.

Chandni Nivaas

Sona was still irritate to the incident.

Sona: Aap ko jyada dard toh nahi hain na?

Mama: Nahi pagli. Doctor ne dawai di hain na.

Sona: Uss driver ko toh main chodungi nahi.

Mama: Driver! Areh woh toh doctor hain na.

Sona: Doctor unko kahte hain jo logo ki jaan bachate hain. Lekin woh toh...

Mama: Galati kisse nahi hota?

Sona: Woh toh mujhe nahi pata. Main bas itna janti hoon, unki wajahse aapko chot lagi hain. Aise hi kaise maaf kar doon?

Mama: Tu bilkul aapni maa pe gayi hain. Waisa hi gussa, waisa hi jidd.

Sona: Jo bhi ho. Koyi aapko chot pouhchay, woh mujhse bardasht nahi hoga.

Mama: Itna pyar karti hain mujhse. Jab main nahi rahoonga tab?

Sona: Mama, aap please yeh sab baat maat karo. Main bhi dekhoongi kaise ap mujhe chhodke jate ho..

Mama smiled at this...

Before sleep, Sona glance over her report and thinking about Dr. Dev Dixit.

Sona: Ab 1 mahine ek doctor se treatment karwake naye doctor se treatment shuru karna hoga. Dr. Deepak toh aise bata rahe the jaise koyi bhagwaan hain, Woh mujhe thik kar denge wagera wagera.. Lo Sona, ab iss naye doctor ke jhanjhat mein padho. Dr. Dev Dixit...

Dixit House

Aayan: Bhaia, ap ko itni dedh kyun laagi?

Dev: Tu yeh sab chhodh. Yeh bata maa kahan hain?

Aayan: Aapne kamre mein hain.

Dev went to Ishwari's room. Here Ishwai was lying in bed. Neha was sitting beside her.

Dev: Kya hua maa ko?

Neha: Doctor aap hain. Aap baatao.

Dev sat beside Ishwari and checked her blood pressure. P

Dev: Phirse pressure high ho gaya! Kya karte ho aap maa. Khud ka dhyan rakhna chaiye na.

Ishwari removed her hand from Dev's hand.

Ishwari(in law tone): Main thik hoon. Mere liye chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi hain.

Dev: Kaise chinta nahi karenge hum? Agar aap sehat ka khayal rakhti toh, yeh sab nahi hota na

Ishwari: Galati ho gayi mujhse. Mere galati ki saaza mujhe bhugatne do. Tum jao yehan se.

Dev: Aayan, tu dekh maa ke saare dawai hain kya. Jo nahi hain, woh mangwa de na.

Saying so Dev went to his room with teary eyes. He somehow controlled his tears.

That night Dev didn't take dinner with the excuse that he was busy...

Dev was seeing Sona's report which was hand overred by Dr. Deepak.

Dev: Deepak ka bhi naya patient thi. Reports to khaas achhi nahi hain. Lag jao Dev, ek aur naya sorry nayi patient- Ms. Sonakshi Bose...

Author's Note- This is the end of this chapter... Hope you will like it.

Good night guys...😊😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Read all chapters in one go...beautifully written...

feld very sad for dev...finally devakshi met each other...

Waiting for their meeting as doctor n patient...

Continue soon...

Quote

.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I read all the parts in one go...

It was fantasctic...and very intriguing

Pls cont soon

Quote

2728..1113

@2728..1113

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Chapter- Six

Next Day, 8.30 pm

"Tune mujhe yehan bulaya, iss liye aaya hun. Lekin yeh sab main nahi pi sakta."

"Areh, itni si pine se kuch nahi hoga. Try to kar."

"Bunty, Please. Nahi nahi matlab nahi."

"Areh yaar.. Kitna jiddi hain tu. Tera naam Dev Dixit nahi, Jiddi Dixit hona chaiye tha. Kitna funny naam hoga na- Dr. Jiddi Dixit!"

Dev: Tu batayega kya hua?

Bunty: Ek minute. Ek aur bottle order karta hoon.

Dev: Thik hain. Tu yeh sab kar, main toh chala..

Dev was about to leave but Bunty hold his hand and made him sit down.

Bunty: Itne mein gussa kyun hota hain? Baata ta hu. Woh mere boss hain na. Usne aaj mujhe job se nikaal diya.

Dev: Kyun?

Bunty: Kya pataaa... Mujhe kuch..

Dev: Bunty. Bunty, thik se bol hua kya?

Bunty:(came to his sense) Haan! Kya, kya bata na hain?

Dev:(being annoyed) Tere boss ne tujhe naukri se kyun nikaal diya?

Bunty: Woh keh rehethe maine nashe mein aake office mein hungama machaya. Mera yaakin kar, maine kuch nahi kiya.

Dev: Tu kabhi kuch karta-i nahi. Sab toh aapne ap ho jaata hain.

Bunty: Sahi bola. Tu mera saccha dost kar.

Dev: Chup kar. Tujhe maine kitnibaar samjhaya, maat pi yeh sab. Tune meri baat sunna jaroori nahi samjha.

Bunty: Main kya karoon. Koushish toh karraha hoon. Lekin...

Dev: Kab koushish ki tune?

Bunty was loosing his sense. Dev thought that it was not right time to talk with him about this matter.

Dev: Chal, uth.

Bunty: Nahi jaoonga. Main yehi rahoonga.

Dev: Uth tu. Bunty, uth..

Dev forcefully took him to his car.

Bunty: Maine bill nahi pay kiya.(grabbled to his pocket) Aur mere paas toh paise bhi nahi yaar. Yeh toh ghazaab ho gaya..

Dev: Tu chup chap beth yeha. Main bill deke aata hoon.

Dev went to the bar and pay the bill. He was about to leave the bar suddenly dashed with a girl.

Girl: Aah!

They saw each other.

Girl: Aap! Aap ka problem kya hain? Thik se gadhi chalana bhi nahi jante aur thik se chal na bhi.

Dev: Excuse me. Main dekh ke hi chal raha tha.

Sona: Haa, dekh ke chal rahe the, lekin phone dekh rahe the.

Dev: Main toh phone dekh ke chal raha tha, lekin aap? Kal toh itna bhashan de rahi thi. Aur aaj?

Sona: Aaj bhi galati aapki hain.

Dev: Galati aap ki hain. Toh sorry aap bolenge.

Sona: Main kyun sorry bolu? Sorry aap bolenge.

Dev: Main bhi kyun bolu?

Then the manager of the bar came and asked what was happening.

Sona: Inhone mujhe dhakka diya.

Dev: Maine aapko dhakka nahi diya. Aap bina dekhe chal rahe the.

Sona: Aap to-

Manager: Ek minute madam, ek minute sir. Aise chhote mote accident hote rahte hain. Aap dono please shant ho jaiye. Dono ek dusre ko sorry bol dijiye na.

Dev: Fine...Sorry.

Sona: It's ok. and Sorry.

Suddenly Bunty came here.

Bunty: Areh, tu yeha kar raha hain?

Dev: Areh, Bunty. Maine tujhe gadhi mein bethne ko kaha tha na. Kya kar raha hain? chal...

Saying that Dev went away. Sona enterred the bar and called Nitesh to come to the bar.

Returning to the home Sona was telling Mama everything what was happened. She vilified Dev very much. Mama was trying to made her understand that it was not Dev's fault. But Sona didn't listen to him.

Next Day, 6pm.

Sona reached Dev's hospital. She asked receptionist where Dev's cabin was. She moved to his cabin. She enterred the cabin of Dev's assistant.She saw a girl writing something.

Sona: Excuse me, I have an appoinment with Dr. Dev.

The girl raised her head and saw Sona standing. Sona saw that the girl was Tina.

Sona: Aap toh wahi hain na, jo uss din uss driver ke saath thi?

Tina: Excuse me, woh ek doctor hain.

Sona: Whatever. Aap yeha kya kar rahi hain?

Tina: Kaam karti hoon yehan. Aur kya. Aap yehan kya kar rahi hain?

Sona: Kaha na maine. Meri appoinment hain. Dr. Dev Dixit kaha hain?

Tina: Aap unke patient hain?

Sona: Haanji. Abhi aap baata sakte hain woh cabin mein hain ya nahi.

Tina: Woh aandar hain.Aap ka naam?

Sona: Ms. Sonakshi Bose.

Tina checked the list of patients.

Sona: Main andaar jaoon?

Tina: Jee.

Sona moved to his cabin. Tina didn't like her but she didn't know the reason of it.

Sona was enterring Dev's cabin.

Sona: May I come in?

Dev: Yes, come. Please be seated.

Sona sat in a chair.Dev was busy with some reports. He didn't notice Sona. Sona tried to see his face but could not. Dev closed the reports and move to Sona. Sona also saw him.

Dev and Sona: Aap!!

Author's Note: What will happen? What was Sona doing in the bar?? Any gusses...??? Waiting for your comment.

My exam will start tomorrow. So, please wish for me...

Quote

dakshasharma

@dakshasharma

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

All the best for your exams ...

Nice chapter...

Continue

Quote

Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Finally they met as Doctor and patient...waiting fo their normal conversation...

All the best for your exams..👍🏼

Quote

2728..1113

@2728..1113

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Chapter- Seven

Dev's Hospital

Sona: Aap yehan kya kar rahe hain?

Dev: Ek doctor hospital mein kya karta hain? Wahi kar raha hoon.

Sona: Yeh toh Dr. Dev Dixit ka cabin hain na?

Dev: Main hi hoon Dr. Dev.

Sona: Aap!

Dev: Haan. Lekin aap yeha?

Sona: Matlab aap Dr. Dixit ho! Aap mere doctor hain! Aap se main treatment karwaane aayi hoon!!

Dev: Aap mere patient hain? Aap ka naam..?

Sona: Naam janke kya karenge, jab mujhe treatment karwaana-i nahi hain.

Dev: Kamaal ki ladki hain. Ek baar kah rahe hain aap mere patient hain, phir kah rahe hain aapko ilaaj nahi karwaana.

Sona: Mujhe thodi na pata tha ki aap Dr. Dixit hain jo ki ek sharabi hain.

Dev: Main? Sharabi? Main sharab nahi pita.

Sona: Jhoot maat boliye. Aap kal uss bar mein gaye the na. Bar mein log kya karne jaate hain?

Dev: Toh aapko lagta hain main ek doctor hoke sharab pita hoon?

Sona: Bilkul.

Dev:... E-ek minute, shayad aap bhool rahe hain aap bhi kal uss bar mein gayi thi.

Sona: Aap kahna kya chahte ho?

Dev: Yehi ki aap sharab pite ho?

Sona: Chi! Aap kitni ghatiya soch ke insaan hain.

Dev: Main ghatiya soch ka hoon?

Sona: Aur nahi toh kya. Main ek ladki hoke kaise sharab pi sakti hoon?

Dev: Jaise main ek doctor hoke sharab pi sakta hoon.

Sona: Toh aap waha kya karne gaye the?

Dev: Mere dost se milne gaya tha. Aur aap kya karne gayi thi?

Sona: Main toh report ke liye interview lene gayi thi.

Dev: Bar mein!?

Sona: Aap reporter nahi hain, aap nahi samjhenge.

Dev: Aap reporter hain? Aap ka naam Sonakshi Bose hain?

Sona: Nahi.

Dev: Toh pher?

Sona: Usse aapko kya? Maine kaha na mujhe ilaaj nahi karwaana. Main koyi achha doctor se apni ilaaj karwaoongi. So, Dr. Dixit Bye.

Saying so Sona left the cabin. Dev sit down and saying- Aisi ajeeb ladki maine aajtak nahi dekhi.

He called Tina. Tina enterred the cabin.

Tina: Sir, aapne mujhe bulaya?

Dev: Ha, abhi abhi jo patient gayi woh kaun thi?

Tina: Sir, aapki nayi patient Ms. Sonakshi Bose.

Dev: Thik hain. Tum jao.

Tina left the cabin.

Dev: Kitni jiddi ladki hain. Aapne bimari ka ilaaj bhi nahi karwaana. I just hope ki unhe koyi achhi doctor mil jaye.

Chandi Nivaas

Mama: Tu pagal hain? Aise koyi karta hain?

Sona: Main karti hoon.

Mama: Lekin kyun?

Sona: Woh sharab pite hain. Aap jante hain na mujhe sharab pine waale se kitni nafraat hain?

Mama: Lekin unhone toh kaha na ki woh dost se milne gaye the.

Sona: Mujhe unki baat pe koyi bharosa nahi hain.

Mama: Dekh Sona, main kuch nahi janta. Tu kal unke hospital mein jayegi, aur unse aapna ilaaj shuru karwayegi.

Sona: Mama, hume koyi achha doctor mil jayegi.

Mama: Tu chup kar. Aur mujhe Dr. Deepak ka number de.

Sona:(making sad face) Kya karna hain?

Mama: Tu de toh sahi.

Sona dialed Dr. Deepak's number and gave phone to Mama. Mama talked to Dr. Deepak over phone.

Sona: Kya bol rahe the unse?

Mama: Kal main bhi tere saath hospital ayunga. Aur tu office mein baata de ki kal tujhe aane mein dedh hogi.

Sona: Kyun?

Mama: Kal subah hum doctor ke paas jayenge.

Sona: Lekin-

Mama: Tu ab kuch nahi bolegi. Ja sone jaa.

Sona went to her room without saying anything. Mama thought that she was angry with him. He also didn't say anything and moved to his room.

Dixit House

Nikki enterred Dev's room.

Nikki: Bhaiya..

Dev: Haa bol.

Nikki: Aap ke jo unnecessary papers hain, woh dijiye.

Dev: Kyun?

Nikki: Woh maa ghar ki saaf safai kar rahi hain. Toh mujhe bole aapki unnecessary papers, files wagera wagera lene ke liye.

Dev: Thik hain, tu ruk, main laata hoon.

Dev was gathering papers. Nikki was also finding papers. Dev gave papers to Nikki.

Nikki: Bhaia, yeh sab jaroori kagaj hain?

Dev: Nahi.

Nikki: Aur yeh?

Dev: Nahi.

Nikki: Aur yeh?(pointed to Sona's file)

Dev(thinking what Sona said):Nahi.

Nikki took all the papers and about to leave the room. Dev called her.

Dev: Nikki, ruk.

Nikki: Ha?

God knows what Dev thought, he took Sona's file.

Nikki: Aapne toh kaha yeh jaroori nahi hain.

Dev: Aa.. Ha, lekin kya pata jarooraat par bhi sakta hain. Tu jaa ab.

Dev again checked Sona's report... Thinking something he went to sleep.

Next morning

Dev got ready and went to dining. He sat on a chair.

Dev: Bhola bhaia.. Jaldi nashta laaga dijiye...

Aayan went to the hall.

Aayan: Good morning bhaia. Aayan also sat in a chair.

Dev: Yeh, Bhola bhaia kaha gaye?

Aayan: Woh toh ghar pe nahi hain.

Dev: Kyun kaha gaye?

Aayan: Aaj maa ka koyi puja hain, toh woh puja ke samaan laane gaye hain.

Dev: Puja?

Aayan: Pata nahi. Dekhiye na, puja ke liye hume fast rakhna par raha hain.

Dev: Aaj fast hain?

Suddenly Neha and Ishwari came here.

Neha: Tu bhi kisse yeh sab bol raha hain, Aayan? Bhaia thodhi na fast rakh sakte hain.

Dev: Kyun nahi rakh sakta? Sab log rakh rahe hain, toh main bhi rakhoonga.

Ishwari: Kissi ko zabardasti upwas rakhne ki jaroorat nahi.

Dev: Nahi ma. Main rakhoonga.

Ishwari: Neha, main mandit jaa rahi hoon. Tum log aapne kam pe chale jaana.

Dev: Aap mandir akele jayenge?

Ishwari: Nahi Bhola mere saath jayega.

Dev: Main bhi chalta hoon na.

Ishwari:(Strongly) Nahi. Tum aapne kam pe jao. Wahi thik rahega.

Dev: Thik hain.(giving Ishwari some money) Yeh hum sab ke taraf se mandir mein de dena.

Ishwari: Maine hum sabke taaraf se dene ke liye paise le liye.

Dev: Toh kya hua? Yeh bhi lijiye.

Ishwari: Thik hain. Yeh main tumhare naam pe aalag se dungi.

Dev didn't say anything. Actually, what would he say??

Dev:(after sometime) Main chalta hoon. Dev went for hospital.

Aayan felt sad for Dev.

Aayan: Maa, aap ko bhaia ke saath aise baat nahi karna chaiye tha?

Neha: Ab tu maa ko sikhayega, kya karna chaiye kya nahi?

Ishwari: Neha! Aayan, tu college jaa. Dedh ho rahi hain.

Aayan went to his college.

Chandni Nivaas

Sona: Mama, main kya keh rahi thi- aj rehne dijiye na. Aap ko office mein kaam hoga na.

Mama: Sona, tu meri baat samajh kyun nahi rahi? Areh, woh achhe doctor hain. Tu dekh na unke madad se tui ekdom thik hoye jabi(hindi- tu bilkul thik ho jayegi)

Sona: Aisi baat nahi hain. Woh mujhe achhe nahi lagte.

Mama: Tu ekbar aapna ilaaj shuru toh karwaa, agar woh achhe se ilaaj nahi karte phir mujhe bol na.

Sona: Lekin maine unhe kal maana kiya. Agar woh mere ilaaj nahi karna chahe toh.?

Mama: Areh, aisa nahi hoga. Woh bohot achhe hain.

Sona: Aap ko kaise pata?

Mama: Dr. Deepak ne baataya kal.

Sona:(in mind) Kal maine maana kar diya. Agar aj jaungi toh meri toh izzat ka faluda ho jayega... Kya karu ab... Mama toh mujhe leke-hi jayenge...

Mama: Kya soch rahi hain? Jayegi mere saath?

Sona:(unwillingly) Hmm,.. Ami jabo(hindi-main jaungi)

Mama: toh chal, jaldi nashta kar lete hain.

Sona: Haan.

They finished breakfast and left for hospital.