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Chapter- Eleven
Aayan: Aap college mein padhi hain?
Sona: Ha. Tum bhi uss college mein padhte ho?
Aayan: Haa.. Actually, sir ne hume last batch ki students ka photo, unka naam aur result ke baare mein bataya tha. Wahi maine aapki photo dekha.
Sona: Oh, achha. Tum kaunsi subject mein study kar rahe ho?
Aayan: Journalism. Aap bhi journalist ho na?
Sona: Haa.
Aayan: Maine aapke bare mein bohot suna. Humare sir aapki bohot tarif karte hain.
Sona smiled.
Nikki: Inki tarif karte hain, aur aap ki burai..
Sona: Kyun?
Aayan: Aap iski baaton pe dhyan mat dijiye. Yeh toh aise hi bolti rah thi hain..
Nikki: Kya galat bola maine? Last exam mein toh fail hote hote bache hain.
Aayan: Nikki!
Sona:(To Aayan) Kyun, tumhe journalism mein interest nahi hain?
Aayan sat on a sofa near Sona.
Aayan: Hain na! Bohot interest hain. Main ek achha journalist banna chahta hoon.
Sona: Toh phir?
Aayan: Pata nahi... Teachers ke jyada tar lecture mere samajh ke bahar hote hain..
Sona: Tumhe shayad concentration ki jyada zaroorat hain.
Aayan: Shayad.. Agar bina padhe journalist ban sakte, toh kitna achha hota na..
Sona: Bina padhe? Bapre..!!
Aayan: Possible nahi hain na..
Ishwari:(To Sona) Dekha.. Kitna pagal hain mera beta. (To Aayan) Dekh, Sonakshi ko study khatam karke achhi journalist ban gayi.. Aur ek tu hain..
Aayan: Maa., Abhi aap mat shuru ho jao.
Bhola took tea for them. Everyone was talking with a cup of tea.
Aayan:(with a bit hasitation) Woh... Aa.. Aap toh bohot achhi journalist bann gayi hain.. Toh.. Matlab agar aapko koyi problem na ho..
Sona: Kya hua.. Bolo
Aayan: Aap mujhe padha sakte hain..
Sona looked very confused.
Sona: Main..? Main kaise...
Aayan: Please aap mana mat karna.. Please..
Ishwari: Aayan, kya kar raha hain? Woh kaise tujhe padhayegi...? Usse kitna kaam hoga na..
Sona: Haa.. Mujhe bhi yeh lagta hain, main kaise time nikaal payungi?
Aayan: Kyun?
Ishwari: Areh, tu samajhta kyun nahi?
Nikki:(To Sona) Aap mann jaiye na.. Shayad aapke madad se bhaiya ka progress ho jaye...
Aayan: Haa.. Aapko roz aane ki jarurat nahi. Jab bhi aapko time mile..
Sona:(After much thinking) Thik hain.. Main hafte mein atleast 3 din aane ki koushish jaroor karungi..
Aayan: Thank you... Thank you so much.. Thank you..
Ishwari: Lekin tumhe koyi pareshani toh nahi hogi?
Sona: Nahi Aunty ji. Main dawe ke saath toh nahi keh sakti, par agar mere thodhi si madad se Aayan ka faida ho toh mujhe bohot khushi hogi.
Ishwari: Pakka tumhe koyi problem nahi hogi..?
Sona: Nahi Aunty ji.. Aap chinta mat kijiye..
Aayan: Thank you.
Sona: Kitna thanks bologe..?
Nikki: Toh abhi toh aapse roz mulakat hoti hi rahegi na...
Sona: Yeah.. Kaafi dedh hogayi hain.. Mujhe abhi jaana chaiye..
Ishwari: Thodhi dedh aur ruk jao na..
Sona: Nahi Aunty ji.. Aaj nahi.. Main parso aane ki koushish karungi, Aayan. Aaj chalti hoon.
Ishwari: Thik hain.
Sona: Abhi aap jake aaram kijiye aunty. (To everyone) Bye...
Nikki and Aayan: Bye...
Ishwari:(to herself) Achhi ladki hain..

Dev was returning from hospital. Tina was with her.
Tina: Sir, aapse ek baat pucho?
Dev: Pucho..
Tina: Sir, aapka favourite color kya hain?
Dev: Kyun..?(smiling)
Tina: Aise hi puchh rahi thi.. Agar problem hain, toh it's ok..
Dev: Mera favourite... Hmm... Shayad green hoga..
Tina: Green..! Aa.. Yeah, it's a good color..(in mind- Green kaise favourite ho sakte hain...)
Dev: Aur tumhara..?
Tina: Obviously Red..
Dev: Good.
Tina was thinking what would she ask now. She wanted to know everything about Dev..
Tina: Aapka favourite food?
Dev: Maa ke haath ka bana kuch bhi... Areh, Tina woh Ms. Bose ke papa hain na?
Tina looked outside. She saw Sona's Mama standing. It seems that he was waiting to hire a taxi. Dev stopped the car just in front of him. Dev came out if the car.
Dev: Namastey Uncle.
Mama: Namastey.
Dev: Kaise hain aap..?
Mama: Thik hoon.
Tina came out of the car.
Dev: Aap yeha..
Mama: Main toh taxi ka intezaar kar raha hoon. Ek taxi jaane ko taiyar nahi.. Kab se khadha hoon.
Dev: Aise kab tak khadhe rahenge..? If you don't mind, main aap ko ghadh drop kar sakta hoon.
Tina:(in mind- Inhe lift dene ki kya jaroorat hain. Hum dono achhe se jaa rahe the... Bich mein yeh, kabab mein haddi...!!)
Mama: Nahi nahi.. Tum log jao. Mere liye itna taqleef uthane ki jaroorat nahi.
Tina became happy:(kitna samajhdar hain uncle..)
Dev: Iss mein taqleef kaisa..? Aapplease chaliye mere saath. Warna mujhe bura lagega..
Mama: Lekin Beta..
Dev: Please Uncle.
Mama: Thik hain.. Chalo.
Ouu..! Tina's face was just...(hope you all understand😛..)
They sat on the car. Dev was driving.
Dev: Uncle, aap ka office yeha hain?
Mama: Haa. Yehi hain.
Then their normal chichat began. Tina was very irritated. Then Dev asked about Sona.
Dev: Ms. Bose kaisi hain?
Mama: Thik hain. Bas thodhi tabyat kharap ho gayi.
Dev: Kyun, kya hua?
Mama: Kal bahar ka khana kha liya tha. Aur as usual, stomachache...
Dev remembered the scene- they were in the restaurant. Dev smiles a bit. Tina was not hearing them. But she heard that. She start laughing slowly. She hardly control her laughter. Dev understand that and wanted to change the topic.
Dev: Tina, Mr. Samar ko jo mail send karna tha woh kar diya na..?
Tina: Sorry Sir. Main toh bilkul bhul gayi..
Dev: Toh, can you please send it now?
Tina: Yes, Sir.
Dev: Abhi toh Ms. Bose thik hain na?
Mama: Haa, ab thik hain.
They reached Sona's house and came out of the car.
Mama: Thank you beta.
Dev: Itni si baat ke liye thank you nahi bolte.
Mama: Tum log andar chalo na.
Dev: Nahi nahi aaj nahi. Dedh ho gayi. Abhi ghadh jaana chaiye..
Mama: Thik hain.. Lekin aana jaroor.
Dev: Jee bilkul.
Mama: Chalta hoon.
Mama moved to his house. Dev and Tina sat in the car. Dev dropped Tina to her home and reached his home.
Nikki and Aayan was watching movie.
Dev: Areh, tum dono ko koyi kaam nahi hain kya? Jab dekho tab Tv mein ghus jaate ho.
Aayan: Aap aageye bhaia?
Dev: Dekh, aaya hoon ya bahar hoon?
Aayan looked at Dev.
Aayan: Aagaye Bhaia.
Dev and Aayan smiled.
Nikki: Bhaiya, betho na. Dekho, kitni achhi film hain.
Dev: Tu dekh. Achha, maa kaha hain? Unki tabyat thik hain na?
Nikki: Woh aapne kamre mein hogi. Abhi toh maa thik hain. Lekin tabyat thodhi kharap ho gayi thi. Mandir mein senseless hote hote bache.
Dev: kYa?
Nikki: Areh, chinta mat kijiye. Ek beutiful lady ne unhe ghadh le aayi.
Dev: Thank god. Unhe thanks bola na..
Nikki: Haa. Sab kuch bol diya.
Aayan: Aap maa se jaa ke hi puch lijiye na.
Dev noticed that they both are busy in watching movie and had no interest to talk with him. He moved to Ishwari's room. He stood outside of the room and saw Ishwari was talking with Neha. Dev could not decide he would enter or not. However, he didn't enter into the room. But seeing Ishwari, he thought that she is fine. He smiles and moved to his own room.(Oh god! A son who love his mother much, can not ask her about her health...)

Author's Note- Sorry for update late. The last chapter I had not got any comment. Was that too bad?? Please reply to my post so that I can understand how I have written. Your comment is very precious to me...
Edited by 2728..1113 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Beautiful chapter...
So Sona is going to teach ayan..interesting...
Waiting for their real story to start..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
It was Amazing!!
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Read both the parts in one go
I must say they were amazing
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Read both the chappy together
Amazing update
Lovely parallel, both going to eachother's house
Hope the prblm gets solved soon

Could not comment on last two chapters as I was a big busy
Sorry for it
N U r writing really good so keep writing
We r there to read it.
Post the next ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Read both the chappy together

Amazing update
Lovely parallel, both going to eachother's house
Hope the prblm gets solved soon

Could not comment on last two chapters as I was a big busy
Sorry for it
N U r writing really good so keep writing
We r there to read it.
Post the next ASAP.

Please dont say sorry... It happens..😊
Edited by 2728..1113 - 8 years ago
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#47
Chapter- Twelve
Next day of Sona's appointment with Dev
Sona entered Tina's room.
Sona:(trying to smile) Good morning Tina.
Tina: Areh, Ms. Bose! Good morning. Kaisi hain aap? Aapka pet dard thik ho gaya na..?
Sona was surprised to hear that.
Sona: Pet dard! Mujhe..!?
Tina: Maine suna, aapko uss din stomachache ho gaya tha..
Sona: Kya..?
Tina: Areh, aapke-
Suddenly Dev entered the room saying-
Dev: Tina, maine tumhe... (seeing Sona) Ms. Bose, aap? Aaj aapka appointment hain?
Sona: Haa..
Dev: Toh aandar chaliye..
Tina: Haa. Lekin aap bataiye na aapka pet dard thik ho gaya?
Dev hardly control his smile.
Sona:(to Dev) Aap has kyun rahe hain?
Dev: Kaha?
Sona: Maine dekha..
Dev: Aap bhi kaise baat leke padh gayi. Tina, tum yeh files check karlo aur print out nilkaal lena.
Tina: Ok, Sir.
Dev and Sona entered his cabin.
Dev: Please sit down.
Sona sat on a chair.
Dev: Kaisi hain aap?
Sona: Thik hoon.
Dev: Good. Dr. Deepak ne aapko jo medicines recommend kiye the woh thik se le rahi hain na?
Sona: Jee.
Dev: Aapke pas prescription hain?
Sona gave him the prescription, Dev checked it.
Dev: Thik hain. Kuch nayi medicines aaye hain. Maine uss per research kiya.. Woh sab main likh deta hoon. Time pe dawai le lena.
After writing,
Dev: Abhi aap chaliye..
Sona: Kaha?
Dev: Iss taraf aiye..
Sona followed Dev.
Dev: Yeha bethiye(pointing at the bed)
Sona sat on the bed. Dev brings injection.
Sona: Injection!?
Dev: Haa...
Sona: Kyun?
Dev: Kya kyun? Injection lena padhta hain.
Sona: Main thik hoon. Mujhe nahi lena...
Dev: Kyun? Aap ko dar lagta hain?
Sona: Nahi... Bilkul bhi nahi..
Dev: To phir?
Sona stood up: Mujhe kuch kaam hain.
Dev: Ek minute. Pahle injection, phir kaam. Bethiye.
Sona sat down: Lekin..
Dev: Kuch lekin wekin nahi.. Aapna haath age kijiye...
Sona: Ek kaam kijiye. Injection ke aandar jo dawai hain woh mujhe de dijiye, main pee leti hoon.
Dev: Kya!? Aap yeh kya bol rahi hain?
Sona: Please...
Dev: Main bhi bol raha hoon. Please aapna haath age kijiye..
Sona: Dard toh nahi hoga?
Dev: Nahi hoga..
Dev was about to push the injection.
Sona: Ek minute..
Dev: Ab kya hain?
Sona place her hand in her mouth so that her scream can not be heard.
Dev: Yeh kya hain?
Sona:(removing hand from mouth) Aap apna kaam karo na.. and place her hand again in mouth.
Dev pushed the injection. Sona screamed but the sound was not so loud. Dev understood the matter..
Dev: Dekha, dard hua?
Sona: Bohot..!! Aap jhoot bolte hain..
Dev: Main jhoot...!! Aap ne pahle kabhi injection nahi diya?
Sona: Diya tha.. Bachpan mein... Lekin itna dard..
Dev: Abhi thodhisi dard hoga.. Bad mein thik ho jayega..
Sona: Agar nahi hua toh?
Dev: Toh... Aap roz injection lenge. Regular Practice hogi toh dard nahi hoga..
Sona: Ki bolchen asob..??(hindi-kya bol rahe hain yeh sab)
Dev: Hindi, please.
Sona: Aap ka dimaag thik hain? Roz injection...? Huuh!! Actually, mujhe koyi aur doctor ke paas jana chaiye tha..
Dev: Aap aur aapki zidd.
Sona: Dekhiye, main bilkul-
Dev: Isse pahle ki aap mujhse argument shuru kare main ek glass pani pi leta hoon.
Sona: Aap..!! ... Main ja rahi hoon.
Sona stood up and took her bag.
Dev: Ms. Bose! Aap ka prescription...
Sona just snatched it from Dev and went away...
Dev: Bye..

Leaving Dev's hospital, Sona went to Dixit house. Sona entered the house. Nikki saw her entering.
Nikki: Areh, aap aagayi?
Sona: Hi..
Nikki: Hello,.. Bethiye na. Bhola bhaiya, ek glass pani leke aiye na..
Ishwari came to the hall- Nikki, kya hua? Tu aise...(seeing Sona) Areh, Sonakshi... Tum aagayi?
Sona stood up: Namaste Aunty ji..
Ishwari: Haa.. Betho na. Bolo, kaisi ho tum?
Sona: Thik hoon, aunti ji. Aap log kaise hain?
Ishwari: Hum bhi thik hain.
Bhola gave Sona water.
Sona: Thank you... Aayan kaha hain?
Nikki: Bhaiya to so rahe hain?
Sona: Iss waqt?
Nikki: Bhaiya koyi kaam time pe nahi karte..
Ishwari: Tu jaa, usse utha..
Nikki went to make Aayan wake up. Here Sona and Ishwari was talking.
And Tina was trying to spend time with our beloved Dev Dixit..
Sona was teaching Aayan in his room.
Sona: Aayan, tumne kamre ki yeh kya halat bana kar rakh diya..
Aayan: Main thik kar lunga..
Sona: Pakka kar lena..
Aayan: Jee bilkul...
Sona began to taught him. After sometime Nikki entered the room.
Nikki: Kya ho raha hain?
Aayan: Agayi mujhe disturb karne?
Nikki: Main apse baat nahi kar rahi.. Main inse baat kar rahi hoon... (To Sona) Waise... Main aapko kya bulao?
Sona: Jo tumhari marzi...
Nikki: Aapke dost aapko kya kehke bulate hain?
Sona: Mujhe wo log Sona kehke bulate hain.
Nikki: Toh mere liye aap Sona di!
Aayan: Main bhi aapko Sona di bulao?
Sona: Why not?
They were talking. Suddenly, they heard a horn of a car.
Nikki: Lagta hain, Bhaiya aagaye.. Main jaati hoon.
Nikki went away from here. After sometime, she returned to the room with Dev. She was entering saying- Dekho bhaiya, Aayan bhai padhai kar rahe hain. Unki teacher unhe padha rahi hain..
They entered the room.
Dev: Aayan!
Aayan and Sona looked back and saw Dev. Sona was shocked to see him.
Dev: Aap?
Sona: Aap yeha kya kar rahe hain?
Dev: Yeh mera ghadh hain.
Sona: Kya?
Aayan: Aap dono, ek dusre ko jante ho?
Sona: Tumhare bhaiya ko kaun nahi janta? Yeh "bohot badhe" doctor hain na..
Nikki: Aap dono ek dusre ko kaise jante ho?
Sona: Yeh mere-
Dev: Dost! Hum dono dost hain, hain na?
Sona: Dost!?
Dev: Haa.. Hum dost hain.
Aayan: Kya bhaiya... Aapka ek journalist friend hain, aur aapne mujhe bataya nahi..
Dev: Lekin tujhe yeh teri teacher mili kaha se?
Aayan then told him the matter.
Dev: Thik hain, aap dono padhai karo. Chal Nikki.. Hum jate hain.
They left the room.
Sona:(in mind- Yeh Dr. Dixit..! Kitne jhoot bolte hain..)
After two hour, Sona was about to leave.
Sona: Aunty ji, aaj chalti hoon.
Ishwari: Thik hain beta... Tum itni taqleef kar rahe ho..
Sona: Isme taqleef kaisa.. Aayan, lesson sab ready kar lena.
Aayan: Haa ha. Zaroor.
Sona: Bye.
Nikki and Dev came to the hall.
Nikki: Sona di, aap jaa rahe ho?
Sona: Haa.
Nikki hugged her: Bye..
Sona: Aah!
Nikki: Kya hua?
Sona: Nahi kuch nahi.. Bas thodhi chot lag gayi.(Looking at Dev)
Dev sighed.
Ishwari: Itni raat ko tum kaise jaoge?
Sona: Taxi mil jayegi..
Nikki: Aap taxi se kyun jayenge? Dev bhaiya aap ko chhodh denge.. Pata hain maa, Dev bhaiya aur Sona di dono dost hain. Bhaiya, aap chhodh denge na?
Dev: Haa..
Sona: Nahi.. Iski koyi jarurat nahi..
Ishwari: Kyun nahi? Dev chhodh dega tumhe, hain na?(to Dev)
Dev: Haa, zarur..
Sona: Thik hain.
Dev and Sona left and moved to the car.
Dev: Bethiye...
Sona was looking at the car.
Dev: Kya hua?
Sona:(came to her sense) Aap itna jhoot kyun bolte hain?
Dev: Kya jhoot bola?
Sona: Wah! Andaar kisne kaha hum dono dost hain?
Dev: Woh... Sorry.
Sona: Kya sorry? Aapne aisa kyun bola?
Dev: Aise hi..
Sona: Please boliye...
Dev: Dekhiye, agar main unhe yeh batata ki aap mere patient hain, toh woh log aapko sympathy dikhate...
Aap ke zindagi ke liye dukh karte, bechari kahte. Main nahi chahta koyi aapke saath aisa kare. Iss liye kaha ki aap mere dost hain... I am really Sorry for that..
Sona: Aap nahi chahte koyi mujhse yeh sab kahe?
Dev: Nahi.. In fact main nahi chahta koyi bhi kisise yeh sab kahe.
Sona: Aapko lagta hain main yeh sab baaton se affected hongi?
Dev: Mujhe pata hain. 2-3 dino mein main itna samajh gaya ki aapko insab baaton se fark nahi padhta. Lekin mujhe achha nahi lagta. Issiliye... But I am really sorry.
Sona: It's Ok.
Dev: Ab chaley..?
They sat on the car. Dev was driving the car. There was silent in the car.
Dev: Aap aise chup chap kiyun hain?
Sona: Kyun? Main jyada bak bak karti hoon?
Dev: Kam bhi toh nahi karti... Aapki tabyat..?
Sona: Tabyat ko kya hoga? Aap ko aapne treatment pe bharosa nahi hain?
Dev: Main aapka treatment toh 10 saalo se kar raha hoon. Tabyat to thik hoga hi..
Sona:(confusingly) Kya.. matlab?
Dev: Matlab main aapka treatment thik se shuru bhi nahi kiya,,, aur aap keh rahi hain...
Sona: Age se-
Dev: Age se right, then straight and then right again aur aapka ghadh aa jayega.
Sona: Aap ko humare ghadh ka raasta kaise malum?
Dev: Achha, doctor hone ki saath sath ek achha zasuus bhi hoon.
Sona: Aap bolenge?
Dev: Uss din aapke papa raaste mein mile the. Maine unhe lift diya tha.
Sona:(in mind) Papa? Shayad mama ke baat kar rahe hain...
Dev: Unhone hi bataya ki bahar ka khana khake aapka pet dard hua tha...
Sona: Dr. Dixit! Main-
Dev: Aapka ghadh aagaya...
Sona: Huh! Bye.
Dev: Bye...
Sona went to her home. Dev left for his home keeping a smile on his face.

Author's Note- Again sorry for the big late... Ab dekho, Dev aur Sona ek saath chalna shuru kar diya... Let's see what happen next. Wait for next update. And Don't forget to comment...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Nice chapter👏. waiting for next chapter .
Plz update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice chapter...pls update soon this time..
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#50

Originally posted by: Sharica

Nice chapter...pls update soon this time..

Thanks... Pakka this time I will update soon. Keep waiting..

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