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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
I think I should not lost my hope. So I am continuing the story.
Chapter- Two

Dev reached his hospital late. Here Tina was waiting for him. Seeing Dev Tina said,
Tina: Good morning Sir.
Dev: Good morning.
Tina: Sir aap kaha the. Main kab se aapka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Dev: Haan?
Tina: Aa... I mean ek patient aapka intezaar kar rahe hain. Maine aap ko phone bhi lagaya. Lekin phone switch off aaraha tha.
Dev saw his mobile and said,
Dev: Sorry, woh phone ka charge nahi hain. Tum ek kam karo phone ko charge pe laga do, aur woh patient ko mere cabin mein bhej do.
Tina: Ok sir.
Dev give her the phone and went to his cabin. Then patient enterred in the room.
Dev: Good morning.
Patient: Kya good morning! Subah se aapka wait kar raha hoon. Aur aap abhi aye.
Dev: Sorry. Woh aap to jante hain na Delhi ki traffic!(false, remember he woke up late)
Patient: Nahi jante.
Dev: (confusingly) jee?
Patient: Main Delhi ka rahne waala nahi hoon na.
Dev: (trying to laugh) Oh. Achha achha.
Then their chit chat started. Let's see what about Sona.

Here Sona also reached her office late. She was tensed about her boss. She was sure to be rebuked by her boss, Mr. Malhotra. She enterred her office. Her colleague Shipra said ,
Shipra: Sonakshi, sir tumhe andaar bula rahe the.
Sona: To tumne kya kaha?
Shipra: Maine kaha ki tum abtak ayi nahi ho. Toh unhone kaha ki jab tum ajao toh tumhe unse milne kahun.
Sona: Areh, kya kar diya tumne! Sach kyun bola?
Shipra: Toh kya karti?
Sona: Kuch bhi jhoot moot bolna tha na.
Shipra give her a confused look.
Sona: Khayr chhodho. Boss ne kuch bataya kya baat hain.
Shipra: Nahi toh.
Sona:Oh god!
Shipra: Tum jaldi jao na.
Sona: Ha ha. Ja rahi hoon.
Sona was moving to the cabin of her boss. And was murmuring: Hey bhagwan, bacha ley..!! And she enterred the room.
Sona: Sir, may I come in?
Boss: Ha ha. Madamji, aiye.
Sona: Sir woh..
Boss: Kya, aaj phirse late?
Sona: Sir, aap to jante hain na Delhi ki traffic!
Boss: Maza nahi aaya. Roz to ek hi baat batati ho. Kabhi kuch naya bhi lao. Yehan kam karne wale saare log Delhi mein hi rahte hain. Unko traffic nahi pakadti. Sirf tumhei..
Sona: Sir, I am really very sorry.
Boss: Yeh sorry shabd hi-- Suddenly his phone rang. While talking over phone he signed Sona to go back to her work. Sona silently left the cabin. She thanked her god to save her.
In the mid noon.
Sona was moving many places to collect her report. Suddenly Mama called her.
Mama: Hello.
Sona: Ha mama. Bolo.
Mama: Tune khana kha liya?
Sona: Ha mama, bas abhi khati hoon. Aap ne kha liya na?
Mama: Ha. Tu bhi jaldi kha le na.
Sona: ha mama. Kha loongi.
Mama: Aadhe ghante bad mein phone karoonga. Tabtak kha lena. Phir dawai bhi leni hain.
Sona: mama bas karo. Mujhe kam karne do.
Mama: Thik hain. Bye.
Completing her work she took her lunch. Mama called her and remind her to take medicine.

Here Dev was also busy in his work. But nobody remind him to take lunch. At afternoon, Dev felt hungry. So he went to a restaurant and took his meal. He returned to the hospital and saw Tina talking over phone. He rememberred that Tina was in the same position before 30 minuites. Seeing Dev Tina cut the call.
Tina: Sir kuch kam tha?
Dev: Nahi. Tum ne lunch nahi kiya?
Tina: Woh sir. Subah bohot kha liya. Aur main deiting kar rahi hoon na. Toh aab nahi khayoongi.
Dev: Tum aur tumhari deiting..!!

End of the busy day Dev and Sona reached their home. How was the night? Let's see in next chapter..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter- Three
Dixit House
Dev returned his home. There was nobody in the hall. Dev asked bhola and came to know that Aayan and Nikki are in Aayan's friend's home to celebrate 31st night. Dev got fresh and after sometimr he went to the dining room. Here Neha was sitting. Dev sat beside her.
Dev: Maa kaha hain?
Neha: Woh apne kamre mein kharahi hain.
Dev: Acha. Tera kaam kaisa chal raha hain?
Neha: Bure chalne ki koyi wajah toh nahi hain, achhai chal raha hoga.
Dev: Main to genuinly puchh raha tha.
Bhola sreved them dinner.
Dev: Areh Neha, tu itna sa khayegi kya? Thik se khayal rakkha kar apna.
Neha: Mujhe kitna khana chaiye woh bhi aap hi batayenge? Main aapna khayal khud rakh sakti hoon bhai. Bhola bhaia, aap mera khana bhi andaar bhej dena.
Saying so Neha went to his room. Dev was eating silenty. There became whole silence. The silence of Dev's silent cry...

Chandi Nivaas
Sona reached home and saw mama waiting for her.
Sona: Mama, aaj aap itna jaldi aagaye?
Mama: Ha, kuch khaas kam nahi tha, toh aageya.
Sona: Aap bas 10 minuite betho main fresh hoke khana laga deti hoon.
Mama: Khana maine garam kar diya. Tera hi intezaar kar raha tha. Tu fresh hoke aa, sath mein khate hain.
Sona: ok, main bas abhi ayi.
After getting fresh, Sona and Mama were taking dinner and talking. Finishing the dinner, Sona gave mama his medicines and she also took her medicines.
Mama: Ab jaldi so jaa. Kal doctor ke sath tera appoinment bhi hain na.
Sona: Ha, mujhe yaad hain. Bas kuch kaam karna hain, uske bad so jaongi.
Mama: Toh so jana jaldi. Good night.
Sona: Good night.
Completing her work, Sona moved to the window of her room. Cold air was blowing outside. Sona was shivering at this. She was thinking...
Sona(in mind): Kitna shant hain mausam. Bohot andhera hain, bahar. Lekin chand ki thodisi roshni uss andhere ko phika kar diya. Bas tere jindagi mein hi roshni ki kami hain, Sona. Kaha se kaha chali gayi jindagi. Sab kuch badal gaya, phirbi kuch nahi badla. Socha tha jyada din mujhe aise jeena nahi hoga. Koyi to ayega, jo mera haath tham lega. Mujhe phirse jeena sikhayega. Lekin ab phirse wahi andhera chha gaya. Ab to jeene ki ummeed bhi kho chuki hoon. Kal doctor ke saath appoinment hain. Kya hoga doctor se milke? Marna toh hogahi, phirbi shayad kahin na koyi ummeed hain...
Kal naya saal shuru hoga. Lekin mein shayad wahi rahoongi. Andhere se roshni mein aane ki koushish, aur phir andhere mein gir jana... Kash, mere liye bhi naya subah hota...
Sona was tired. She came to the bed and slept soon. The light of her room was still on.

Dixit House
Here Dev was also by the side of window. He was also touching by the season.
Dev(in mind): Kya chand? Haas rahe ho ya ro rahe ho? Rona mat, kal naya saal hain na. Dekho, main bilkul bhi nahi ro raha. Jindagi kitni mushkil hain na. Hum jo chahte hain wohi hume mushkilse milti hain. Kehte hain har pal jindagi aapna rang badalti hain. Toh mere jindagi ka rang kyun nahi badalta?? Parlikh ke ek doctor toh ban gaya. Lekin aaj bhi wahi hoon, jaha pehle tha. Camyabi mere jindagi ki dukh ko chhupa nahi paya. Ek chhoti si nadani ne mujhse meri papa, meri jindagi, mera hasta-khilta parivaar chhin liya. Maine sab kuch kho diya. Pata nahi mujhe kabhi bhi khoya hua sab kuch milega bhi nahi. Kab tak yeh bojh aapne kandhe pe ghumoonga..? Mere saare dukh dard share karne ke liye bas tuhi hain(looking at the moon). Maine ab tak ummeed nahi chhodhi, shayad sab thik ho jayega. Phirbi darr lagta hain, kahin maa ke pyar ke bina yeh jindagi na guzr jai.. Kitna pyar karti thi na maa!! Aur ab..
Kal se naya saal shuru hoga. Naya subah, naya suraj- sab kuch naye se shuru hoga. I just hope mere jindagi ka bhi naya shruwat ho jay..
Aayan called Dev.
Dev: Ha bol.
Aayan: Bhaia.. 12 baj gaye. Happy New Year!
Dev: Happy New Year.
Aayan: Bhaia, hold karo. Nikki ko bulata hoon.
Nikki: Happy New Year, bhaia.
Dev: Happy New Year, pagal.
Nikki: Bhaia, maa aur didi aur ha bhola bhaiya ko bhi bulaao na. Unko bhi wish karna hain.
Dev: Woh log to so gaye.
Nikki: Bad luck. Anyway, bye Bhaia.
Dev: Bye. Party enjoy karna.
Nikki and Aayan: Obviously, bhaia...
Dev: Bye.
N&A: Bye. Dev went to the window.
Dev(to the moon): Mere dost chandni ji.. Happy New Year

Author's Note: So bye friends. Good night. And pray for Dev & Sona so that their wish can fulfill.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
All 3 updates are very nice and it looks interesting...
Dear whenever you update your chapter..edit your subject as well...Like Chap 1 updated and page number of that chapter...

With this subject no one will get to know that this is a FF(fan fuction) and hence getting ignored...

Change subject to FF (then your title of the story) then chapter no and page no ( change it with every update) and prepare an Index as well on page 1 for new readers in case they have not read earlier chapters...It will be easy for them to see hiw many chapters have been updated with page numbers...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
First of all thanks to sharica di to instruct me. So Now Im continuing the next chapter.
Chapter- Four

Like every morning Dev woke up and reached to the hospital with a sad mood. Sona reached her office early and her boss astonished to see this.😆
Dev enterred his cabin and surprised to see his table. There was many colours of rose in some bouquets. Dev called Tina.
Tina- May I come in, sir?
Dev- Yes, come. Tina, yeh sab kya hain? Kisne rakha yeh flowers yehan per?
Tina- Sir apko phool bohot pasand hain na.
Dev: Ha, lekin yeh sab kiya kisne?
Tina: Woh, sir.. M- mujhe laga aaj new year hain toh apke liye phool leke aayun. Shayad aapko achha lage.
Dev(trying to smile): Thik hain. Thank you. Tum yeh sab mere car mein rakhwa do, kaam ke time main patient ayenge, yeh phool yeha rakhna thik nahi hoga.
Tina: Jee sir.
Tina left the cabin taking the flowers.
Tina:(muttering) kya hua kuch samajh mein nahi aaya. Dev sir ko yeh sab achha laga ya nahi. Unhone thanks to kaha, smile bhi kiya. Toh shayad achha laga(in a happy tone). Great, Tina. Aise hi lage raho. Ek din toh woh tumse pat jayenge. Hayyee mere cute Dev sir..!!
Dev became busy with patient.

Here Sona was also busy. She finished her work early as she had a appoinment with doctor. Mama reminded her about that. At evening Sona left for the hospital.
Yes, it is the hospital of Dev's father. Sona was under treatment of Dr. Deepak Shasthri. Dr gave her report and checked up. Report was saying that Sona's condition is little better than last week. But that is not satisfactory.
Dr. Deepak: Dekhiye, aapke haalat pehle se bohot better hain.( saying lie to give her courage)
Sona understand it but didn't say anything about it.
Dr suggested her to take medicine time to time, to keep chilly mood etc etc many thing. He also told her that he had got a job in a good hospital in Dubai. So this is his last meeting to Sona. He also mentioned that he will hand over Sona's report to Dr, Dev Dixit and she will be under his treatment. Dr. Deepak also wished Sona for her better future and to come round soon. He praised Dev highly saying that he is the best doctor in this hospital. He(dev) joined this hospital 5-6 months before but getting good response to the patients. Dr. Deepak assured Sona that she has nothing to worry. She will come round soon with Dev's help.
By this Sona left the hospital. Dev left the hospital just after Sona leave.
Sona came out to the hospital and saw mama waiting for her.
Sona: Aap yehan kya kar rahe ho?
Mama: Tujhe lene aaya hun.
Sona: Lene aaye hain! Main chhoti bachi hun kya?
Mama: Jee. Aap bachi-hi hain. They two smiled at this.
Mama: Maine socha tere doctor se baat kar loon. Toh aagaya.
Sona: Woh toh ab iss hospital mein nahi rahenge.
Mama: Kya baat kar rahi hain tu. Aise kaise chalega. Aise bich mein-
Sona: Mama mama. Shant raho. Unhone meri report kisi aur doctor ko hand over kiya, aur kaha hain yeh iss hospital ka best doctor hain.
Mama: Woh sirf kahne ki baat hoti hain. Mujhe unse milna hain.
Sona somehow managed her mama. She said everything to mama what the doctor said. Mama was annoyed because there was no rickshaw.
Mama: Ek rickshaw nahi milrahi.
Sona: Achha hain. Issi bahane aapki walk bhi ho jayegi.
Mama: Kya matlab? Tu mujhe samajh ti kya hain? Main ghar tak chalke nahi jaa sakta?
Sona: Jaa sakte ho?
Mama: Bilkul!
Saying that Mama started walking in a good speed. Sona was also walking and laughing to see his condition. Suddenly a car pushed Mama. Sona screamed: Mamaaa!!
Mama fell down to the road. The car stopped. Many people made crowd to the place...

Sooo what happened next? To know the answer you have to wait for the next chapter...😛😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Welcome naya sadasya!

🤗🤗
What's ur name 27118?!😲😆

Darling koi aise namm puhcta hai kya?
Obvious ye no. uska naam nahi hai!
Tumi ekdom boka!

Btw, Welcome to the Forum Dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Darling koi aise namm puhcta hai kya?
Obvious ye no. uska naam nahi hai!
Tumi ekdom boka!

Btw, Welcome to the Forum Dear!


Thank you sooo much for welcoming me..😊😊😊 BTW, aap logo ko story kaisa lag raha hain??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Nice chapter again...now De and Sona will finally meet.
Is that Dev driving that car???

Waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Sharica

Nice chapter again...now De and Sona will finally meet.

Is that Dev driving that car???

Waiting...

Hmmm... Time will answer your question sharica diii😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Welcome ji. I m also new here. I love to read stories in forum.
But I had never tried to write any update.but you tried and wrote such a beautiful story .so keep it up n continue with this.
Update soon... Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Hiii
Welcome to the forum
Bohot hi acche se likha hai aapne
Well.done and continue soon

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