Devakshi FF- Pyar Ke Rang Kuch Aise Bhi(Chapter 14 updated at page 10)

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Hello guys.. I am a new member and this is my first story on Devakshi. As this is my first story, so if there is any mistake please rectify that. Hope you will like the story. So let me start..
Pyaar Ke Rang Kuch Aise Bhi

Introduction of characters: Page 1
Chapter-1: Page 2
Chapter-2: Page 2
Chapter-3: Page 2
Chapter-4: Page 2
Chapter-5: Page 3
Chapter-6: Page 4
Chapter-7: Page 4
Chapter-8: Page 5
Chapter-9: Page 5
Chapter-10: Page 6
Chapter-11: Page 6
Chapter-12: Page 7
Chapter-13: Page 9
Chapter-14: Page 10

Introduction of characters

Dr. Dev Dixit- A tall, handsome, smart and young doctor. He loves his family & profession. He lost his father in childhood. He thinks that life is very difficult. Recently he has completed his course and joined his father's hospital as a cancer specialist.

Ishwari Dixit- Dev's mom. She is well educated and lives with her children. She loves her child than anything. But doesn't care for her elder son Dev. Because she thinks that Dev is responsible for her husband's death.

Neha Dixit- Dev's younger sister. She has comleted her study and joined a college as a lecturer. She also thinks that Dev is responsible for their father's death.

Aayan Dixit- Dev's younger brother. He is cool, jolly and obviously handsome. He is competing his course on journalism.

Nikki Dixit- Dev's youngest and lovliest sister. She is very fun loving. She seems Aayan to be her enemy as they quarrel almost every time.

Sonakshi Bose- A pretty, smart and intelligent journalist of a newspaper. She loves her life and family. But scares to love someone else because she has a bitter past. Unfortunately she is a patiant of brain cancer.

Baldev Bose- Sonakshi's mamaji He is a government worker.He is the only person in Sonakshi's family. Sona is his life.

Author's Note: Aj ke liye itna hi.. Story will be updated soon. Kal se mera exam shuru ho rahe hain. Mere liye pray karna sab log...
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Ye kya ... pyar ke khaali rang bhi 😆😆
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I am sorry... galati se story ka naam send kar diya.. I am a new member, so mistake ho gayi.. sorry
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Originally posted by: keershri

Ye kya ... pyar ke khaali rang bhi 😆😆


To define Akelapan maybe😆😆

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I am sorry... galati se story ka naam send kar diya.. I am a new member, so mistake ho gayi.. sorry


koi baat nahi.😃 Welcome to the forum!🤗
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Naam aur pata?
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Welcome dear...
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Pyar ke Rang Kuch Aise Bhi- Chapter 1

Dixit House.
7am. The alarmed rang. Dev stopped the clock. Sometimes later the alarm clock again rang.
Nikki was knocking the door.
Nikki- Bhaia, aap uthe ke nahi?? Bhaia..
Dev became so disturb at this. Nikki was knocking the door and shouting "Bhaia."
Dev: Haan.. Baba uth gaya hoon main. Ata hoon.
Dev opened the door.
Dev: Kya huya? Aise koyi daarwaza khatkhata ta hain kya?
Nikki: Sorry.. Lekin kya aapko pata hain kitne baj rahe hain?
Dev ghadhi dekhke shock ho gaya.
Dev: Oh god! 9.30 baj gaye aur tune mujhe abhi jagaya?
Nikki: kya karu, main khud bhi abhi abhi uthi. Uthte hi maa ne mujhe aapko jagane bhej diya.
Dev: Kyun?
Nikki: kyunki maa humare liye matlab mere aur aap ke liye naashta rakhke bethi hain. Woh bhi abtak kuch nahi khayi.
Dev: Tujhe pehle batana chaiye na. Yehaan khadhe khadhe bak bak kar rahi hain.
Nikki: Maine kya kiya.!? Aap hi neto-
Dev: Han bas bas.. Tu ja aab mujhe tyar hone de.
Nikki went to dinning room. Dev got ready in 15 minutes. Then he came to dinning room and saw that Nikki was eating and his mother was sitting beside her. Dev sat in a chair.
Dev: Good morning maa.
Ishwari not noticing him said to the servant-
Ishwari: Bholaa, jaldi bhaiya ke liye naashta leke aa.
Bhola: Han, maaji. Abhi aya.
Ishwari: Tum log khao main aapne kamre mein jarahi hoon.
Bhola came with breakfast for Dev and said
Bhola: Maaji, aapke liye bhi naashta laga doon?
Ishwari: Nahi. Thodhi dedh bad mera khana mere kamre mein bhej dena.
Bhola: Ji maaji.
Ishwari went to his room. Dev was not affected by all this as it is his daily habit.
Dev: Aayan aur Neha kaha hain?
Nikki: Nehadi to kam pe gaye hain. Aur Aayan bhaia!Unka bohot kam hain na aaj kal! Thodhi dedh pehle hi nikal gaye.
Dev: Aayan ka bohot kam hain! Kya kam hain?
Nikki: Ab woh to unhi ko malum. Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi ata.
Dev: Chal. Main nikaal ta hoon. Jaldi khana khatam kar. Itna khayegi to chal nahi payegi.
Nikki: Bhaiya! Aap ko dedh ho rahi hain na, jaiye aap. Mujhe khane dijiye. Bye.
Dev: Bye.
After breakfast, Dev went to hospital.
This is what happened every morning in Dev's life.


Chandi Nivaas.
Sona wake up early in the morning. She got fresh and went to kitchen. She makes breakfast. Suddenly the door bell rang. Sona went to the door and opened the door.
Mama: Areh itna dedh koyi lagata hain darwaaza kholne mein?
Sona: Maine kahan dedh lagaya? Yeh boliye na ki aap thag gaye ho.
Mama:(entering to the hall) Kisne kaha main thag gaya hoon? Dekh, I am fit and fine.
Sona(smiling): Han han, woh to dikh hi raha hain.
Mama: Ab tu kya mujhe dekhte hi rahegi ya chaye vaye kuch pilayegi bhi.
Sona: Pilaongi na. Pilaungi, khilaungi sab karoongi, pehle aap fresh ho jao.
Mama: De na. Baad mein fresh ho jata hoon na.
Sona: Mama please. Aap jao jaldi. Mujhe bhi office jana hain.
Mama: Tu bhi na bohot zuloom karti hain mujhpe.
Sona: Areh, mama ho mere. Itna zoolum karna to banta hain na.
Mama went to washroom smiling. After sometime, Sona and mama began to eat breakfast.
Sona: Oh god! Aaj to pakka mujhe dant khani padegi. Main chalti hoon.
Mama: Pura khana khatam to kar ke ja.
Sona: Waqt nahi hain. Main jati hoon. Sona was leaving and said- Aap waqt pe office chale jana, lunch box mein tiffin pack kar diya wahi khana; bahar ka khana chhuna bhi mat. Main ja rahi hoon. Byee.
She was leaving suddenly turn back and said
Sona: Aur haan, dawai leke hi office jana. Ok bye.
Mama: Han. Sambhal ke jana.
Suddenly Sona stumbled with the door.
Sona: Aaoch!!
Mama: Areh kya hua?
He went to Sona: Tu thik hain na?
Sona: Han, main thik hoon. Aap yehan kya kar rahe ho. Jaldi naashta karo. Bye.
Mama: Kitni bar bye bolegi!
Sona: Ok sorry. Ab to finally bye.
Sona went to her office.
That is the picture of morning in Dev and Sona's life.
Author's note- please mere pehle story ka pahla chapter kaisa laga bata na. Waiting for your comment. Good Night.
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I really can't understand you like my story or not😕. There is no comment on my first chapter. How can I understand my concept is good or bad. If you like story please tell, if you don't like then obviously tell me. Please Please and Please. I am really confused that should I continuo or not.🤔 If you notice this post please response. If you forbid me I won't continuo. But don't keep silence. It's a request to all of you..

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