SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 39

He has to catch up for the last 7 years...The bond cannot happen overnight. It will happen over time...

I am glad you are enjoying reading it.

Waiting for next update

Res

First question- how far a mom's insecurity goes? I see no difference between Ishwari and another mil of another show who has some vamp like BG music going in. Both thinks they are doing right. But problem with Ishwari is it's not usual oh she's not fit to be my bahu MO. It is more creepy and disturbing. I thought you will send her to assylum😆 but realization came from GKB which was surprising. And made sense. She kinda pushed and egged ishwari's actions and watching her turned out biggest shock to her. GKB all goody goody eh. In show too I feel while she may not be affectionate or loving toward Elena but she did accept her. The days of her plotting and thinking to throw her out is behind her. Or maybe it never crossed her mind.

Soha is really cute. There was this thread about kids upbringing and it made some points about how fast a seemingly normal kid in s loved family grew up and lost her innocence as opposed to Golu who acts like his age. Now I think if being mature is like her then soha any day over a normal kid. She called dev, initiated the step to know her dad. The whole restaurant scene is something I really want to see on screen (fingers crossed that CVs stalk this place eh?) And though I jumped in between I absolutely loved how you met dev Soha early in os, cleared out everything and gave them a fresh start. Which we should watch as opposed to faltoo ka tashan and childish scenes. Let the two grow and show us some love. No all bakwas🥱 And how beautifully you showing growth of dev, if this is how they showed devakshi we wouldn't mind seeing them reunited once again.

Next Ishwari and sona plz. Or maybe Sonas parents and ish. And mamaji finally said something sensible😆

first of all , a big bow for the subtle narration. its amazing. i read it like 20 times within the last 2 hrs.

how do i satisfy my craving heart,when your narration is so wonderful.

your writing is like that wine, the more we have, the more we yearn for it. .. hope you have plans to extend this further.

OH MY GOD you're so sweet and kind and that was hella flattering, thank you so much! I may be young and ironically much older in my mind but naah I have my moments of sheer madness. Fun fact, I am possibly the clumsiest you've ever seen haha. I literally tripped over nothing once and tbh the embarrassment hurt more than anything 😆😆 But damn that was really kind. I think you did read my rant of people calling Shruti a chipkali, albeit for fun but still the double standards couldnt be any more real. Both of your writings are a glorifying wipe out of the bullshit CVs proudly throw at our faces. Such a sophisticated and smooth set of words that express a whole new world with mature dynamics between these very realistically vulnerable characters that exploits their grey shades yet amplifies their goodness. I CANNOT WAIT for the update so hope its soon!!!! Again, love y'all ❤️

That line from the last update that carried onto this one " you got your son, sona got her daughter, what did I get'...it just made me so sad and I really felt for dev...

There would be anothet to discuss mistakes, fights and faults...at this moment, I was so happy seeing thr the father daughter duo just be...

That moment wen sona clicked a picture of them was also very special...

I wish I cld better articulate how special this update was...but well I'm not the writer ;)

Thanks again for this one guys...keep writing :)

Ohhhk I just clicked on the link read it in one go, commented...I don't know that you guys are writing together...though somewhere I thought Suja's style has changed...appreciate your efforts...good going...pl lend tinyminy part of your creativity to the CVs