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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
I'm beyond obsessed with such a serene write up and so awfully heartwarming I mean for real take a bow you two talented as f people!!!!! Such a wonderful fictitiously inviting and totally unbiased work of creativity. Love you guys!

Wow... coming from you it means so much. When someone as young as you writes so well, it is humbling to actually read these words by you.

I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much and God Bless you my dear.

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Drcs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#372

Why this suja? My eyes moistened by the time I reached the last para...YOU have a knack lady...I somehow managed to get out of my addiction of KRPKAB...now you hooked me up again...this is not fair...I loved it will be an understatement...now you know what will happen with the same enthusiasm we will wait for the father-daughter milan...you have set the bars sooo high that if the CVs messup it will be great disappointment...

Dev carried Golu in caveman style you know whatflashed in my mind😉😆😆...was imagining the father-daughter dialogues...it will be a treat to watch...see again back to square one

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Aww ...this is so cute!!!!!!!!!!
Let me yell u I'm a big fan of urs
The way u write is awesome
I wish dev soha meet in the show is just like the way u hv imagined it to be...if its evn 1% of that thn i would say its worth it

Thanks for d pm gal

Glad you enjoyed it my dear. Suvika wrote out that part brilliantly. The hesitation and the awkwardness of the meeting comes out so beautifully.

In the meanwhile, in the serial... If only...

Edited by fanktlk - 8 years ago

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Suvika.

I think her husband is off with the router. We'll get her comments after she reaches work. 😆

Oh well... Will wait!!

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: Drcs
Why this suja? My eyes moistened by the time I reached the last para...YOU have a knack lady...I somehow managed to get out of my addiction of KRPKAB...now you hooked me up again...this is not fair...I loved it will be an understatement...now you know what will happen with the same enthusiasm we will wait for the father-daughter milan...you have set the bars sooo high that if the CVs messup it will be great disappointment...

Dev carried Golu in caveman style you know whatflashed in my mind😉😆😆...was imagining the father-daughter dialogues...it will be a treat to watch...see again back to square one

Oh well I am just going to assume you meant the both of us...

We can see where the CVs are headed so we couldn't resist writing the next part... I am glad you enjoyed...

Edited by fanktlk - 8 years ago

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#376

I just love to read...u just go on writing and I will read...superbly written. ...I super like the plot of mutual consent of office sharing rather than what's being currently shown...also Dev and Doha scenes r to die for...loved them...love u both...pls pls pm me ur next

Luv,M

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Drcs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#377

@fanktlk did you write or Suja? I got a PM from Suja, I thought she has written it...I am confused now...

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

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Posted: 8 years ago

#378

Awesome update dear 👏

Its sad Dev is trying to bond with his own daughter but it doesn't matter because it seems Soha is already in love with her dad by now..

I love the last line

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Drcs
@fanktlk did you write or Suja? I got a PM from Suja, I thought she has written it...I am confused now...

Oh this was written by both of us. We both write parts of the the chapters now... and leave it for you to guess who wrote what...

😉😉

The first Dev Soha conversation was written by Suvika. The next part, Dev - Sona conversation and Dev - Soha second meeting was written by me...

Happy Reading!!

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: Mohi99
I just love to read...u just go on writing and I will read...superbly written. ...I super like the plot of mutual consent of office sharing rather than what's being currently shown...also Dev and Doha scenes r to die for...loved them...love u both...pls pls pm me ur next
Luv,M

Mohi, thanks a million.. Now that's a tough demand to fulfill... but I assure you we will try and write as much as we can... else you can always fall back on Suvika's book... for more interesting readings.

Funnily both the Dev Soha scenes were written by different people... So if you found continuity in the conversation... We are honoured!!