SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14

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Tia.0

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Posted: 8 years ago

#241

You guys are incredible. Excellent, excellent three shots. But the final shot has to be Suhana and Dev's meeting

I wanted this talk to happen when they broke up. I wanted everything to come out in open and them to accept the reality or walk away. But you guys made me happy with this writing.

I love a good story telling and this is an excellent writing.

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Tardis

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Posted: 8 years ago

#242

Oh my God, I am smitten by your writing😳😊...

Ishwari is a character that I never sympathize with; I never seem to understand why she behaves in such a creepy manner regarding Dev😕. The mother almost ruined her son's life!.. And you guys did such a marvelous job! 👏... I at least understand the roots of her insecurities, though I still dislike her. All credits your amazing writing skills.👍🏼... And I really loved the Tulsi line😳😊

I find Dev complex like a puzzle and simple and clear as water at the same time. Being a girl, Sona is a home territory for me; I relate to her and understand her completely. I loved Sona and Dev's conversation - calm, mature. It is good that they cleared out what they thought to each other. But I would have loved even more if Dev said sorry Sona at least once (she deserved it!) for not standing up for her whenever his family taunted her. Those taunts must have bruised her self-esteem numerous times. I wished Dev would also feel guilty for not being there for his pregnant wife, especially after hearing her outburst. (I seem to have lots of expectations from Dev😆). Sona is still in dark about Vicky and Mami's manipulation.

And, oh... I loved the ending absolutely.👏... Miss Suhana Bose calling up Mr. Dev Dixit, her dad. (Would she call him Baba or Papa?🤪).

Can we expect a Part-4 with Dev-Suhana, Ishwari-Sona? (Or a conversation between Ishwari's late husband and Ishwari, dream or something)...And Sona doesn't have to become Dixit bahu so soon..😛

Do write more.😃

- Tia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Pramila.harish
You guys r really excellent on writing.
Is it possible for you guys write Dev realising his mistakes.

I felt your writing again to put sona to go understanding trip. We had seen enough sona understanding. My wish is to see Dev understanding sona at least once.

As we know why sona was all into being best bahu. Bcoz she knew how much eshwari was important to him. I don't think Bcoz she loved eshwari and doing all that to please eshwari.

I agree it was mistrust from sona on Dev regarding pre-nup and throwing bejoy family out of their house. But those cruel words used by him was not sona's imagination. How she will erase those harsh words, firstly he told her get out from his house and secondly such a cruel words when he knew she cannot become mother.

All I wish is at least Dev realise how much he hurt sonakshi than sona thinking about even she is responsible for breakup.

I am sure cvs will take your route as they don't want any redemption from ML.

Since it is not going to happen in this serial.. I just wish of you guys could come up with Dev realisation as a separate os. .you guys are just amazing writers. May be my wish will be fulfilled.

Really loved this OS. But my gripe with the last part was just this.

why not someone make Dev understand Sona, once...
Waiting for that OS. this OS does seem focused on Dev's thought process and his expectations. I still maintain, Dev needs to appologise for pulling Sona into a near -abusive marriage.

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surbharati

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Loved this OS...
This serial really needs session of can we talk (all of them..)

Please continue soon

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#245

@IFfreak , @Pramila

Thank you for analysis but let me just request you to please do not look at this OS as Dev Sona reunion as that is far from possible at this stage.

Do you really think this Dev will say sorry. I also mentioned in one of the comments that Dev did not say Sorry.

Dev pre leap was very good with words. I want you for myself. I need you. You complete me. I will everything in my power to keep you in my life.

We know what value his words had. The Dev we see post leap believes in action.

At the end of the first part Dev sent Sona flowers which he did previously when he had to say Sorry. He acknowledged he made mistakes but he didn't merely say Sorry.

This Dev won't simply because his Sorry has absolutely no value.

Dev blamed Sona but by the end of Part 1 Dev saw Sona as a victim. He stormed to his mother and confronted her. He simply passed the blame. By then he acknowledged he made mistakes but he did not accept his role in the debacle.

Part 3 of Dev Sona conversation. He doesn't demean his mother. But the Dev who threathened Sonakshi with lawyers wasn't there. Never once he said trust me. He acknowledged his words had no meaning so he knows why Sona didn't trust him but his feelings should have value.

This is more maturity than you can expect from Dev that too without anyone guiding him.

Part 3 Dev Ishwari conversation in very significant in two ways.

Sona has been predominantly the one to absorb blame. Ref to Saurav returning the Shagun ki Car. She says I might not have expalined properly. While Dev and Ishwari have always looked for people to blame. That is their character.

When Ishwari tries to begin the conversation, Dev warns her if this is another blame Sonakshi session I am not interested. This is similar to Vicky warning GKB if bahu goes so will I.

And if you look at the conversation Ishwari never once blames Sonakshi after that.. She only spoke of her role.

Here Dev too shifted the blame to Ishwari for ruining his marriage but there is no acknowledgement of his own actions.

Ishwari too then shifted the blame to Dev and questioned him about his role and asked him why he didn't take a stand. Till now Dev only looked at Sona being responsible and then Ishwari but when Ishwari questioned him is where Dev actually begins to realize his own role in the fiasco.

Saying sorry to Sonakshi won't cut it out. I did not want him to say sorry and Sona to forgive him. It really wouldn't make sense. When he spoke to her acknowledging that he blamed her.. he was trying to earn her trust. He didn't succeed hence the condition " My roof, my presence" . But that was the first step.

The path of redemption is a long one. If we had continued this OS, Dev would act, earn his trust and then apologize. Achche Achche pyaare pyaare words won't do the trick this time.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: tia.o
You guys are incredible. Excellent, excellent three shots. But the final shot has to be Suhana and Dev's meeting
I wanted this talk to happen when they broke up. I wanted everything to come out in open and them to accept the reality or walk away. But you guys made me happy with this writing.

I love a good story telling and this is an excellent writing.

Thanks a million Tia... But I have already written a note on Page 32 why we won't be taking it forward.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Pramila.harish

- here you are interpreting Dev was scared of loosing sona. So he was making all excuse for not taking money. But i could not interpret that way. If that was the case he would never said get out. he blamed her that she pushed his mother and told her get out. When she was double checking was he really meant for her to go..He said just go. And whatever sona spoke was rightly so. Why cannot she spk about her father's honor. Whatever bejoy said..It was bejoy said not sona. So I could not even think sona would leave him. According to me it was plain ego from Dev and eshwari that how could she return such a huge money. So they turned it other way like dishonor eshwari. I am being an accountant I understand only face value and to understand implicit value need brain. It is already in expiry status😆. But nice to know your point of view though I disagree with it.

I just caught up with that episode yesterday so it was kind of fresh in my mind... But never the less, nice to see another point of view.

- I read through it and loved it the way sona vented out. But I want badly Dev realising his mistakes. .

Dev's realization will come in parts. Only when Ishwari questions his own role does he start thinking on those lines..Plus the number of blunders he has made will need 2 posts only to make him realize.

know story will not move unless sona give option. But before that I want Dev to realise and sorry for his harsh words. Same time I don't want sona feel guilt in any point as I feel she was always correct..

You guys have amazing at story writing...loved to read more of yours.

Sona is far from guilty. Sona doesn't trust Dev or his family. He will have to earn her trust. Hopefully the CVs show us that,.

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: surbharati
Loved this OS...
This serial really needs session of can we talk (all of them..)

Please continue soon

Thanks bharati but this OS is completed. No more can we talk sessions. 😊

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara
Oh my God, I am smitten by your writing😳😊...

Ishwari is a character that I never sympathize with; I never seem to understand why she behaves in such a creepy manner regarding Dev😕. The mother almost ruined her son's life!.. And you guys did such a marvelous job! 👏... I at least understand the roots of her insecurities, though I still dislike her. All credits your amazing writing skills.👍🏼... And I really loved the Tulsi line😳😊

The "Mujhe Tulsi jaisi bahu chahiye"was actually in the serial in one of the earliest episodes when Ishwari didn't want Dev to marry Sameer's sister. Saloni I think. Just decided to build on that so Ishwari's insecurities from the beginning can be highlighted.

I find Dev complex like a puzzle and simple and clear as water at the same time. Being a girl, Sona is a home territory for me; I relate to her and understand her completely. I loved Sona and Dev's conversation - calm, mature. It is good that they cleared out what they thought to each other. But I would have loved even more if Dev said sorry Sona at least once (she deserved it!) for not standing up for her whenever his family taunted her. Those taunts must have bruised her self-esteem numerous times. I wished Dev would also feel guilty for not being there for his pregnant wife, especially after hearing her outburst. (I seem to have lots of expectations from Dev😆). Sona is still in dark about Vicky and Mami's manipulation.

Realization is a process so would be his redemption... I am sure he will realize.. We can only wait and watch.

If he doesn't then Suvi and me will write another OS that that time. 😉

And, oh... I loved the ending absolutely.👏... Miss Suhana Bose calling up Mr. Dev Dixit, her dad. (Would she call him Baba or Papa?🤪).

Can we expect a Part-4 with Dev-Suhana, Ishwari-Sona? (Or a conversation between Ishwari's late husband and Ishwari, dream or something)...And Sona doesn't have to become Dixit bahu so soon..😛

Do write more.😃

Sometime soon but this OS ends here... Thanks for reading tough and for such a lovely review.
- Tia

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

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Posted: 8 years ago

#250

Good point. I understand. Sometimes it's better to leave on a place where readers can reach their own endings. Well, thanks to both of you for writing an excellent piece of work.