SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 24

Originally posted by: taara113

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Than you so much ladies...I absolutely love you guys for writing this...I hope the day comes when both of them realize their own contributions to ruining their relationship...they have always been kept at this pedestal of always being correct and responsible and they are so unable to come out of it and see their fault...conversation indeed is they key and sadly that is what they never do, they are the biggest experts at brushing things under the carpet...once they are there together they are so afraid of speaking the bitter truth, lest anyone of them leaves...i felt so grateful Sona stayed there and heard and so did Dev when it came to Ishwari...I again dont see this happening so explicitly in the show, so thank you guys giving this amazing piece...

From whatever iv read of you; you often like bringing characters to stability and the same page and leave it there for the readers to ponder and fair enough...because ahead would lie another very long tail... but somewhere that coming together of Soha and Dev is still left...dey deserve a moment too..id love it if we get one 😊

Originally posted by: fanktlk

A note... : Why this is the end...

It is undoubtedly humbling to read more and more requests for another part but let me share a thought process as to why this OS should end here.

Suvi and me are very logical writers... She can get a little filmy at times and I pull her back. 😉The serial has 3 leads and the major issue is communication between these leads.

Now no one really cares if Ishwari and Sona have a conversation or not.. because they are tied by Dev. So Dev has to have conversations with both while he needs to balance the two and now the little one... 3 women.

Dev is going to hold Soha at bay till his equation with Ishwari is not settled and his equation with Soha cannot be defined unless he finds a firm ground with Sonakshi.

The other 2 conversations had a past, they played the blame game and needed to be shown the mirror, which we attempted here.

But with Soha it is a different equation. It is a new beginning and something that definitely cannot be formed in one part, if we had to do justice to it...

Also Dev Sona relationship has to improve for the Dev Soha relationship to strengthen. Something that definitely cannot be achieved in a single part.

It would be similar to we trying to write Soha Ishwari relationship without fixing the Dev Ishwari equation.

We cannot really ignore the Dev Sona interaction while trying to write the Dev-Soha conversation and as readers you will feel let down.

For us to take it forward, then this has to be converted to a full blown FF and we are still not sure we can or rather should do that.

Hence we thought of concluding it with hope. Dev thinks he has lost everything and the call is the light at the end of the tunnel.

It brings HOPE!!

I hope I make sense. Do let me know what you guys think.

Originally posted by: gmgi

Hi Divya, it is not that we can't understand. But you two write so beautifully that ye dil maange more. We have absolute faith in you guys and we have none on the CV's. So what to do? Any way this was too beautiful and satisfying too.

Ok can I ask you something on Neha and what would have happened in these seven years. If both you and Suvi can write it will be too good to be true. But I will keep my expectations to the minimum. So how about a new OS. Divya?

P.S: I am having trouble with IF. Can't quote or post new posts or use emoticons. Comments I am managing with paste from Word app here.

Originally posted by: gmgi

Hi Divya, it is not that we can't understand. But you two write so beautifully that ye dil maange more. We have absolute faith in you guys and we have none on the CV's. So what to do? Any way this was too beautiful and satisfying too.

Ok can I ask you something on Neha and what would have happened in these seven years. If both you and Suvi can write it will be too good to be true. But I will keep my expectations to the minimum. So how about a new OS. Divya?

P.S: I am having trouble with IF. Can't quote or post new posts or use emoticons. Comments I am managing with paste from Word app here.

Originally posted by: Pramila.harish

You guys r really excellent on writing.

Is it possible for you guys write Dev realising his mistakes.

I felt your writing again to put sona to go understanding trip. We had seen enough sona understanding. My wish is to see Dev understanding sona at least once.

As we know why sona was all into being best bahu. Bcoz she knew how much eshwari was important to him. I don't think Bcoz she loved eshwari and doing all that to please eshwari.

I agree it was mistrust from sona on Dev regarding pre-nup and throwing bejoy family out of their house. But those cruel words used by him was not sona's imagination. How she will erase those harsh words, firstly he told her get out from his house and secondly such a cruel words when he knew she cannot become mother.

All I wish is at least Dev realise how much he hurt sonakshi than sona thinking about even she is responsible for breakup.

I am sure cvs will take your route as they don't want any redemption from ML.

Since it is not going to happen in this serial.. I just wish of you guys could come up with Dev realisation as a separate os. .you guys are just amazing writers. May be my wish will be fulfilled.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Another OS from Divya??!!! Yes Yes Yes

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Pramila,

I am surprised you think that.. If that's how it came across that only Sona should understand then that definitely was not the intention.

Bear with me... while ...

The way we saw it , at the end of the day all 3 were responsible for the debacle. But the way the 3 characters saw it...

1. As per Dev, Ishwari and Sonakshi were at fault

2. As per Ishwari only Sonakshi was at fault.

3. As per Sona only Dev was at fault.

Now at neutral viewers, the way we interpreted it was

Ishwari was responsible for a large chunk but Dev was responsible for all the decisions and the stance that he did or didn't take. Sonakshi tough a victim did doubt Dev's love at one point but Dev didn't really give her a reason to trust him.

Also pre-leap episodes had an important event. Bijoy throws Dev out of his house while he tells Dev my daughter has gone to return your money and after returning the money, I break all ties with you. Now from Dev's view point they are tied together by Sona. I also thought that's why Dev was so hesitant to take the money because he would interpret it as breaking it off with Sona and he wasn't ready to do that. He kept giving her reasons, he said it didn't make sense, it was to much, she was being stupid, to you are insulting my mother to you will not be able to repay... He said everything other that Sona don't leave me . While Sona kept insisting take the money . She spoke of pride, his ego, her father's honor other than she is just returning the money so they can close that chapter and move on with their lives. - here you are interpreting Dev was scared of loosing sona. So he was making all excuse for not taking money. But i could not interpret that way. If that was the case he would never said get out. he blamed her that she pushed his mother and told her get out. When she was double checking was he really meant for her to go..He said just go. And whatever sona spoke was rightly so. Why cannot she spk about her father's honor. Whatever bejoy said..It was bejoy said not sona. So I could not even think sona would leave him. According to me it was plain ego from Dev and eshwari that how could she return such a huge money. So they turned it other way like dishonor eshwari. I am being an accountant I understand only face value and to understand implicit value need brain. It is already in expiry status😆. But nice to know your point of view though I disagree with it.

So the OS was intended to show the following:

1. Ishwari realizing her mistakes and apologizing

2. Dev recognizing Sona was a victim of the circumstances and Ishwari was responsible and Dev himself was to blame

3. Sona understanding where Dev came from as Sona only reacted to Dev. She cannot really start trusting him unless she understands.

So we had Ishwari acknowledge her mistake and recognize her role.

We had Dev recognize his role and understand Sona was a victim. Note Dev hasn't really apologized so Sona forgiving him doesn't arise.

That's why Dev's redemption should be a full blown FF as falling in love is the easy part, building back broken trust is tough. Sona giving Dev a chance to look maybe Dev alone was not at fault.

If you think we were merely trying to project Sona as the understanding one then please revisit Part 1 as that gives Sona enough opportunity to put forth her points.. Telling Dev he had written off his rights got Dev to shut up and listen to all that Sona had to say and he let her vent out. - I read through it and loved it the way sona vented out. But I want badly Dev realising his mistakes. .

By part 3 she needs to give that option to Dev too. right? Else the story won't move forward. - i know story will not move unless sona give option. But before that I want Dev to realise and sorry for his harsh words. Same time I don't want sona feel guilt in any point as I feel she was always correct..

You guys have amazing at story writing...loved to read more of yours.