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Posted: 8 years ago
👏👏👏 Standing ovation for this!
These three parts were so well written and it is very clear that everything in the show (right from the reference to the first 10 episodes with the Tulsi type bahu) has been taken care..

I loved both Dev-Sona and Ish-Dev's conversations.. and the best part is that this looks like a beginning of a new chapter rather than and end..

Please do keep writing such stories.. with the new evolved Dev and Sona, there is so much to imagine and write about 😃

Thanks once again!
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Posted: 8 years ago

"If anything, this conversation was not exactly what Sonakshi had in mind. Come to think of it, nothing changed between them but everything did. Was Dev right? Did she have a part to play in the breakup? Was she equally responsible? Did she let her ego overshadow her love? The answers were not going to be easy to find"

These words made me to think like that... but thanks for clearing my doubt. Here i have a cousin who is house wife.. she is in opinion that sonakshi should have had patience.. she should have stayed back with dev. She is taking dev side and she saying he is impulsive.. so whatever he said was really not meant.. etc. You know we bharatiya nari.. never wants to go against husband. But i feel not at the cost of our self respect.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Oh my God, I am smitten by your writing😳😊...


Ishwari is a character that I never sympathize with; I never seem to understand why she behaves in such a creepy manner regarding Dev😕. The mother almost ruined her son's life!.. And you guys did such a marvelous job! 👏... I at least understand the roots of her insecurities, though I still dislike her. All credits your amazing writing skills.👍🏼... And I really loved the Tulsi line😳😊

Initially I did understand her, applauded the makers for showing a character so realistically. But later on, I lost the connect. Could neither understand nor digest the way she was turning out. Feels good knowing that we got her back on track,. Show mein nahi..OS mein hi sahi. 😃

I find Dev complex like a puzzle and simple and clear as water at the same time. Being a girl, Sona is a home territory for me; I relate to her and understand her completely. I loved Sona and Dev's conversation - calm, mature.

7 years older plus now both realise that their priorities have changed. They are parents now. If that is not enough to calm and ground a person, I don't know what is!!

It is good that they cleared out what they thought to each other. But I would have loved even more if Dev said sorry Sona at least once (she deserved it!) for not standing up for her whenever his family taunted her. Those taunts must have bruised her self-esteem numerous times. I wished Dev would also feel guilty for not being there for his pregnant wife, especially after hearing her outburst. (I seem to have lots of expectations from Dev😆). Sona is still in dark about Vicky and Mami's manipulation.

What is the point of sorry?? Would Sona even believe and accept that apology at this point of time?? Would one sorry make up for every thing??
Dev wasn't there with his pregnant wife because she didn't tell him. Had she told...who knows!!! Agreed that she had reasons for not telling him.
And he can't feel everything in one shot Tia. It hasn't even sunk into him completely that he is now a father. He needs time to sort out his own thoughts. But the journey towards that has begun here.

And, oh... I loved the ending absolutely.👏... Miss Suhana Bose calling up Mr. Dev Dixit, her dad. (Would she call him Baba or Papa?🤪).

No idea. Haven't given it a thought. 😆

Can we expect a Part-4 with Dev-Suhana, Ishwari-Sona? (Or a conversation between Ishwari's late husband and Ishwari, dream or something)...And Sona doesn't have to become Dixit bahu so soon..😛

😆 These characters are not enough for you that now you want a dead man to join the gang?? Jokes apart, that is another story for another time.😃

Do write more.😃

Will do. Thank you once again for your comments / feedback Tia.
- Tia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IFfreak


Really loved this OS. But my gripe with the last part was just this.

why not someone make Dev understand Sona, once...
Waiting for that OS. this OS does seem focused on Dev's thought process and his expectations. I still maintain, Dev needs to appologise for pulling Sona into a near -abusive marriage



No one is denying that. Dev and Ishwari need to introspect a lot more. Change a lot more. Insecurities like Ishwari's need medical help. So that has to come into picture (logically speaking). All that need not go into this OS. This one is just to break the impasse. I think we did that.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: surbharati

Loved this OS...
This serial really needs session of can we talk (all of them..)

Please continue soon



Thank you.

Maybe not this one but we will come up with something else, hopefully soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Monaleojan

read All the parts...this is the bestttest part...waiting for Soha Dev convo... and Thank u for the pm ...



Thank you so much.

Soha - Dev... no. Let the dad-daughter figure out on their own instead of us scripting it. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rose4ever

Loved it Divya & Suvika👏⭐️

For me,Ishwari's character is irredeemable but if there's anything that I could have considered acceptable in the show,this is it( another option being therapy for Ishwari,but can't really see that happening on Indian Tv). Introspection and realisation of her own faults/thoughts was a must.Kudos to you for writing it so well.


Thank you so very much.🤗 Yes. Totally agree with you on the therapy option. I am not ruling out medication too at this point of time.

If there is to be any hope of a reunion,Dev & Sonakshi need to open up completely and need to let each other see and hear exactly what they've been thinking and feeling.Expose their vulnerable side too.There are so many misunderstandings due to lack of communication & trust and you just paved way for all that to happen.

Falling in love again...rebuilding the trust from scratch... that's the only way for a reunion IMO.

I would have surely loved this being continued as an FF but I'll take what I can get.I am hoping for some new OS though


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sa1234B


Wow ...Mind blowing update👏...loved ur writing
Thank you for writing dis Wonderful OS ..





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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

How mean you both are for breaking my poor heart...Suvi you are spanking me ?!


Just so you get a chance at handsome guy with torn jeans and hairy thighs applying the ointment


Geena how can you accept defeat so easily?😭

On a serious note, I understand your explanations and accept it. Ofcourse you are the writers and know better 😳 However if it is possible give us an OS for Dev-Suha conversation, I would love to read those emotions via your writings !

I am waiting for that episode to air. If they let me down in their approach, I will pounce another OS on you guys. 😉😆 Thanks for understanding Deepa. 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itsveena

You both are simply superb.. lovely OS!! I just hope CVs show these 3 parts before Dev and Sona meeting .. hatsoff to you three!!! 👏



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