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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Suvika.

😆 Dramebaaz!! Nakal utaarne keliye GKB hi mili thi kya?? 😆

Now did you read or no??

She is an interesting character na!

Mere andar ki draamnebaazi baahar aa jaati hai uska "Haaye-haaye jeeji" sunke😆

As good as I used to imitate Dadi bua from Ktlk- "Arre Manhoos!"

Oh yes, I finally read it... I am sorry for the delay actually... Had guests pouring in...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Dear Divya di,

Aapke charan kahan hain maatey???

Nothing can be more tedious than getting into Ishwari's psyche, and writing her point of view...

Like seriously, people have gone so much on red alert coz of her past deeds, that her shutting off and laying still in bed can also panic in-house members...😆 What if she had again gulped down half a bottle of sedatives?😆😆

Reminds me of what my mother tells: I was a very restless infant, and always crying... Wouldn't sleep coz of all that... Had a lot of problem in digestion too... I underwent the barium test too... Lost my voice for some time (I think it would have been such a peace to my mother's ears...😆)... But yeah, post that test, I was really tired and slept in my mother's lap in the clinic only... After that, I slept all the way to home, slept all evening, all night, and even until late morning... Now my mother was wary... Is she alive?😆 She would check my breathing every now and then... And my father was--What's your problem lady? When she didn't sleep, you had a problem... When she is sleeping, you have a problem... What exactly do you want from that toddler?😆

So Mamaji was alert as well, and when ishu must have realised, whatta feeling haan...😆

Just like Dev opts to drinking at the drop of a hat, people think ishu will gobble sleeping pills at every other confrontation...😆

But, you learn lessons from the most unexpected people... Who knew Ishu will learn all this from gkb...😆😆

But, again, can she undo the damage? No! She cannot...

And a pain in me still lingers.. Insecurity apni jagah, dhokha apni jagah,a ur usko itne saal tak repent na karna totally apni jagah...

And no matter what, I will keep saying, she has become one hopeless character for me... And I expect nothing out of her... JUST A GONE CASE!!!😵🥱

Inn sab par bhi main aapki daad dungi, for attempting and justifying it to us that she was so wrong... So very wrong... And you are right! Kudos to you di...👏👏

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: gmgi
I felt like dancing seeing your update 😆 So happy Divya and thank you Suvi 🤗
I loved it. It is not easy to get under Ishwari's skin and with so much hatred that character had accumulated I am pleasantly surprised and impressed with the way you have brought out her thoughts. I always thought RR is the only one who can show her the mirror and was happy when I read the same. She always thought RR was beneath her but would have been shocked to see how much beneath she had fallen. She fell in Dev's eyes but it was necessary that she falls in front of her own eyes for her to introspect. Thank you Divya for this treat.

Suvi,loved your review. It shows how wonderful a team you both are. You both read between each other's lines. As a reader I am happy to know I will get one more part for this wonderful OS which both of you will write. What more can I ask for 😳

Geena, I was wondering were you are. But before i could comment on your post last night. I had to step out for dinner and catch up with other stuff this morning.

So sorry for the delay in response. I am glad you liked reading the update. I have started the next part but believe me getting into Ishwari's shoes was the toughest.

The Ishwari we see today I really don't know how will she redeem herself. The Friday's comment khatta atta was really in bad taste...

I don't mind the CVs taking their time to redeem her. As long as they show the graph and it is logical I think we will all lap it up.

This part was specially for you... So happy reading... I think we shall post the next part tonight.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Suvika.

No thanks required. It was a joint effort (yours and mine) to get her to type 😉 and she didn't need to be persuaded all that much. She had already been itching to write. 😆

Actually yes... more than Dev Sona milan... I am looking forward to Dev Ishwari Redemption.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Oh dear this was so beautiful!!!!!!!
You actually had the guts to write it up from Ishwari's pov
Great one i must say
N let me tell you ...u have done exact justice to suvika s first part
It was a beautiful continuation

Thank you I do have guts don't it? 😆😆 Trying to justify the most hated character is definitely not easy.

Thanks. I tried to keep the some line from the first part. It is fun and challenging when 2 people are writing pieces of the same story. At the end it should feel like one.

Thanks once again.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: tia.o
Ah... Such music to my ears... Sorry my eyes... Let's talk. Such a long overdue but most important aspect of any relationship. Finally they are ready to talk. You guys are excellent in writing stories. Please write some more and send them to CVs. I know it will be plagiarising, but I hope you won't mind if I wish to see it portrayed on screen.

Wow Tia, thank you. I guess if only Dev and Sonakshi talked. Suvika and me were so upset that they didn't talk before they got married that I ended up writing 3 OSs even then.

Now after the leap Ishwari still blaming Sona... I am more worried that the story becomes about 2 people with a past falling in love but all the old issues will e swept under the carpet.

Would we mind seeing this on Television? Oh definitely not... People are welcome to share it with the CVs.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Fanktlk...
U have nailed the second part...
U have topped the challenge of thinking by Ishwari's POV..
So true to her character...
Plz do write more...
Can U PM Ur writings dear..

One of the first to give individual separate reviews... Thank you.

Yes dear one more part is coming up. Suvika and me are having fun. That chapter will be written by both of us... Will PM you.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: sa1234B
Fabulous update...loved it
Brilliant writing👏

Thank you.. Am glad you enjoyed reading.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070
Nice one dear 👏
You actually wrote exactly how Ishwari will react to the whole thing. Finally she realized her mistakes.

Please update soon.

Hi Thanks. Ishwari's first reaction as expected would be to blam Sonakshi wouldn't it...

Will try and update by tonight.

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Dear Divya di,
Aapke charan kahan hain maatey???

Nothing can be more tedious than getting into Ishwari's psyche, and writing her point of view...
Like seriously, people have gone so much on red alert coz of her past deeds, that her shutting off and laying still in bed can also panic in-house members...😆 What if she had again gulped down half a bottle of sedatives?😆😆

Thanks for catching that... It did seem logical right, Mama would assume she gulped some more pills. 😆😆

Thanks for sharing your story.. We mothers... worry when are kids are hyperactive worry when the kids are quite...

😆

So Mamaji was alert as well, and when ishu must have realised, whatta feeling haan...😆

Just like Dev opts to drinking at the drop of a hat, people think ishu will gobble sleeping pills at every other confrontation...😆

Funnily didn't the forum question after seeing Dev-Ishwari confrontation 2nd episode post leap why she didn't gulp down any pills.

Insecurity apni jagah, dhokha apni jagah,a ur usko itne saal tak repent na karna totally apni jagah...

That is the thing Aazeen, Think about it she had her own reasons to cheat Dev and get his signatures but she has no reasons to be insecure with a son like Dev. Once she realizes where she made a mistake asking forgiveness for her fraud is easy. But to get her to fix her insecurities is going to be a long walk.

And no matter what, I will keep saying, she has become one hopeless character for me... And I expect nothing out of her... JUST A GONE CASE!!!😵🥱

Once upon a time Ishwari was a loved character. Hopefully she gets there some day.

Inn sab par bhi main aapki daad dungi, for attempting and justifying it to us that she was so wrong... So very wrong... And you are right! Kudos to you di...👏👏

Thank you... Writing her POV was also important. She was instrumental for the breakup but not the main reason. Hopefully by the time we finish the next chapter, we will be able to show the mirror to all three of them.

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