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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk



Not fair!! Then you take up the Dev Ishwari part...




OK. You write Dev - Sona, I will write Dev - Ishwari. We'll club both and post it as the final part 3. Probably on Sunday. What say??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Role Reversal Yippee... But you did justice to my post by identifying the exact points I was trying to bring about.

Think I wouldn't be able to, did you??

Two people writing a story is so difficult and you have to give justice to already what is portrayed. I there by tried to write within that framework.



Will gladly accept it. I don't know what would be more difficult Writing Ishwari or your mushy love scenes. Oh well, I still think it is those scenes .

Let's call it a tie, shall we?? 😆


She excluded Sona and she shut Dev's mouth and tied hsi hands. Dev Ishwari conversation will make an interesting write up. Interested in taking that up??

Since you have mellowed her down and brought her down from the Godly status to a human one,


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Posted: 8 years ago
Thankyou somuchh suvika di n divya di 4 writing dis amzng stry ...
Totally fell in luv with this...
U guys deeply analysed the characters n beautifully penned their emotions n actions...
I wanna happen sumthng lyk dis in shw...
Plzzz update Dev-Sona talk n Ish--Sona-Dev talk...
I hope u guys will update next part too...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.. I really want ish to know how gkb praises her own dil .. in wtever situation viklena have married but still gkb has accepted else.. but she always instigated ish abt Sona..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taara113

Wow...amazing piece of writing...given how much hatred has build up against Ishwari I'm sure it's pretty difficult to express her view point and what all really goes inside that head of hers...her character had great potential of reality, that selfishness in human beings and the posesiveness for near ones is a very common and difficult feeling to deal with...

it might sound silly but sometimes I'm jealous when someones boy-friend eats into my time with my friend and I become mean and bitchy enough to say... Listen girl he is not giving you space, ur cutting us off and blah blah blah...
There is always that right you want to have over people you love but it's important for one to know when to take a back seat and let someone else become the priority and actually protect that priority of your loved ones...
Ishwari had to travel the graph and rise, but sadly she just settled at the rock bottom...

This closure is very important for Ishwari if she ever wants to get her son's love and more so respect back... I don't think it will ever be portrayed so perfectly on screen (they might just push it in towards some last episodes), Im really glad u put in the effort for us to imagine what it could have been... Thank you 😊

And yes... please please please do write the next part tooo...

Eagerly awaiting Sona's reply to the note...


Yes I expected a remorseful Ishwari post leap. But this character took me by surprise. We do tend to be demanding of time with our loved ones. I agree with you. With time I guess we learn to balance all our relationships.

Thank you for understanding the effort behind trying to portray Ishwari's POV. Hopefully, we see glimpses of her in the serial too. Another part is definitely due. We will post that on Sunday.
Edited by fanktlk - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow amazing awesome .. i feel IF has more talents and for some reasons hiding them.. i am sure you all will make successful authors and print your own books one day ..

Loved the way you think and mould the story, loved the way you tie all the moments together without losing their essence, loved the way you put them in sophisticated words to make it simple for us .. what else , cant wait for the next one from our talented writers 👏 👏


A bow to you Both 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameera776

Wow it was just amazing


Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

Thankyou somuchh suvika di n divya di 4 writing dis amzng stry ...

Totally fell in luv with this...
U guys deeply analysed the characters n beautifully penned their emotions n actions...
I wanna happen sumthng lyk dis in shw...
Plzzz update Dev-Sona talk n Ish--Sona-Dev talk...
I hope u guys will update next part too...



You are most welcome binu. Actually there is no need to thank us. We all needed a place to vent out all our feeling. We hope the CVs show us something like this else we can always fall back on the OS... can't we? 😉

Yes tomorrow or Sunday we will update the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Awesome update.. I really want ish to know how gkb praises her own dil .. in wtever situation viklena have married but still gkb has accepted else.. but she always instigated ish abt Sona..


Someone had to show Ishwari the mirror na...
Edited by fanktlk - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I felt like dancing seeing your update 😆 So happy Divya and thank you Suvi 🤗
I loved it. It is not easy to get under Ishwari's skin and with so much hatred that character had accumulated I am pleasantly surprised and impressed with the way you have brought out her thoughts. I always thought RR is the only one who can show her the mirror and was happy when I read the same. She always thought RR was beneath her but would have been shocked to see how much beneath she had fallen. She fell in Dev's eyes but it was necessary that she falls in front of her own eyes for her to introspect. Thank you Divya for this treat.

Suvi,loved your review. It shows how wonderful a team you both are. You both read between each other's lines. As a reader I am happy to know I will get one more part for this wonderful OS which both of you will write. What more can I ask for 😳
Edited by gmgi - 8 years ago

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