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RanjeetaSajin

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very Nice...but felt you could an epilogue to this.do continue writing more stories...😊

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

It was Amazing!!

Glad that Sona forgived him...

Thank you for a happy ending!!

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Sharica

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Posted: 8 years ago

What a beautiful ending😳

Straight forward conversation and a soulful ending...

Brilliant writing👏

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Anjali Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hii

Read whole story in a go

Wow!!!! Brilliant

I wish something like this had happened in show

But koi baat nahi...show me nhi to imaginations mein hi sahi

Plss come back with another story

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Dr Neelima Menon

@neelima_menon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Truely amazing, feeling sad coz it's over ..loved Dev S confessions n emotional.. very well true love is so hard to find !!! Beautifully written #devakshi love them !

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@Krpkab_superfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was so well written.. Thanks for writing it with a happy ending.. I enjoyed your previous story as well but this was even better 👏

Tell us when you are starting the next story.. eagerly waiting to read :)

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful story with a beautiful ending dear
Do write more stories for us

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Chandni Davey.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely dear...

The only criticism is that u ended ...

"I couldn't go away or let you go away this time Sonakshi without actually speaking to you. Can I come in please?"

"See the storm is over and the sky is clearing. Lets watch the sun rise over a new day together".

These r the brilliant words...

Do continue if possible... or something else...

Thank-you for the happy n understanding ending...

Do PM ur writings dear..

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