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Posted: 8 years ago
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Today I am in a mood for story.
So I will write a story today.

A woman lived by a sunny beach. She loved to feel the warm breeze blowing on her face, the soft sand under her feet, the waves dancing in the sunlight.

One day she saw a picture of the mountain and fell in love with the majestic beauty of icy peaks. She decided that she will live by the mountain.

She packed her bags, sold all her worldly goods and moved by the mountain.

Within a few days she realised that while mountain had his own charm, it's cold wind can't compare to the warm breeze of the sea, it's icy majestic beauty doesn't have the musical rhythm of the crashing waves and it's harsh weather doesn't compare to the soothing warm sand...

So she packed her bags and moved back again to the beach.

Now the beach was a private beach which belonged to a man who had appointed a manager to take all the decisions regarding the beach and its inhabitants.

When the woman came back, the manager, who enthusiastically planned this woman's move put all blame on the owner for enjoying his beach when the woman couldn't enjoy the mountain.

This owner tried to stop the woman from leaving for the mountain but the manager didn't listen to the owner and went against his advice to help the woman leave for the mountain.

Now that the woman came back, the manager expected the owner to stop enjoying his beach for the woman making a wrong choice and the manager supporting the same.

The owner recently went on a joint partnership whom he promised to share everything with including the beach.

But because the manager intent to put all responsibility of the woman's choice on the original owner and deprive him of his own beach, the owner decided that it sounds absolutely fair to take the decision alone to close off the beach to the new partner he did the merger with.

After all, the joint owner just came to the beach few days ago and hence should have no hopes, no dreams, no happiness and no power to take decision regarding the beach, but happily bear equal share of whatever punishment/self-flagellation/responsibility for other's choices the owner chooses to bear on himself.

This merger is strongly built on one principle where the very fine prints say, "The party entering the merger will share all responsibility and duties while forsaking all her own hopes, dreams and happiness henceforth with or without her consent".

That story, I hope needs no explanation...

I updated my Short Story as well:

Link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4723626&TPN=3

Even India Forums know Dev's reality: http://www.india-forums.com/tellybuzz/creative-cocktail/35062-if-indian-tv-characters-had-honest-tinder-profiles.htm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Isn't Slave labor banned?.
BTW you are an awesome storyteller..but lately even the write up of the show depresses me😭
Edited by gemini54 - 8 years ago
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Forceful slave labour is banned, but consensual slave labour is not. However, if someone at his own consent writes off his life in slave labour, I wonder if he should be allowed to marry and lock another person in slavery...

Thank you. When I write direct message in regards to marriage and social systems, it seems people put gandhari's blindfold to their mind. So writing story without mentioning marriage and social system seems to be the only way to show unfairness in our society.

Originally posted by: gemini54

Isn't Slave labor banned?.

BTW you are an awesome storyteller..but lately even the write up of the show depresses me😭

Edited by tia.o - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved d way u said ur words thru story tia ...
i dint watch d show from start ...these daz i m watching old epis ...dev was never in favour of neha ranveer marriage ..he alwaz knew neha cant adjust ...it was ishwari who was like pyar kaafi hota h n all ...kisi ki nhi suni ...
n now wen neha comes back it is solely dev's responsibility to handle d issue ...bakki sab bas tamasha dekho ...no one is bothered literally no one ...ishwari does not want to talk to neha ...bas dev ko batana h ki neha is feelibg bad abt him going to honeymoon ...
n d way she told ...dose unshed tears in dev's eyes ...
dev is so used to sacrificing his own happiness for family dat he is still not in terms wid d fact dat now him sacrificing his happiness means sacrificing sona's too ...he ll come in terms of it soon ...n if not him sona ll realise d mess dev is in ...
n sona is stubborn ..u just cant help wen she sets her mind to sth ...i liked once ishwari sent sona to her room n dint allow her to wait for dev ..d next tym sona was prepared n dint budge wid any of ishwari's explanations ...n dis all ll follow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tia.o

Forceful slave labour is banned, but consensual slave labour is not. However, if someone at his own consent writes off his life in slave labour, I wonder if he should be allowed to marry and lock another person in slavery...

Thank you. When I write direct message in regards to marriage and social systems, it seems people put gandhari's blindfold to their mind. So writing story without mentioning marriage and social system seems to be the only way to show unfairness in our society.


Today looks like I need the hugs I dont know why but reading the written episode today depressed me. I wrote a post let me know your thoughts
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is exactly what I expected out of Ishwari and Dev.

Dev is like a puppet whose key is with Ishwari. When she turns the key, Dev reacts exactly the way she wants.

When last time he took decision on his own and I complained, some people whitewashed him saying it's his business so it's his right to take the decision.

Today again he took a decision with zero consideration to Sona's feelings and this time about her hopes and dreams. Needless to say even now people will whitewash his mistakes and say that Sona should be "understanding".



Originally posted by: sona_naksh

loved d way u said ur words thru story tia ...
i dint watch d show from start ...these daz i m watching old epis ...dev was never in favour of neha ranveer marriage ..he alwaz knew neha cant adjust ...it was ishwari who was like pyar kaafi hota h n all ...kisi ki nhi suni ...
n now wen neha comes back it is solely dev's responsibility to handle d issue ...bakki sab bas tamasha dekho ...no one is bothered literally no one ...ishwari does not want to talk to neha ...bas dev ko batana h ki neha is feelibg bad abt him going to honeymoon ...
n d way she told ...dose unshed tears in dev's eyes ...
dev is so used to sacrificing his own happiness for family dat he is still not in terms wid d fact dat now him sacrificing his happiness means sacrificing sona's too ...he ll come in terms of it soon ...n if not him sona ll realise d mess dev is in ...
n sona is stubborn ..u just cant help wen she sets her mind to sth ...i liked once ishwari sent sona to her room n dint allow her to wait for dev ..d next tym sona was prepared n dint budge wid any of ishwari's explanations ...n dis all ll follow

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice analysis 😊 Dev is a mess but Sona is in a bigger mess because she chose it and Dev is emotionally damaged and he doesn't mind being only Sona can help him. God give strength to Sona it is going to b hell of a ride 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have mentioned before, you can help a blind person to see by doing operation or by donating your own eyes. But when a person with perfect vision willingly closes his eyes and refuses to see the truth, no one in the world can make them see anything.

It's a thankless job with no solution that a smart woman would just refuse to undertake.

Originally posted by: siddhi.d123

Nice analysis 😊 Dev is a mess but Sona is in a bigger mess because she chose it and Dev is emotionally damaged and he doesn't mind being only Sona can help him. God give strength to Sona it is going to b hell of a ride 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hugs to you. Updated my comments in your post. 😊

Originally posted by: gemini54


Today looks like I need the hugs I dont know why but reading the written episode today depressed me. I wrote a post let me know your thoughts

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Will the original owner ever think about the joint owner's dreams and happiness instead of falling prey to the manager's manipulations?
The manager's facade is wearing off but the original owner still refuses to see it!
The manager was talking about the woman and expressing her "concern" and suddenly forgot about it to talk about herself.And still the original owner is clueless🤔

PS:You look beautiful in the dp😊

Edited by rose4ever - 8 years ago

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