Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Rhy2015
What an update..really liking this Casanova yet a genuine guy..continue plz

He is a playboy but a nice one who understands emotions very well.

Sure..

Thanku Dear😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Soumya23
Woww...it was steaming hot update...
And so finally Sona and Dev came to know about their marriage..
Let's see what's in store...
Cont soon dear😊

ohho...thanks yr ...for liking it...it was really tough for me😳

hmmm...

sure...😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
I now obsesesive for this fiction..and thanks fos the Pm.

oops...i mean thank u...its a big complement...😃😳

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: gdfss

Hey... I am commenting here first tym on your ss...it was really amazing...js read all the parts in one go...since I am not good by words so can't help you in your further story but love to read Devakshi as innocent Sona n Casanova Dev but plz don't end the story soon like dev also fall in love with her and they consummate etc etc...show this but in your own way like you showed till now...
Hope I didn't confused u more 😉

THANK U SOOO MUCH DEAR...😃

u really made my day...

thanks for encouraging me...means a lot.😃

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: srilotus

😳
Gayatri ,arre kabhi mistakes bhi bata diya karo
haan jaldi update karungi😃

Arrey mistakes hongi toh bataungi na dii
Aap to itna accha likhte ho phir main kaun hoti hoon mistakes nikalne waali?????

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Arrey mistakes hongi toh bataungi na dii
Aap to itna accha likhte ho phir main kaun hoti hoon mistakes nikalne waali?????

mujhe laaj aa rahi hai😳

next ch mein main bohot mistakes karne wali hoon

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: srilotus

mujhe laaj aa rahi hai😳
next ch mein main bohot mistakes karne wali hoon

Jitni chahe utni mistakes karo
Humein toh sirf hot hot update se matlab hai 😉

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Jitni chahe utni mistakes karo
Humein toh sirf hot hot update se matlab hai 😉

ohh...abhi aur dimaag marna padega,sach hot ch. likhna challenge se kam nahi😆

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Chandniyati
Sorry for late...was busy with Diwali n post Diwali rituals...
Part 4,
Their coffee talk was amazing...
N then a bit hot, but our dear dev babu felt bad,
What a change sona can bring in him... wow...
I even liked u switching scenes to cover every angle...
Part-5,
Ellina n asha ma confronting sona for marriage,
N ishwari to dev...
Their ph convo was awsum n loved it...
Their passionate n hot drive was really hot...
Now m eagerly waiting for the update.. crazy to know what's next...
N how will they go further...
Thank-you for the pm...