Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy
Hawww...n smbdy was telling me she doesn't know to write such stuff...aur yeh hot hot sa update kya aapki padosan ne likha hai di???????
Aur yeh kya aap itne jaroori point pe ruk gaye??????
Yeh naainsafi hai di...jaldi update karo

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Gayatri ,arre kabhi mistakes bhi bata diya karo

haan jaldi update karungi😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
Amazing update
Soo hot
Waiting to know how dev reacts to marriage
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks dear😃

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Dev is a complicated man...naa kahega toh bhi mushkil,haan kahega toh bhi

sure😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sowiee
Finally talk of marriage has come up..
Uff waiting for dev's reaction...

Good update but waiting for next part.

Thanku dear😃

lets c what happens next😊

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: simplesweety1
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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: srilotus

Thanks a bunch Anu😃
Thanks for liking the story.
Iss story mein maine itna hi socha tha ki how a girl falls in love of a Casanova and maine hints de diye hain ki Dev also love Sonakshi.
Marriage isliye daala because no girl will ever go with a guy without any reason.Here Sonakshi know about the marriage ,so she agreed to go with him.
Ab kya likhu ki shaadi hoti hai yaa nahi?
shud i continue😕

yr meri grammar dekhi hai na...kitni poor hai...badi mushkil se yeh 5 ch likhe the

Oh hello madam?? Kya keh rahi ho,

Obviously continue karo or else I'll kill U...😡

Aree U R grammar is superb, what Rubbish R U taking...👏

And U R plot, shaadi ho ya nahi...

BTW, U ask me (suggestions), then I'll go for Yes for marriage as fun will be how Dev treats Sona and will he ever leave his Casanova attitude for his love...

U decide na...Tu story likh rahi, take U R time and update...

See even I'm taking time and then writing and updating...😊

Love,

Anushka

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Ofc...you should contiue...its an amazing story!!

And your Grammar is good, I don't know who told you that its not...

And...please delete some messages from your inbox as I am not able to send you pm😊

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CrazyGirlRashi

@CrazyGirlRashi

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Last update is amazing
Waiting for next

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Fabulous Chapter

Elena tells Sonakshi about the marriage proposal and she is indeed happy that she'll marry a handsome man and the fact that she has been dreaming about have been to the coffe shop with him so it means even her parents won't get hurt in any way while Dev it seems that his desires and lust for Sonakshi is increasing and he has no idea yet about the marriage proposal when she ask him he told her the truth that he has no idea if any girl would marry him as he has been around he takes Sonakshi for a drive and suddenly he cannot control himself brings her on his lap and kisses her but when he sees her scared reaction he stops immediately .

Dev is a player but it seems with Sonakshi he is his real self he seems to care about her and loses himself when he is around her

Ishwari tells Dev that she has asked the hands of Sonakshi Bose so now he believes she loves him and also knew about the marriage so that is the reason she came with him .

now I want to see what his reactions will be towards her

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: srilotus
Note:
Thanks a lot for liking my SS. I am overwhelmed with the response i am receiving for my first ever fiction. Thank u once again.🤗

As this one is my first fictional story ,i have no idea how m i writing.
I am only getting good comments for it...but actually i know how my grammar is...really poor...Thanks for tolerating
Iske aage bhi story hai but that's very confusing.So right now i need ur help ,i am looking for critics jinke comments se meri confusion door ho sake.

Thanks guys
Srilotus😃

Right now the flow of the story is going good so there is nothing to critize about I'm only now looking forward to Dev's reaction on the marriage

I'm totally addicted to this story

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: srilotus
Note:
Thanks a lot for liking my SS. I am overwhelmed with the response i am receiving for my first ever fiction. Thank u once again.🤗

As this one is my first fictional story ,i have no idea how m i writing.
I am only getting good comments for it...but actually i know how my grammar is...really poor...Thanks for tolerating
Iske aage bhi story hai but that's very confusing.So right now i need ur help ,i am looking for critics jinke comments se meri confusion door ho sake.

Thanks guys
Srilotus😃

Sri... Dont wry... We all wll help u... Relax... And whtevr story u hv written plss do post it... Den we r here to help u and if u go wrong den we ll correct u...

And i dont think dat wld be necessary... Coz u write brilliantly.. And obvio we ignore grammatical errors 😆