Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Oh hello madam?? Kya keh rahi ho,
Obviously continue karo or else I'll kill U...😡
Aree U R grammar is superb, what Rubbish R U taking...👏
And U R plot, shaadi ho ya nahi...
BTW, U ask me (suggestions), then I'll go for Yes for marriage as fun will be how Dev treats Sona and will he ever leave his Casanova attitude for his love...
U decide na...Tu story likh rahi, take U R time and update...
See even I'm taking time and then writing and updating...😊

Love,
Anushka

arre baap re ,ab toh mujhe threats bhi milne lage😆

ok baba ok...aise sar pe talwar latka ke likhwaogi, tab toh main likh chuki

thanku 😳

yess for marriage... ok...achha u want to c how Dev treats her after marriage...uske saath sota hai yaa kissi aur ke saath😉😆...yr plot toh achha hai

haan iss baar time leke update karungi.

thank u soo much Anu.LOVE U🤗

but thanks a lot for encouraging me.😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Ofc...you should contiue...its an amazing story!!
And your Grammar is good, I don't know who told you that its not...
And...please delete some messages from your inbox as I am not able to send you pm😊

Thank u soo much Dear😃

bolte time kissi ko nahi pata chalta but likhte time mujhe apni hi bohot mistakes dikh jati hain😆

done done...have deleted 😊

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi
Last update is amazing
Waiting for next

thanks a bunch Rashi😃

will update soon

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Fabulous Chapter

Elena tells Sonakshi about the marriage proposal and she is indeed happy that she'll marry a handsome man and the fact that she has been dreaming about have been to the coffe shop with him so it means even her parents won't get hurt in any way while Dev it seems that his desires and lust for Sonakshi is increasing and he has no idea yet about the marriage proposal when she ask him he told her the truth that he has no idea if any girl would marry him as he has been around he takes Sonakshi for a drive and suddenly he cannot control himself brings her on his lap and kisses her but when he sees her scared reaction he stops immediately .
Dev is a player but it seems with Sonakshi he is his real self he seems to care about her and loses himself when he is around her
Ishwari tells Dev that she has asked the hands of Sonakshi Bose so now he believes she loves him and also knew about the marriage so that is the reason she came with him .
now I want to see what his reactions will be towards her

Thanks a lot 😃

and really sorry ,hope u won't mind😳

he is a complicated man...can't say

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Right now the flow of the story is going good so there is nothing to critize about I'm only now looking forward to Dev's reaction on the marriage
I'm totally addicted to this story

thank u so much..😃really means a lot

thanks for ur support😃

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Mujhe toh Romantic wala Dev Chaye.. ^ ^

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Miaprincess
Cute!! Thank you!! Please update soon..

Hi ..thank u so much dear .😃

yaah sure will update soon😊

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Sri... Dont wry... We all wll help u... Relax... And whtevr story u hv written plss do post it... Den we r here to help u and if u go wrong den we ll correct u...
And i dont think dat wld be necessary... Coz u write brilliantly.. And obvio we ignore grammatical errors 😆

arre abhi likhi nahi hai , its in my mind ...problem yeh hai ki usse paper pe kaise utarun.

chalo i will start writing it from tomorrow

thanks yr for ignoring my grammatical mistakes😳

thanks Ananya😃