Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

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I am coming up with a SS 😳

Actually, I was writing this SS for my another favorite couple , but stopped writing suddenly as I m a very moody person ...and now thinking to resume here bhi and there bhi...and want to complete it this time...I don't know how will I manage...ek jagah likha nahi jaa raha ,dono pe kaise likhungi. 😕

I know writing fictions is not at all my forte...but keede ka kya karun.😆

This story has no connection with the characters as shown in the serial...neither here nor there.

Character's Introduction:

Dev Dixit : Chairperson of Ishwari communication Pvt LTD. A very handsome,good looking man ,rich and who's an image of a playboy in society.Who don't know the meaning of love.But who loves his mother immensely.

Sonakshi Bose: Sweet, fun loving college going girl.Who's life revolves round her family only. She has never been in love with any boy.

Ishwari: Dev's mother.

Baldev: Dev's mamaji and whom Dev is very close to.

Vicky: Dev's cousin brother but a very caring and understanding brother.

Bejoy Bose: Sonakshi's father

Asha: Sonakshi's mother

Elina: Sonakshi's married elder sister

Neha: Dev's married sister

So here's the Teaser...I have just written this teaser only till now...it will take time to update...

When those eyes fall on me ,my heart start beating faster...noo...my heart drops...the situation becomes out of control ...what is it...naah can't be love... Love can happen to anyone...no one has control over it...but how can i...I can never fall in love...yaah its infactuation...I hate to be in such a situation...

Falling in love is the best thing in this world ...But love has never been in my dictionary. ...for me, love always was and will remain LOSS OF VALUABLE ENERGY.

Both of them don't know that this is a lull before the storm

And I hate how much I love you

I can't stand how much I need you

And I hate how much I love you

But I just can't let you go

And I hate that I love you so

Lyrics by Rihanna

Plz let me know whether you like it or not...Critics are most welcome.


CHAPTER 1 :THERE'S A THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

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CHAPTER 2: LOVE AND LUST

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CHAPTER 3: SWEET FIGHT

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CHAPTER UNTOLDANSWERS https://www.indiaforums.com/forum_posts.aspTID=4726569&TPN=8 /PAGE-8

CHAPTER 5:OBSESSION AND FEAR https://www.indiaforums.com/forum_posts.aspTID=4726569&TPN=13 /PAGE-13

CHAPTER 6: SEPARATION https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kuch-rang-pyar-ke-aise-bhi/4726569/devakshi-ss-being-crazy-in-love-ch-12-updated-pg-58?pn=19 /PAGE- 19

CHAPTER 7: TUG OF WAR https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kuch-rang-pyar-ke-aise-bhi/4726569/devakshi-ss-being-crazy-in-love-ch-12-updated-pg-58?pn=23 /PAGE- 23

CHAPTER 8: TRUTH IS OUT /PAGE - 28

CHAPTER 9 : IMPOSSIBLE LOVE /PAGE - 38

CHAPTER10:FITOOR https://www.indiaforums.com/edit_post_form.aspPID=139688906&PN=48 /PAGE -48

CHAPTER 11: CHOICES https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kuch-rang-pyar-ke-aise-bhi/4726569/devakshi-ss-being-crazy-in-love-ch-12-updated-pg-58 /PAGE - 54

CHAPTER - 12 : CHECKMATE /PAGE 58

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its really nice...
Pls cont soon
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Thanks a lot for liking the teaser.:D
Guys I'm sorry but I won't be able to update the first chapter now as my laptop connecter is nt working and the update is saved on the desktop, can't charge the laptop:(
Will update it on Monday or Tuesday.


One thing I want to tell you that in my story Dev is a grey character.Dont know how u all will take it.

Thanks again 😃
(Srilotus)
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BEING CRAZY IN LOVE

CHAPTER- 1

There's a very thin line between love and hate.

It was almost 8:30am and Sonakshi was getting late for her college. She usually reaches her college at 9:30am."Maa, Baba...tea is ready...dining table pe rakh di hai..."Sonakshi called them bit loudly. Oh God , meri first class miss mat hone dena , aaj mam biology ka new chapter start kar dengi. She started taking out books from her study table and packed her bag.

Sonakshi Bose was in her second year of graduation. Her life was as simple as she herself was. It was not at all complicated .Her life revolves round her family only. Sonakshi was very much attached to her parents and her elder sister. She was disciplined and punctual yet chirpy and sweet . Her best friends were her maa and her sister. She would discuss everything with them .Her baba was her guide, mentor and philosopher.

Asha was a housewife and a loving mother and Bejoy was a Govt servant and a doting father. Elena was Sonakshi's elder sister , she was married and a housewife. She and Sonakshi spoke to each other discuss their problems every night. As Asha was a heart patient, so Sonakshi used to take care of her mother. Elena also calls Asha in the morning, afternoon and evening every day. Asha and Bejoy were proud parents as they have got such intelligent and caring daughters .

Sonakshi went to the washroom and took a quick shower. She came back to her room and wore baby pink T-shirt and blue jeggings. All her college friends come to college in full makeup as if they are going there to attend any party... whereas Sonakshi always liked simplicity but she looked elegant and beautiful.

Sonakshi combed her shoulder length black - brown hair and picked up her glasses from the dressing table. She picked up her bag and came out of her room.

"Maa Baba ...I'm going ...Bye" Sonakshi said

..."arre, beta breakfast laga diya hai, finish kar ke hi jao" Asha called her back

"Maa meri ladies special chhoot jayegi apke breakfast ke chakkar mein,"

"Nahin Shona don't worry, have your breakfast first, I will drop u at your college, "Bejoy said, placing his hand on Sonakshi's shoulder.

"Yippee...ohh, but Nidhi must be waiting for me at the bus stop" Sona replied remembering Nidhi , her friend .Nidhi and Sona were besties and neighborhood friends.

"No problem, we will pick her too" Bejoy said while taking a sip of tea.

Both finished their breakfast and got into the car.

"Shona, ur mobile is ringing" Asha shouted and called Sonakshi back.

"Ohho...Who is it?" Sona dint like to carry her mobile to college. Asha and Bejoy used to call on Nidhi's mobile, if needed.Bejoy and Asha had trust on her, so they also never had any problem.

Nidhi's name was flashing on Sonakshi's mobile screen. She pressed ok button.

"Hey Hi Sona, I am waiting for u at the bus stop, wen r u coming...we are already late," Nidhi said in complaining tone.

Nidhi Patel and Sonakshi were friends from school days. Both did their schooling from Holy Child and now both were doing graduation from Lady SriRam College...

"Nidhi, GM yaar... baba is coming to drop me , we r in the car... will pick u from the bus stop...right."

After few minutes, Nidhi also joined them and soon they reached the college.

"K...Bye baba"

"Thanks Uncle"

Both reached college on time. They attended all the classes and had their lunch in GCR, instead of having it in canteen.

At 4pm, Sonakshi and Nidhi came out of the college and were standing at the bus stop, waiting for ladies special and chatting with each other.

"Hi "a male voice came from behind ...Both Sonakshi and Nidhi looked at each other...they heard a husky but a pleasant voice...Both the gals turned back...they saw a tall and handsome guy ,who was wearing white shirt and blue jeans ...

"U know him?," Nidhi asked Sona in her ears in confusion...Sona narrowed her eyes, as if saying nooo. She nodded...No...I am not this much fortunate.

U know him?', now this time Sona asked Nidhi the same question...'kaash' Nidhi replied dreaming him.

I have seen this guy somewhere before. But where...her sharp memory was tangled into a cobweb ...she was so busy admiring that charming, suave but sexy personality... either I should use my sharp brain to find out where I have seen him or utilize my eyes admiring this beautiful masterpiece as I am doing now...k..She decided to give a break to her thought process...i will go with optimum utilization of eyes. Until I am in this girl's college, I could never get any chance to see such captivating face ever again...this is the last opportunity...Sona.

Sonakshi had maintained an opinion about herself that she is not that beautiful, not that bold and very simple, chashmish and above all a home sick. So she never wanted to have any BF nor was interested. To maintain her family's respect was her only priority.

"Hello..." waving his hands infront of their eyes , as both the girls were looking at him without blinking.

Both came back to reality...

"Yyess...r u talking to us???" Nidhi asked ...topsy turvy

she was also doing the same as Astha...admiring that dishy personality.

"Friends" he asked...

Sonakshi and Nidhi looked each other again ...Is he asking or ordering.

After a while, Nidhi thoughtfully said in Sonakshi's ears, "yaar haan bol doon...at least kuch time ke liye hi sahi,"

"Tu hi haan bol,mere maa baba ko pasand nahin yeh sab, main door se admire kar loongi" said Sona, without shifting her glance from that handsome hunk.

"Haan , mere parents to meri aarti utarenge naa...plz mane chidav nahi" as Nidhi was irritated and said in her gujju language ...S*** yaar ...how can I let this opportunity go ...how fool of me...

Both the gals were constantly looking at him...they were not able to take their eyes away from his face.

"Umm...not interested, try ur luck somewhere else" Nidhi finally opened her mouth, said sadly.

Suddenly Sonakshi saw that guy approaching her, slowly towards her and stood very close to her... he looked her from head to toe. And fixed his eyes with hers. Sonakshi saw raw passion, lust and desire in his eyes... Why is he coming here... Just few seconds before, she was paying homage to his dangerous but sexy look...Ohh...wat creature

"U...wwannn.. smme..th.inngg..." she said in a meek voice, poorly audible.

"YOU... I WANT ONE NIGHT STAND WITH U" Sona's eyes widened at his reply, the rug swept out from under her feet ... now she was scared...one could clearly see beads of sweat on her forehead...she was unable to move from her place...whereas Sona's eyes were full of questions

She tried to get back but got impinged to a pole .He again moved towards her. Now there was no space left in between these two. He took out his right hand from the pocket and rubbed his thumb on her lower lip...

"Aah" Sona uttered in displeasure...she forgot to inhale for a second...whereas guy exhaled audibly in long deep breath as in satisfaction... a cold shiver ran down her spine. She was unsure whether she disliked wat that guy was doing with her or she liked that sweet pleasure...she was in dilemma...ball was in her court now...yaa...and she accepted it too...who will dislike it if a hot and dashing guy do so with a gal...

She slowly closed her eyes... her cheeks became crimson. Her lower lip was burning...her body reacted instantly...he saw her body reacting...

He blew a kiss "Hmmm...u r my girl from now, keep this in mind" stating so, he went back and started his Ducati and went away, leaving stunned Sona behind, who dint understand wat happened with her just now. She dint know how to react ...she was dumbstrucked...she was confused whether she liked wat that guy did or hated...

"Oyye...u rascal...how dare u" Nidhi yelled. But in vain...his bike was out of sight.

Nidhi thought andhalo chhe ke dekhatu nathi ke... (Is he blind, can't see me) but both got so scared that they turned tail and ran!

Nidhi rushed and stopped an auto and both the gals sat inside it.

Nidhi knew wat Sona was going through...how a stranger can touch and talk to a girl like this at roadside. Delhi is not at all a safe place..." Sona ...u...k..." Tears rolled down her cheeks..."Plz yr ...chup ho jaa...ghar aise jayegi to aunty poochengi" Nidhi put her hand on Sonakshi's hand and tried to calm her.

Sonakshi was crying because she liked wat that guy did with her, more than that she hated herself for liking all that...how can she like all this ...never expected from her

she hated that gaze...she hated that devil...

After getting inside house, Sona forgot everything for the time being...

Till now, Sona life was going all well but she dint knew that this storm will wash her away...she dint knew this was just the calmness before the storm.

One thing she was sure of that he wasn't a roadside Romeo.

YES...He was DEV DXIT, a Casanova...Now he had his eyes fixed on Sonakshi...she was his next target...

I hate this girl...BUT WILL LOVE TO LOVE HER...

This is the first time m attempting something new jo mujhe bilkul nahi aata...I don't know ABC of writing fiction. I dont know about proof reading and all ,so plz ignore all the mistakes.

Regards

Srilotus 😊




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Posted: 8 years ago
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something different from the stuff I have been otherwise reading
curious to know how it would proceed
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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dev as grey character ..
interesting
update soon
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Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

something different from the stuff I have been otherwise reading

curious to know how it would proceed
update soon


Thanks for liking and commenting.As i said its my first work as writer( jo ki main hu nahi),this is just my imagination., so plz help me .
It's v different. I really don't know how u are going to take this story.
.Dev is shown as a dream man in the serial,but here the scenario is completely opp.
Sure.😊

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Eager to read next chapter
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First part was amazing!!
But Dev...😡
Agar main hoti toh...itne thapad maarti ki kabhi kisi ladki ke taraf nahiin dekhta...😡
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Aaj ashtami hai aur meri daughter ko subah se koi na koi bula ke le jaa raha hai, main naha bhi nahi payee hun...will reply yall soon.

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