Devakshi SS: Being Crazy in love/CH-12/UPDATED/PG-58

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Sneha

@Rhy2015

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

What an update..really liking this Casanova yet a genuine guy..continue plz

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Soumya

@Soumya23

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Woww...it was steaming hot update...

And so finally Sona and Dev came to know about their marriage..

Let's see what's in store...

Cont soon dear😊

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
It was hot and amazing!!😳
And very well written...👏
So, Dev got to know about the proposal...smthg tells me that he is gonna refuse because, he doesn't want to spoil her life, knowing how innocent she is😊
Plz cont soon
Thanks for the pm

Thanks Aditi😃

Continue???????????????????????? kya continue?

maine yeh story yahin tak sochi thi...aage kya continue karoo😕

marriage ka angle daal ke main khud phas gayee

aage ki story to sochi hi nahi

mera first fiction hai...kya karoon?

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

I now obsesesive for this fiction..and thanks fos the Pm.

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka
OH MY GOD!!!!
I'm Loving It!!!!!
Seriously the mixed thoughts f Sona and Dev and Great this Marriage...
It'll be amazing to know what's next???
It was a hot chapter BTW!!!!
Update soon...

Love,
Anushka

Thanks a bunch Anu😃

Thanks for liking the story.

Iss story mein maine itna hi socha tha ki how a girl falls in love of a Casanova and maine hints de diye hain ki Dev also love Sonakshi.

Marriage isliye daala because no girl will ever go with a guy without any reason.Here Sonakshi know about the marriage ,so she agreed to go with him.

Ab kya likhu ki shaadi hoti hai yaa nahi?

shud i continue😕

yr meri grammar dekhi hai na...kitni poor hai...badi mushkil se yeh 5 ch likhe the

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
It was indeed a hot chapter... Ufff i gt dry reading dis...
And ys i sent u a buddy request... Pls do accept it and pm me d next chap...
And do update fast... I m dying to read it... Plzzz

😉😆

I dear i have accepted it...thanks😃

arre am hell confused ...kya likhungi...but will update next ch for sure ...

😳😃

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Note:

Thanks a lot for liking my SS. I am overwhelmed with the response i am receiving for my first ever fiction. Thank u once again.🤗

As this one is my first fictional story ,i have no idea how m i writing.

I am only getting good comments for it...but actually i know how my grammar is...really poor...Thanks for tolerating

Iske aage bhi story hai but that's very confusing.So right now i need ur help ,i am looking for critics jinke comments se meri confusion door ho sake.

Thanks guys

Srilotus😃

Edited by srilotus - 8 years ago

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: srilotus

Note:
Thanks a lot for liking my SS. I am overwhelmed with the response i am receiving for my first ever fiction. Thank u once again.🤗


As this one is my first fictional story ,i have no idea how m i writing.
I am only getting good comments for it...but actually i know how my grammar is...really poor...Thanks for tolerating
Iske aage bhi story hai but that's very confusing.So right now i need ur help ,i am looking for critics jinke comments se meri confusion door ho sake.


Thanks guys
Srilotus😃

Hey... I am commenting here first tym on your ss...it was really amazing...js read all the parts in one go...since I am not good by words so can't help you in your further story but love to read Devakshi as innocent Sona n Casanova Dev but plz don't end the story soon like dev also fall in love with her and they consummate etc etc...show this but in your own way like you showed till now...
Hope I didn't confused u more 😉