OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25 - Page 4

Originally posted by: dlavanya

Excellent writing Suvika... 👏 .. Kahi durjiy dutta ke office se script tho nahi churayi naa... 😉 It is just awesome .. I can see it happening just like this .. Though i hope dev doesnt need nehas involvement to introspect.. But lest wai and watch..

Brilliant writing once again 👏

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Suvika..excellent 👏 👏

I seriously wanted to see Neha angle in this whole breakup fiasco...but makers simply ignored her...glad you used it in ur story...do write more often...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

when u update please pm me if possible

Originally posted by: Suvika.

🤣 You really are mad at this guy, huh!!! 😆 Offering me supari?? 🤣

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

I seriously wanted to see Neha angle in this whole breakup fiasco...but makers simply ignored her...glad you used it in ur story...do write more often...

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

when u update please pm me if possible

Lovely story & and very well written. 😃

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Buss yahi baaki tha madam... apne sarr pe chori ka ilzaam.. 😆 And if I had to steal, I wouldn't just steal. I would replace it with my own version of KRPKAB 😉😆

hehe... i know right... if we could change the script,,, i would put a year long redemption track for dev before Sona saying Yes... ofcourse with all the romantic scenes in the track 😳

This is amazingly written. Such beautiful lines. Love can withstand alot of things but trust needs time to rebuild. I'm in awe. Reading you for the 1st time. Hope you'll come up with more such. Eagerly waiting