OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic OS

Now Ishwari accepts Sona and Dev goes to Sona but not once did he mention how much he loves her he fails to realize he needs to respect Sona he needs to be trustworthy he wanted Sona back in his life without sorting out any issues if his Maa says something then only he wants to react , now we know both Dev and Sona loves each other but he needs to put Sona first he needs to do everything that makes him and Sona happy it's not just about his mother Sona too has parents and he needs to realize love cannot stand alone without any trust and respect .
I liked that Neha asked him if their mother again is unhappy does that mean he leaves Sona .
Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written...wating for the next part... Do pm me.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dishadishki

Well written! Please continue writing this :)



Thank you.

Yes, will do. Planning on part two. Will post in the next couple of days. Hopefully Saturday - fingers crossed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was really good Suvika ! Very insightful of the intricacies and you wove all the parts together so neatly. Such a satisfying read. Loved it. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rose4ever

👏👏👏You have done it once again. So beautifully penned.

Thank you 😃

Sonakshi's guilt is eating her up but she knows what she has done cannot be changed, she will have to face the questions the society is posing, stand as a wall in front of her parents so that they are not insulted for something she was responsible for.She is right in her anger, right in her despair, she is human after all.How much pain can she take without breaking once.
Dev, still can't see that all he is thinking about is himself and his mom. My love, my pain, my maa's approval, never Sona' s pain or her love or her family.

Up until now, that is the main problem. It was never about her. It was always about him and his maa. Something drastic like this had to happen that would jerk him out of his attitude. Apologise for the generalised statement, but most men are like our Dev Dixit.

Your OS actually made me realise how once again Dev might reinstate his mother's status as God because he thinks Ishwari understood him without him saying anything.Again will turn a blind eye to her faults.

You are right. At least in the show, I feel he will continue to worship her for a while longer. I don't think they plan to bring about his realisation at this point of time.

Here Neha made him see the whole picture,but will there ever be a day when he can see for himself without needing somebody else to point out what is right in front of him.

There are two different types of intelligence. IQ and EQ. Dev's IQ - the intellectual quotient is high. Hence he has been able to achieve all that at such a young age. But his EQ - Emotional Quotient, is pathetic. He has never been good at understanding emotions. Even his own. It took his sisters closing his eyes to make him realise he is in love with Sonakshi. It took Sonakshi's engagement to make him realise he can't live without her. Sona had started to teach him. The classes were discontinued due to the break up. They would be resumed once these two get back together again. Until then someone has to guide him. No other option.

He will surely have to earn back trust of Sona and her family.

Yup

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mohi99

Superb... Loved it... Please pm me when u write more .. Such a blessed writer u r... Neha puts in the right perspective for Dev to seek why Sona is saying no... Lovely OS



Thank you so much!!

Someone has to or this guy will start moping again. 😆

Sent buddy request. Please accept. I will PM when I post the next part. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Lovely, as usual, Suvi👏👏

I just saw SBS segment and I feel like punching Dev right now. Anyway, Let's not talk about that. Love your OS. Continue soon😊 I need to see Dev working his ass off to woo Sonakshi or else i'll explode!!
Awesome work🤗


Thanks Malvika. 🤗

For now, I am going to stop watching the segments. Or else I can't finish this OS. Or worse, I will take out my anger on Dev in the OS. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanktlk

It is so important for us that Dev works to gain Sona's trust.

In Dev's words I will say ab sab theek ho gaya. Everything is perfect. I need the mother son duo to work towards building trust between them and sona and among themselves.

I hope I am not left just wishing.

Me too. Although I am not sure the makers plan to deal with the mom-son issues at this point of time. For now, I feel she is still his God. He doesn't remember his drunken babble. Mamaji doesn't tell him. Ishwari definitely would not tell him. Instead she would say - I want Sona as my bahu. So in his eyes / mind, his mom understood him without him saying anything.

Awesome idea for the OS if I may add. Waiting for the next parts. Let him work his ass off to woo her. She has to agree in the end... But please make him win her back.

Oh I have a wonderful editor. I am sure she has many ideas roaming around in her head.😉 Once she shares those ideas, I will build on them and make him win her back. 😎

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mona5524

awesome update... dev need to do lots of hard work to win her back.



Thank you. Yup, that he does.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Superb!!!! Hope this is true!!

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