OS - Say you believe me!! Part 5 Pg 39 Sept 25 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Suvika.

I happily take back my chocolates. Hope this works😳😳

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Originally posted by: rose4ever

😆 You are welcome to stalk. If Dev Dixit can stalk, we sure can, can't we?? 😉 😆

And no, I am not chocolate person. So that supari won't work. I am more into or even 😉

I happily take back my chocolates. Hope this works😳😳

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

I happily take back my chocolates. Hope this works😳😳

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Sent a buddy request. Please accept.😊

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

Wow!! Stupendous!!👏 u just take the thoughts, feelings and desires and express them in such a way that the reader not only reads them but feels them as well. It was lyk a stream that has no language, coursing beneath the quiet heaven of your characters which has no speech yet u can feel Sona's pain , her guilt which slowly turns into anger.

Thank you Deepali..

Guilt turns into anger or Guilt fuels the anger. Either way, net result is the same. Dev ki dhulai 😆

Sona's guilt is intense. Suffocating. A brick, tied quietly around her ankles while she sleeps. You never fall slowly into guilt-you wake up with little time to take your last breath before being pulled under. her guilt makes her glance back to the concrete bridge, the one she had boldly driven straight across without second thought, and saw truth reflecting back at her .Every time fear froze and worry writhed n every time she surrendered to stress...If only it were possible to love without injury

"But I never told maa anything. Not a word. But she understood. She understood my pain

Every parent is an artist, for the bared canvas of a newborn's soul begs for the artist's touch. And because this is so, a parent must prepare the palette with the utmost care, choose the brushes with poised caution, and mindfully attend to every brushstroke but Ishwari had hurt her own son in the act of possession. She loved her son no doubt but cud not accept dev loving someone else...

And he doesn't remember what he said to his maa in his alcoholic haze. So now she is back to being his God!! Half the issues would be resolved once he starts seeing her as a human I tell you. Once he realizes that his mom knew he was suffering but could ignore it until HE made her face it and ignoring was no longer possible.

they say love- the clay that molds the events of your life, and it was the same love that had thrown the stone of her heart on the building of her expectations. But then wasn't it dev's fault that he had constructed the building of glass? Hadn't he failed to cement the bricks of his love with trust and colour them with security? There was no insurance for broken hearts, no ointment for wounded souls and there would never be one, he knew. She understands dev had pushed her away for his ma n now he wants her back coz his ma is ready to accept Sona. But d q is will Sona easily forget her pain...she might but her family's pain...no she can't just roll everything under the carpet n carry d burden of her family's turmoil...everything they were put thru.

Exactly. And trust once broken... I wonder how he is going to build back that trust in the show.

Neha calmly inserted her next question. "What if maa changes her mind again after a few days? What will you do bhai? Leave Sonakshi again?"

Sonakshi loves me. But she is scared. Scared of getting hurt again. It's not anger. It's fear. She doesn't trust me anymore

Brilliant!!! i wish dy incorporate this in d show...a hard blow to dev's " sona loves me " incantation...i want to c d fear of losing sona flash on dev's face...the fear that is probably flowing thru Sona's blood n aching every cell in her making her soul scream? Fear is like a weed in a garden. Once you allow it to take root, it spreads, replicating itself, until, eventually, it chokes out all the other life there. Trust, love, kindness - none of those things can ever really bloom in a garden of fear.

@red... 👏 👏 👏

Oh boy!! My bak bak was long but this is wat ur brilliant writing does...I can't stop!!!

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Originally posted by: bittersweet1126

YAY!!! I was in love with your stories in the Kuch Toh Log Kahenge forum, and I'm so happy to see you writing here 👏 fabulous beginning :)