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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: yyy

Mindblowing👏 ...each time I see your story I feel this is the best work of yours but you prove me wrong each time .😳

I can't express in words how much I liked this story ...I have read the story 4 or 5 times already and I still feel like reading again .
-- Nitu, let me be honest... Ever since I am writing here, I have craved for one such response, that was beyond good, and awesome work. Talking sincerely about what I wrote... And one such response, makes my heart fill... And that is what your comment has done... Thank you so much!😃
I genuinely have loved writing this piece Nitu... Frankly, there were two pieces of writings here that I loved writing the most... One was the second part of my TS: krpkab *Post Marriage Track* and the second one is this... I enjoyed thoroughly writing this one as well, though I felt really sick... I too as a writer must have read this piece at least 10 times... And I am happy about it... Thank you so much, Nitu for your love reading this...😃

Coming to the story , what an understanding couple ...to be honest what Sona did was not that bad ..she wanted to discipline the kid ..had it been any other person in place of Dev he would not have reacted this way but Dev had a troubled childhood and I can understand where he is coming from .Sonakshi in your story is an understanding wife with a lot of patience ..I admire her for this quality ...I was thinking if I were in her place I would have lost my cool easily ...😆
-- I know, Sonakshi is not a cruel mother, and she knows where to draw a line, and to make her child on the right path, she needs to be strict, and that is what she did... But, as she said, she had absolutely no idea dev would have got so hurt... He had a reason for that...
As to Sonakshi being the patient person, she has always been a patient person in the show as well... She has lots of patience, as far as it concerned her loved ones... She had tolerated Ishwari and GKB too with loads of patience until Dev broke with her... That is how her character is...
HAHAHAHA... I too sometimes wonder at Sonakshi's patience... I sometimes feel like why doesn't she answer back... But that is how she is...😆

The paragraph where Dev describes Sonakshi as a wife,mom was so beautiful. .it shows how much he values her and respects her for whatever she is doing for their kid ..at the same time Sonakshi assuring Dev that he is also responsible for Ansh's proper upbringing so was heart touching. ..he is lucky to have her as his wife
-- One thing that is appreciable about dev is, he is not a derogatory kind of a man... He knows how to respect women... He is that kind of a man, who would never come back home at night and tell his wife: What did you do all day sitting back at home.,. You are just a housewife... NO! he never does that... He understands the hard work his wife does look after their child... He respects her contributions to the core... Whenever he sees his child growing as a better person, he always knows to appreciate the woman behind it, and he does...
As to Sonakshi telling him responsible as well for Ansh's bringing... Even fathers are so important... Who better than Dev can understand that, what he had missed because his father was no more...😳

I must say the way you have potrayed Dev as a father is so good..he is a loving father at the same time he disciplines the kid whenever needed...in your last OS the way he taught Ansh to address his parents as mama and papa showed he would never blindly pamper the kid ...I so wish we could get such scenes in the serial ..
-- I wish so too... But we are having a very far fetched idea... I have no idea if the Devakshi wedding is on the cards any sooner or not... Their kid is a long forgotten question...
But, I would love to see him dealing with his kids on the show... He will look a perfect father... The one who knows better to make his child a better human being...😃

I hope you are feeling OK today ..please take good rest and tc of your health dear
-- I am having a bad episode of headaches yaar... Today also, its almost the same, except for that I am not vomiting today...
Lastly, my request is still the same ...more stories please 😳
-- Yup! Another one coming soon...😆 You guys have given me chaska to write more and more...😆

Thank you again Nitu... Your lovely comment means a lot to me... Really!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Thanks...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Wow Ishwari and no drama was awesome

-- Hahaha... Thank you... I know it felt like a relief...😆

Sonakshi explaining Dev about their son and school but the fact the little boy slept off without eating had reminded Dev of his sore childhood , as he never had a father sleeping hungry was something that occurred many times but he cannot let this happen to his child and that understandable too but his anger and avoiding to talk to his wife made feel terrible.
-- Unexplained pains that have been there with you for years and decades, it's hard to handle them... But, he, unfortunately, forgot, he has a lovely wife, who would really understand his pain... But he wished to dwell in it alone until she forced him to talk!

Yet when she found out that Dev was hurt by this incident she tried making up .
-- Sonakshi is really a lovely wife!😃

Finally, Dev talks to his wife and clears the issues .
Awesome OS
--Thanks a ton... means a lot to me...😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Verry Beautifully writen story...just Loved it...

Thanks a lot!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sinalfan1

Beautifully written os...do write morei

Thank u!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: star.21

Lovelly workk!!😊👏

Thanks!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SparklingEyes29

👏 👏
Fab piece of writing...
loved it
Do write more. 😊

Thanks a lot!
I have been writing ... Will write more...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _RS_

Omg this was just so genuine and nice

Very very good

Thanks a lot Radhika!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good night Guys!
Meet u all tomorrow! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
very exceptional topic and nice writing...really good...

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