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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

WOW...lovely OS👏 very beautifully written

loved to the core...too good

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kashishbano

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome os.
So emotional.
You have beautifully written it.
Love it.
Thanks for Pm.
Keep writing.

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404_NotFound

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Mindblowing👏 ...each time I see your story I feel this is the best work of yours but you prove me wrong each time .😳

I can't express in words how much I liked this story ...i have read the story 4 or 5 times already and I still feel like reading again .

Coming to the story , what a understanding couple ...to be honest what Sona did was not that bad ..she wanted to discipline the kid ..had it been any other person in place of Dev he would not have reacted this way but Dev had a troubled childhood and I can understand where he is coming from .Sonakshi in your story is a understanding wife with lot of patience ..I admire her for this quality ...I was thinking if I were in her place I would have lost my cool easily ...😆

The paragraph where Dev describes Sonakshi as a wife,mom was so beautiful. .it shows how much he values her and respects her for whatever she is doing for their kid ..at the same time Sonakshi assuring Dev that he is also responsible for Ansh's proper upbringing so was heart touching. ..he is lucky to have her as his wife

I must say the way you have potrayed Dev as a father is so good..he is a loving father at the same time he disciplines the kid whenever needed...in your last OS the way he taught Ansh to address his parents as mama and papa showed he would never blindly pamper the kid ...I so wish we could get such scenes in the serial ..

I hope you are feeling OK today ..please take good rest and tc of your health dear

Lastly, my request is still the same ...more stories please 😳

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Wow Ishwari and no drama was awesome

Sonakshi explaining Dev about their son and school but the fact the little boy slept off without eating had reminded Dev of his sore childhood , as he never had a father sleeping hungry was something that occurred many times but he cannot let this happen to his child and that understandable too but his anger and avoiding to talk to his wife made feel terrible. Yet when she found out that Dev was hurt by this incident she tried making up .

Finally Dev talks to his wife and clears the issues .

Awesome OS

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Verry Beautifully writen story...just Loved it...

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Beautifully written os...do write morei

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Aiman

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

👏 👏
Fab piece of writing...
loved it
Do write more. 😊

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_RS_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Omg this was just so genuine and nice

Very very good

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: gmgi
I have a lump in my throat now. Yes it is a chapter in their life. The emotional scar in Dev; you have portrayed it so beautifully. The depth of it Sona may never know. But she can understand it. thank you for this Ishwari without issues. loved it.👏

Thank you so much Geena ji... I know, I too felt emotional writing it.

Ishwari, well the one who gave me the outline for what she wanted to read in this story, she wanted an issue free Ishwari, who had a nice bonding with sonakshi... So here it is...

I am so glad reading the responses...😃