Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 45

Originally posted by: jigsaw1234

You write beautifully. Timely too for us to reflect on Dev's loneliness in the show. Ofcourse you have projected him more stoic than the reel hero and perhaps yours is close to real and I love it.

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was amazingly written!!!

Please cont soon

Originally posted by: Erian

So so so beautifully written. I know I'm repeating this but I absolutely love your writing skill. Waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: Khusharni

That was heart-wrenchingly sad. Sometimes I forget this isn't the show, but an FF because of how deeply I love it. Feel so bad for Dev, while having to deal with his own pain he has to console Sona who's hurting as much. Hopefully they heal together instead of resenting each other's presence. I feel like that's what's going to happen between Dev and Ishwari in the show. It's already starting, he's already starting to regret making all those promises to Ishwari knowing that the promises he made with Sona are to new and those too old to forget. Please update soon, can't wait!! Great chapter!!

Ps. It's illegal to know the gender of your baby in India? Sorry I'm not from there, but why is it illegal?

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Firstly, sorry for my late comments. I had been away from the forum for a few days. Trying to get my story moving forward a little.

Read both parts in one go.

For me the highlight of both parts combined is the conversation they have in the rain. That whole scene - of them finally starting to letting it all out - came out really well. Icing on the cake was her - I want you to hurt like I hurt.

Finally pain is out. Anger is out. What is left? Exhaustion. Hopefully after that, they will get to sit and talk. Actually communicate.

Good work my lady!! 👏 Already waiting for the next part.

BTW... I was away from the forum, came back and saw all the spoilers. Lost it and wrote an OS.😆 You could call it my own venting session. 😆Fastest written / typed OS by me till date I guess. 65 minutes.

Originally posted by: ssimmy

The story keeps getting better and better 👏 Amazing writing, as always!

Originally posted by: Malvika07

WHAT?! You completed 'I need you for myself' in 65 minutes?!

Lady, you're something else! It was brilliant. Truly. They say art is supposed to make you feel something - Your OS made me feel a lot of things, it disturbed me, and I think that is your greatest victory. Well done, my friend.

Coming to my humble attempt at this story, I'm glad you like the confrontation. The last chapter was to give a little perspective on Dev's state of mind about the whole thing. So that readers can sympathize with both Dev and Sona, instead of only Sonakshi.

Thanks again for your support. I'm always grateful. How's your story coming along? Waiting to read it!

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you so much Malvika 🤗. I am yet to enter the OS thread. Posted and logged out to feed my kids dinner.

And coming to your story, I always felt for Dev as well as Sonakshi. Men are not as expressive as women but that does not mean they don't feel. And Dev here feels more than most men.

My story is crawling at snail's pace but at least it's moving forward. Will let you know once it's done.