Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Malvika07

@bookworm and @Arch no worries, discuss away😊

@bookworm - thanks for the sweet words😃 You HAVE to update!! I'm waiting for the next part eagerly. Plss don't leave us hanging and plss PM me when u update!

@Arch - Good to know you had a break from work and could enjoy with your family and friends 😊 the forum offers me a break from all the work of pressures, glad to see you echo the sentiment😃

Originally posted by: bookworm123

but how could she tell a man who was being an angel to her right now that she remembered him being a jerk

😊

I guess we had the reverse feeling about Dev in the phase just before break up and during break up!!

You have used the cliched amnesia track to write something so non - cliched. Such an excellent idea to bring Sona back to the point when she and Ishwari had a lovely relationship!!

Sona seems to be echoing our emotions because we too could not make sense of the changed Ish and Dev too and the brief flashes of memory seem to be reminding her of a Dev and Ish very different from how they always were and how they are now.

I loved how Sona thinks of this as her first kiss :)

Such a well written update, deftly weaving so many elements intrigue, romance, emotions, introspection and so much more!

Waiting for more!

Originally posted by: bookworm123

The discussions on the forum with virtual friends like you guys are definitely a treat.

My story has been all but abandoned.

Malvika you are writing so well that there is always your story to fall back on if the drama on the show is too much to take

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you, my friend!!😃

I always take what I don't like on the show and change it here so that I can have some peace of mind😆

Ishwari has become like another person now. I was watching the initial episodes yesterday, and I couldn't recognize that lady with the Ishwari they're showing right now. Even she was flawed and possessive. But we could still relate to her. Hope the makers start her redemption sooner than later!!

Thank you once again for taking the time out to read and review😊

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Are I am greedy..kab milega next update😉

Originally posted by: bittersweet1126

Just discovered this story - it's such a fabulous breath of fresh air - update soon!

Originally posted by: Malvika07

*HUGS*

Your story is the most realistic approach to the break up. I soo wanna know what happens next. Take some time if you need, but plss don't stop writing. You write so well, don't deny us the pleasure of reading your wonderful work!!

Maybe after watching the upcoming episodes and seeing Dev fuming in anger and jealousy will help change your mind😉

Dev fuming, pining, jealous I am liking. Am I cruel if I saw the precap multiple times? This has revived my interest in the show. As I told ARCH earlier, their scenes just before breakup were acting like perfect soporifics for me.

Because my interest in the show has returned, I have zilch interest in writing. 😊

Originally posted by: bookworm123

Dev fuming, pining, jealous I am liking. Am I cruel if I saw the precap multiple times? This has revived my interest in the show. As I told ARCH earlier, their scenes just before breakup were acting like perfect soporifics for me.

Because my interest in the show has returned, I have zilch interest in writing. 😊