Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 23

Originally posted by: jhunnai

Read all the parts in one go... beautifully written...pls do continue.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

A second chance to make memories. I liked the kiss portion a lot...it was all new to her and in a way for him too as he gets to make new memories without rancor ...

It was great seeing Ishwari so understanding...

but how could she tell a man who was being an angel to her right now that she remembered him being a jerk

😊

I guess we had the reverse feeling about Dev in the phase just before break up and during break up!!

You have used the cliched amnesia track to write something so non - cliched. Such an excellent idea to bring Sona back to the point when she and Ishwari had a lovely relationship!!

Sona seems to be echoing our emotions because we too could not make sense of the changed Ish and Dev too and the brief flashes of memory seem to be reminding her of a Dev and Ish very different from how they always were and how they are now.

I loved how Sona thinks of this as her first kiss :)

Such a well written update, deftly weaving so many elements intrigue, romance, emotions, introspection and so much more!

Waiting for more!

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you!! Hahaa.. so true! The makers are hell bent on creating more and more drama these days.. as you very correctly put it, they've started taking a hilarious route now.. specially with Ishwari's character.

Originally posted by: SAPU

Beautiful
Continue soon

Originally posted by: ARCH21

Briefly caught the episode late last night... Only thought I have is Shaheer!
In the hands of a lesser actor, this portrayal of Dev would garner no sympathy...
Erica has an author backed role. The script writer is on point with Sona's characterization but if I keep Shaheer out of the equation, they are grappling with the Dixits!!!
I can only laugh at Ishwari and am sure that's not the reaction they are aiming for... !!

Well directed episode but a story progression that's in every other show...

I might as well read your story again 😃

Originally posted by: taara113

I'm so anxious too know wat exactly happened last yr...I'm an ardent follower of Hindi movies and shows (maybe not alot of them but still a good enough no. ); so the point being all my guesses end up being too filmy and far frm the reality ur aiming to potray...so well all I'm left with is wait for you to update (and do it sooner)...

The fifth sixth part were as amazing as the others... the morning kiss was Vry cute... the convo b/w ishwari and Sona was so perfectly written...d awkwardness of ishwarI vry well explained... and ending with the two lovelies...waahhh...

Eagerly awaiting the next one

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank u soo much dear😃

The suspense that I'm planning to reveal is also dramatic, fair warning. But hopefully I'll be able to deal with it in a less filmy manner😆

I'm trying my best to update as fast as I can. I'm in the middle of writing the next chpt. Will try to post it soon! Thanks again for your lovely words😳

Originally posted by: taara113

I almost want to PM u all my guesses...but that will be like spoiling the fun so il patiently wait like a good reader...

And well life is wat it is...simple, plain, dramatic, hyper, violent ...alll emotions at the end of the day and we all go thru them...the trick eventually is to be true to the emotion and not make it into ur joke...if ur true to that emotion, I think you will find enough likeminded ppl to read and appreciate...

But if u make an absolutely normal lady(she has suffered, she is possesive and she feels helpless about those feelings understandable ) into a vicious c**t of a woman god knows where we are heading...id liked that ishwari that standing in the kitchen had said ...y am I getting angry on her its not her fault that dev didnt tell me...I knw I knw the next diaogue had spoiled the beauty this one cld hv been but well der was still some hope fr d character...now the kind of expressions she gives can beat any vamp in TV and supriya ji is a gr8 actor; if they wil giv hr vampish stuff she will pull that off convincgly and we are convincingly getting irritated...and this show doesn't even get gr8 trp I'm not evn sure who are they trying to target wid all this...the limited ppl who watch are watching...

Well too much on show...just got off tracked... but ya I'm sure ul put bind things amazingly in ur stry...gr8 gng :)