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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

amazinggg update..
loved it...
dev came on time...great..
beautifully penned dev's emotions...
plzz update next part soon...
thanks for pm..

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Ashwini

@star.21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Lovely update!!!😳

You kept me hooked thru out the story right from part1!!👏

Loved the character of Adi too😊 Someone who knows Dev pretty well.

N the best part was the final part!!❤️

Loved loved loved loved ittt!!!!🤗

Devvv baaabu pehechaan lo apni Sona ko agle update me😆

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..juhi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

awesome update...radha rani...think of the consequences when dev gets to know the truth...

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Gayatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Waiting for the next update

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sa1234B

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

lovely update...speechless !!

u r an amazing writer👏

eagerly waiting for next part...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

loved it

I so want dev to know the entire truth asap

cont soon

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mgram505

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

adi describing abt Dev and Dev thinking of sonakshi in this manner...I am happy seeing al this...but then aft Dev closes the door and opens again and all nxt happened...I just can't hold..it's too...I never got emotional on seeing movies etc...but after reading this of sona condition...but really the way you describe...led me some emotional... really superb...I read many ff on this forum...but I check my inbox only to see whether I receive ur pm...really waiting...and ur effort to write and time you spend is really worth it...and...I am still searching words to describe your writing skills...

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Erian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Oh wow. Don't have words to describe your skill. Amazing piece of work it is.

Waiting

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: randomramblings
you got me hooked. brilliant writing👏 .please PM me whenever you update.

Originally posted by: ssimmy
Beautiful update! Please PM when you update next 😊

Thank you! 😃

Pls send a buddy request to my other account , Devakshi_PM to be able to receive PMs for this SS or any of my future DevAkshi work.

Edited by Mushfika - 9 years ago

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Mushfika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Read all the chapters in 1 go. Good flow. The fact that Dev is attracted to Sona even without know about her is wonderful.
In this, Radha is being the pillar in between DevAkshi. I just wonder why you are not making Sona more resourceful. She is a college student, how does she pay for her fees and doesn't Radha know about it?

Thank you!😳

@Red: I had mentioned it in chapter 2 or 3, I believe. Nevertheless, let me clarify. She's taking student loans from the bank to cover the tuition fees for her program. Since a co-applicant is required for any full time program, she has divided her course load into part-time for which she is not entitled to submit that application. Also, being it a part-time program, no collateral security is required. Though diving the course load might cause her to stay an extra year or two to achieve the degree...

And no, Radha is not aware of her continuing with studies since she wasn't required to be involved as a parent in any of the procedure of the loan application. And as mentioned above, her program is part-time, therefore, her course schedule isn't as tight as it would be if it were a full time program, making it smooth for her to attend classes while continuing her job at Radha's relative's house.

My apologies if I wasn't clear enough providing the details in the actual chapter.

@Blue: In what way?

Edited by Mushfika - 9 years ago