DevAkshi SS: Hidden - Chapter 13 | Pg 53 | 06.09.2017 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wowww...is she not wearing that pendant ? This is so amazing and I am glad this Dev is a strong character . This comes as a Solace that we all needed ... I loved it...enjoyed reading every bit of it...Men should be protective when it comes to their lady love...I really liked the hospital scene...please write the next part soon...I know I am being greedy here but what to do ...you are too good with your write ups...eagerly waiting for the next part....humble request pls dont be long to post the next one 😊


No comments on the pendant, as of now😆

@red: Believe me or not, the hospital scene was supposed to be included later on in this SS, but honestly, I just couldn't hold back anymore, having such tensed atmosphere in the actual show, I just needed something that could not only give me a break from the irritation I felt watching last few day's episode, but also cheer you guys up a bit and give you all a thread to hang onto even if it is for the time being. And I'm so glad that you felt that way😳

@Blue: Lool you're so cute 😆 I love how you always say "I know i'm being greedy" with the attidue of "aab kya kare, yeh dil mange more"😆 Yes darling. Will try my best to update soon. I'm planning to throw in a teaser😉


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

8 chapters... Ab toh let Dev know who this girl is? Also, this whole work you've done is f*cking brilliant I can't explain how amazing it is I'm addicted to this story and this world you've spun with your web of magical words and characters... Can't wait for the next update I love you for this story omg


Aww love you more for all the fabulous comments🤗

@Red: I see whatchu did there 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gmgi

He knows it is her. His heart have already recognised her as the one. Only his mind need to catch up. So beautifully you have etched that scene. His fear of losing her again... Her finding solace in his arms. They don't need words. It is their hearts that is speaking for them.

So beautiful. Thanks for the PM n also don't mind waiting since it is so worth the wait.👏


Oh you have interpreted every bit of that scene so precisely! 👏 Readers like you just make me feel accomplished. Hearty thanks to you! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima17

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME its a small word used to describe what i felt after reading this chapter pls update soon and thanq sooomuch for da PM



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.21

Lovely update!!!😳

You kept me hooked thru out the story right from part1!!👏
Loved the character of Adi too😊 Someone who knows Dev pretty well.
N the best part was the final part!!❤️
Loved loved loved loved ittt!!!!🤗
Devvv baaabu pehechaan lo apni Sona ko agle update me😆


Thank you! 😳
Yup, Adi is actually one of my fav characters 😉

@Red: Haan yaar, pata nahi kyun Dev ke dimaag ki batti hi nahi jal rahi hai 🤔
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mgram505

adi describing abt Dev and Dev thinking of sonakshi in this manner...I am happy seeing al this...but then aft Dev closes the door and opens again and all nxt happened...I just can't hold..it's too...I never got emotional on seeing movies etc...but after reading this of sona condition...but really the way you describe...led me some emotional... really superb...I read many ff on this forum...but I check my inbox only to see whether I receive ur pm...really waiting...and ur effort to write and time you spend is really worth it...and...I am still searching words to describe your writing skills...


Oh☺️

Let me hug you

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You leave me tongue-tied with your comments every.single.time!!! You don't know how much those words mean to me...Comments like this motivates me to an extent I just cannot comprehend. Thank you so much for making me feel so special! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika


Aww love you more for all the fabulous comments🤗

@Red: I see whatchu did there 🤣


Umm... Mushfika (di) what exactly have I done here? And @brackets: I've addressed you as di because everyone here is a di to me because I'm one of the youngest on this forum (I guess) I'm 14. So tell me if your younger than me please lol

Take care love you hugs 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone


Umm... Mushfika (di) what exactly have I done here? And @brackets: I've addressed you as di because everyone here is a di to me because I'm one of the youngest on this forum (I guess) I'm 14. So tell me if your younger than me please lol

Take care love you hugs 🤗


Check out the blue part and see if you get it.

Aw! Go ahead and call me Di☺️ 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika


Check out the blue part and see if you get it.

Aw! Go ahead and call me Di☺️ 😉

Lol I still have no idea XD well it was literally frickin brilliant no joke I mean amazing as eff. Ab toh batado na Di
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Lovely. Wonderful work.👏 And special applaud for that complete stretch of scene starting from when he finds the store room door open to his promise that he won't let anything happen to her. The scene is seamless, natural and intense. Above all, true to your Dev's character. 👍🏼


I think his heart has already recognised the girl. Just a matter of time for the brain to catch up. 😉

I like this Adi too by the way. Cute guy. Smart and Perceptive.


Thank you so much! 🤗 So SO glad you enjoyed the last scene and felt that way!

@red: 😆Pata nahi... It's dev after all... You can never be too sure😉

Right? Adi is one of my favorites! 😳
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