Devakshi OS- The Fault in Our Stars LAST PART UPDATED(Page 9) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg ! KKHH type basketball and all haan

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story dear
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Originally posted by: Pilu05

Omg ! KKHH type basketball and all haan

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you people for appreciating the second part as well. I am overwhelmed at the response. So as I had promised , I am here with the 3rd part. Hope you all will like it.
PART 3.

It was weekend time and Sona ,Elena and Arjun gathered at Arjun's place. It had become a practise for them to meet up in any of theirs house during weekends.
Arjun: Ye week to kaafi mazedhaar tha. Kyu Elena??
Elena: Haa! Kuch zyadha hi mazedhaar tha!
And Sona knew what exactly these both meant. Even for her it was the most memorable week , but she hesitated to share her excitement. Sona: Mere liye teek-taak tha!
Elena: What!! Agar tumhare jagah me hothi na me toh kushi se marr hi jaathi!!
Arjun: Not bad Sona! Aur usne tumhe message thak kiya!
Sona: Tumhe iss bare maine bathaya nahi tha! Phir kisne?...(looking angrily at Elena) Tumne??
Elena: Haa! Maine!!
Sona:maine kaha tha na ki me khud bathaungi! Koi baath tumhare pet me 5 minute se zyadha nahi rehthi kya?!
Elena: Ithni exciting baath thi..mujhse raha nahi gaya!
Sona: Achha ji!!
Elena: Wo sab chodo..tu use pasandh karthi he na??
Sona: Phir se ye mazaak shuru math karo Eli..!
Elena: I'm serious Sona!!
Sona: Tu aur serious!!!
Arjun: Sona..iss baar hum seriously tumse pooch rahe he.
Sona: Ab tum bhi! Mujhe iss baare me baath nahi karni.
Elena: Par hume karni he Sona.
She comes and sits next to Sona.
Elena: Sona dekh...atleast humse toh jhoot math bhol.. Do you even realise tujhme kithne changes aaya he? Tu aajkal zyadha haasne lagi he. Kabhi bhi tujhe ye sajna-wajna sab pasandh nahi tha. Aajkal tu wo bhi karne lagi he. Apne aap pe vishwas karne lagi ho. Logo se ghul mil rahi ho. Tumhe usse dekhke patha nahi kaunsi positivity aa jathi he. Tumhe patha nahi he maine aur Arjun ne kithni koshishe ki...but Dev ne ... Sona: Aisa kuch nahi he Elena..wo..
Elena: Pehle mujhe apni baath complete karne do. Dekh..tu hume apni feelings batha sakthi he Sona.
Arjun: Haa Sona...Jo bhi tumhare mann me he tu hume keh sakthi he. Shaayadh hum hi kuch help kar sakthe he.
Elena: Tell na Sona..Tell na ki tu usse pyar karthi he?
Sona(without facing Elena and Arjun): Haa..Karthi hu.. Par ye pyaar kum stupidity zyadha he. Maine to usse sirf ek baar teek se baath ki he..Aur usse roz dekhna aur use admire karna thodi na pyar hotha he. Log hasenge Elena! Shaayadh Dev bhi!
Elena: Tu chaahe kuch bhi karo Sona, log toh baathe karthe rahenge. Tu kyu un logo ki baathe sunna chahthi he. Aur ye kya stupidity keh rahi ho? Zaroori nahi he ki har love story ek hi tarah ho! Tumhara ye usse ek baar bathe karna aur admire karne se ye zyadha important he ki wo tumhare life ko kaise effect kartha he. Ye saari baathe duniya ko choti cheeze lag sakthi he Sona..par tum hi jaanthi ho ki iska asar kya hotha he, kya value hotha he. Log isse nahi samjhenge aur shaayadh me bhi nahi! Isliye tumhe ye sab sochke darr ne ki koi zaroorath nahi he!
Arjun: Haa Sona..Eli teek keh rahi he! Aur jithna me Dev ko jantha hu. Wo ithna bura bhi nahi he ki kisi ke feelings ka mazaak bana dhe.
Sona was in tears.
Elena: Sona...kya hua?? Ro kyu rahi he??
Sona: Kuch nahi. I am indeed blessed ki mujhe tum dono jaise dosth mile. Warna patha nahi..mera kya...
Elena cutting her words...hugged her bestie tightly.
Elena: Lucky to tu he!
Arjun: Mujhe bhi hug chahiye. And all 3 share a group hug.
Elena: Achha ab batao! Dev ko kab propose karne waali ho??
Sona: Kya!! Ithni jaldhi???
Arjun: Kya Elena tu bhi! Tera bas chale toh tu abhi ise aur Dev ko bhagakar shaadi bhi karva degi! I think hume todha time lena chahiye. Elena: Me toh aise hi keh rahi thi!!...I know Sona ke mann me abhi bhi yahi hoga ki Dev kya sochtha he uske bare me. So why not tu use aise hi ek baar milo aur kuch baathe karo. Thab thoda shayadh tumhe idea aa jayega.
Arjun: I guess she is right. Abhi bhi ek mahina wo college me hi he. Kahi college canteen me ya coffee shop me milne bulao ..like tum dono ki pehli date bhi ho jayegi! Kyu Elena!
Elena: Yup! Thats a great idea. Chal Sona..usse mesaage kar aur date pe bula!!
Sona: Ek minute. Mujhe bhi kuch decide karne doge tum dono? Aur ye date wate mujhse nahi hoga! Aur kal se seminars bhi shuru ho rahe he...aur tum dono ho ki date me lage ho!!
Elena: Oh no! Ye seminar ko bhi abhi hi aana tha! Toh phir ek baar seminars ho jayega. Tumhe usse date pe...ok..date nahi toh atleast aise hi coffee pe bulana hoga..!Okay?
Sona: Okay. Thab thak koi iss baare me bath nahi karega. Fine?
Elena and Arjun(happily): Yes boss!!

On the day of seminar, In the temple near by the college.
Sona: Bhagwanji! Universeji! Please please please make sure ki aaj ka seminar acchi tarah se ho jaaye! Please please..Kuch gadbad nahi honi chahiye!
Just then someone behind her says : Aap bhagwaan ko dhamki de rahi he ya dua maang rahe he???
Sona: Ye awaaz tho suni suni si lagthi he! And turns back to see Dev there!
Sona: Dev!!! Aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Dev: Kyu..me mandir nahi aa saktha?
Sona: Aisi bath nahi he...
Dev: Wo actually yahi paas se hi guzar raha tha ki aapko madhir jaathe huve dekh liya. Tho socha aapse milke hi jaau. Waise kya baathe ho rahi thi aapke bhagwaanji se?
Sona: Wo actually aaj seminar he. Bus wo acche se ho. Isliye...
Dev: Seriously!! Aap seminar ke liye nervous he?
Sona: Haa..naya college..naye log. Isiliye thodi nervous hu.
Dev: Accha! Ok then All the best..! And he forwards his hand for a handshake.
Sona looks at him and his hand..him and his hand...
Dev: Aise kya dekh rahi ho! Dont worry. Ithna bhi bad luck nahi hu!
Sona quickly shakes hand when he says dat.
Sona: Aap kisi ke liye bad luck ho hi nahi sakthe!
Dev smiles in response.
Sona(to herself): Bus yahi chahiye tha!
Sona: To me chalthi hu. Dher ho jayegi.
Dev: Okay. All the besst again.

Sona'z seminar goes pretty well. She rushes to canteen as she skipped her breakfast in tension of seminar. But she was still worried and lost thinking about how Elena'z seminar would go.
Just then Dev arrives out of nowhere.
Dev: Kya bath he aaj jaha jau aap mil jaathe ho!
Sona(surprised): Wahi toh! ..Aaj ki training session ho gaya aapka?
Dev: Nahi maine aaj attend hi nahi kia.
Sona: Arreyy..lekin kyu?
Dev: Aise hi...dostho ke saath time spend karne ka mann kar raha tha..par sab busy he. Aur ab beech me training attend karna bhi sahi nahi hoga.
Sona: Toh aap mujhse baath kar sakthe ho. Me bilkul free hu!
Dev: Waise! Seminar kaisa raha?
Sona: Luckily it went good! Jithna socha tha usse jyada achha raha! Dev:Shukhar he mera milna beneficial raha!
Sona: Haa haa..I hope Elena ka bhi accha ho raha hoga!
Dev: Wo chatter box bhi seminar de rahi he aaj!?
Sona: Chatter box??! Haha...Haa uska bhi seminar aaj hi he.
Dev: Thodi pagal nahi ye apki dosth??
Sona: Hoo..pagal math kahiye use. Janthi hu baathe thoda zyadha karthi he. Par wo hi meri strength he. Agar wo sath nahi hothi tho patha nahi mera kya hotha!
Dev: Aapki dushmano ki tho band bajaathi hogi wo!
Sona: Ye baath sahi he! Ek baar patha he kya hua thaa... College me na ladke cricket khel rahe the aur hum dono wahi ground ke pass bench me baite huve the. Galthi se ball mere sar pe lag gaya aur Elena ko ithna gussa aaya ki wo wahi ball jake uss batsman ke sar pe maar diya aur ek lamba chauda bhaashan deke waapas aagayi.
Dev: Thab tho mujhe usse bachke hi rehna padega!!
Sona: Wo aapko kuch nahi karegi. Na me usse karne dungi!
Dev: Thats so sweet of you!
And they both started sharing with each other their childhood stories and recollecting their good old days. Sonakshi, though she didnot have anything good to share about her college days , when Dev shared his stories she felt she was a part in it. Maybe she had lost some good days , but now she was living all of them through Dev.
Dev(looking at his watch): Oh no..! Ithna time kab hogaya. Mujhe chalna hoga. Actually ghar me kuch kaam he isliye.
Sona: Aap jaa rahe ho?
Dev: Mann toh nahi kar raha..par..jaana hoga.
Sona(feeling sad): Teek he. Bye!
Dev: I m really Sorry.
Sona(smiling): Thats ok.
Dev: Better! Okay..See ya! ...
Sona(looking at her watch): Actually bahuth time ho gaya! Baath karthe karthe samay ka patha hi nahi chala.Ye Elena abhi thak kyu nahi aayi? Elena: I am back!!!
Sona: 100 saal jiyegi thu!... Seminar kaisa raha?
Elena: Ek dum fantastic!! Tumne ithni help jo kia tha preparation me! Waise maine abhi abhi Dev ko bahaar jaathe dekha..tu mili usse?
Sona( smiling): Haa...hum baathe kar rahe the 2 ghante se!!
Elena: 2 ghante!!! Batha na..kya kya baathe huvi? Tune usse coffee ke liye poocha??
Sona: Aisa kuch khaas nahi tha. Bas puraane memories ko recollect kar rahe the...
Elena: Aww..
Sona: Par coffee ki baath tho dhimaag me aaya hi nahi!
Elena: Ek number ki jhalli he tu! Aaj raath ko message karke pooch lena! And ha..koi bahaana nahi chalega!!
Sona: Okay boss!!

Later in the night Sona is tensed as to how to ask Dev for coffee and on the other side Elena is calling her continuosly telling her to do it fast! Sona picks up her phone...gathering all her courage and when she is about to type she receives Dev'z message.
It read: " Kal shaam aap coffee shop pe mil sakthi he? Aaj ke adhoore batho ko complete karne ke liye?? "
Sona couldnot beleive her eyes to what she just saw.
Just then Elena calls her.
Elena: Kya yaar Sona..Aur kithna time logi?
Sona(still in shock): Mere poochne se pehle ..usi ne mujhe coffee pe bulaa liya!
Elena: Kya baath he Sona!! Tumhari toh jaise lottery lag gayi!! Chalo me Arjun ki bhi ye khabar sunaathi hu. Tu jaake aaram se soja.
Sona: Ithni jaldhi?
Elena: Tujhe kal besst bhi toh lagna he! So thoda extra sleep! Chalo gud nyt Sona!
Sona: Gudnyt pagal!
Sonakshi sits near the window happily looking at the stars , thanking them for all the wonderful moments she is blessed with.


So thats it for part3.
Hope you all liked it.
Will not provide any spoiler for next part. Keep guessing what might happen!
I will be back tomorrow with the update.
Till then Love KRPKAB😳
Posted: 9 years ago
#46
As always...loved it...and wtng 4 u next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

As always...loved it...and wtng 4 u next part...

Thankyou so much😊
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

As always...loved it...and wtng 4 u next part...

Thankyou so much😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely Part

Dev and Sonakshi meeting and now it does seem like she is becoming more comfortable
with him she enjoyed been with just talking and it seems luck was on her side she did not have to ask Dev to have coffe infact he invited her that is just great
I also like the scene at the temple
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. Sona is in love. Kya baat hai. Looking forward for their coffee date. Pls update soon.

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