Devakshi OS- The Fault in Our Stars LAST PART UPDATED(Page 9)

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Sonakshi : A very bubbly and chirpy girl. But she has lost this side of hers somewhere due to mistrust by her friends. Since then books and studies are her only companion.Longs for a besst friend in her life and that special someone. Life has made her loose trust in making friends and believing in miracles.
Dev: The most charming dimple boy personality and has a huge circle of friends and has massive fan following due to his dancing abilities and sports. Lives a high class life and also awaits for the love of his life and believes in creating miracles.

Both different lives..different views. What will happen when these 2 differnt lives cross each other. Are their stars destined to be together or will the fault in the stars will make them stay apart..??

This story is very much connected to my real life. I thought sharing them with u people with some of my own additions😆 let me know if I can continue...its my first try.

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Part3- page 7
Last part-Page 9
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amezing prolouge yar..plz update soon..
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Amezing prolouge yar..plz update soon..

Thank you so much😊
Will update soon...

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Sounds very interesting
Plz continue ...
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Fantastic Start

Please do continue soon !
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It sounds interesting. Pls update soon..
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Sounds very interesting
Plz continue ...

Thanku😊
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Fantastic Start

Please do continue soon !

Thanku😊
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Originally posted by: Himruta_fan

It sounds interesting. Pls update soon..

Thanku😊 sure will!
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Thank you for the positive response :)
This OS mainly revolves around life of Sonakshi (but yeah Dev baabu will be there :P )
PART 1
Sonakshis life was a small circle of her mom, dad , her brother Saurabh and her 2 best friends Elena and Arjun. Yes she did not have friends during her earlier college days coz she was just being used by her classmates for their own benefits which made her feel low and loose trust in people . But time always has something in store for us, it serves us at the right time. Arjun, her childhood friend and Elena her college mate came as saviours in her life. They knew their best friend deserved more than just pain. They spent most of the time with her nd made her believe that no matter what happens her life is much beautiful than she sees it to be. Sonakshi too loved spending time with them for both of them were bundle of craziness and she used to forget all her pain when she was with them.But still..somewhere the pain of being used by people had broken Sonakshi inside out but she never showed it to Arjun and Elena.
One day in a coffee shop Elena and Arjun were waiting for Sona.
Arjun : Yaar ye Sona kaha reh gayi. Kayi uss Humpty ke saath bhaag to nahi gayi?
Elena : Pagal samajh rakha he use? Wo bhi uss padaaku ke sath? Wo ladki jo pyar ka topic lethe hi apna bhaashan shuru kar dethi he ki- mere liye ye saari cheeze bani hi nahi he..me ye deserve hi nahi karthi etc etc.!! Kahi traffic me phasi hogi..aathi hogi..!
Arjun: Wo sahi he! Abhi bhi unn dhokebaazo ke karmo ka effect usse uthra nahi he...Par... khair ab aisa kuch nahi hoga..ab hum dono milkar life set kar denge! ;)
Just then Sona arrives.
Sona: Kya set karne ki baathe chal rahi he?
Arjun : Wo..Wo...
Elena: Wo...waha dekh rahi ho...tumhare saamne waale table pe ek ladka dekh rahi ho?? Bus ussi se meri setting karwaane ki baathe ho rahi thi..!
Sona: Tu kabhi nahi sudhregi!! College ke lecturers ko leke gali ke mundo thak kisi ko nahi chodthi! :D
Elena : Tumhe usse kya..!Arjun bhi kuch kam nahi he!! Usse kuch kyu nahi kehti?
Sona : Tumhi ne toh usse yeh sab kuch sikhaya he ! Waise mujhe ek important baath kehni thi..
Arjun : Batha na..kya baath he..phir se kisi ne thang kiya?
Elena : Ya kisi se pyaar ho gaya?? :P
Sona: Eli!! Phir se!??
Elena: Accha sorryy..bol na kya baath he?
Sona: Wo mujhe apne final year mba ke liye doosra college jaana padega..
Elena n Arjun: Whattt..!! Par kyu??kounsa college???
Sona: GM Institute of Management.
..Arjun : Ye to humaare sheher me hi padtha he na...phir?
Sona: Haa..janthi hu..hum actually waha permanently shift ho rahe he . Dad ne wahi college ke paas naya ghar le liya he aur college bhi bahuth achha he Dad yahi chahthe he ki me final year ki padaai wahi karu. Dad ne almost admission bhi pakki kar li he.
Elena: What..!! Aur tu ye baath abhi ker rahi he? Tu manaa nahi kar sakthi thi?
Sona: Maine koshish ki baba..par dad ko tum jaanthi ho..Wo mujhe unn puraane classmates se door rakhna chahthe he.
Elena: Par humara kya Sona! Mere uss Nikhil ke saath setting ka kya hoga!? :(
Arjun: Tu aur teri setting!! Koi bath nahi Sona..Aur waise bhi humara college door hi kithna he iske naye college se? Tu tension math le Sona hum roz mil liya karenge aur Eli ki setting bhi kara denge :D.
Sona: Sahi kaha Arjun..Chill na Eli..roz milenge..I promise!! Chalo ab coffee peelo warna thandi ho jayegi.

After many weeks Sonakshi was heading towards her new college..with new hopes and then someone hit her on her back!!
Thuddd!! Surpriseee!!!!
Sona: Elena tu!!Yaha kya kar rahi he!?
Elena: Maine bhi apni puraani college chod dhi.Suna he ki yaha aur bhi zyadha handsome ladke he!
Sona: Tumi ekdum pagal!! Ye kya bachpana he?
Elena: Chod na ye sab. Waha koi basketball match chal raha he..Chal na...tu bhi ek player thi na..phir chal! Maza aayega!
Both headed towards the crowded basketball court. Where the entire crowd was cheering out Dev!Dev!Dev!
Unknowingly Sonakshis heart was beating a lil more faster and was curious to witness the match.
They reached the court and the match was going on in full swing and the cheer for Dev was getting louder and louder!!
Elena: Yaar issme Dev koun he!? Sab log ithna accha khel rahe he!
Sona: Aathe hi shuru? Match dekh pagal!
And the match was heading towards full time and with both teams on a tie it was getting interesting with each passing second. And then a guy in a heroic way put the ball into the basket at the end of full time and the entire crowd jumped in joy!! Dev Dev Dev!!
Sonakshi could not believe her eyes. She freezed for the moment she saw Dev.

*FlashBack*

Sona and her Pre-university college basketball team were practising hard in their court. Just then a team boys from the neighbouring college came there. All her teammates were admiring at the boys while Sona was just playing around with the ball and aiming them into the the basket.
" That was a good one!!" A voice behind her said.
Sona turned around to see who that was. He was a charming boy with that attractive dimple on his face. Sona kept staring at his face when he said " Main aap se hi baath raha hu!"
Sona came to her senses- " Haa..! Sorry wo..Thankyou!" and continued playing..
" Aap isi college ki hai?" he asked .
Sona: "Haa.". Not making an eye contact.
He: Kaafi thagdi team hogi aapki..waise aap akele kyu khel rahi he? Team ke saath kyu nahi??
Sona: Unhi ke saath khel rahi thi...lekin aapke team ke ladko ko dekhkar pagla gaye he. Chale gaye. ...still not making an eye contact.
She wanted to look at his smile that had caught her at the first sight. But she was scared if he would catch her adoring him!
He: Aapko unn ladko ko dekhne me interst nahi he??
Sona: Nahi.
He: Interesting!! ...Kya me aapka naam jaan saktha hu??
Sona: Kyu?
He: Aise hi...Shaayad aaj game me main aapko cheer kar saktha hu!
Sona: Aaj hum koi match nahi khel rahe he.Sirf practice karne ke liye yaha aaye he hum.
He: Damn! Par naam toh batha sakthi he!
Sona: Haa...Sonakshi
Just then his team mate came and pulled him away informing him that his match is just about to begin. Sona turned around to wish him good luck but he was already taken away by his friend.
Sona thought to herself : Jhalli he tu Sona. Sirf naam jaan na chahtha tha. Tu aise react kar rahi thi jaise tumhare atm ka pin mang liya ho. Damn..iss chakkar uska naam bhi nahi pooch payi.
And unknowingly every time she thought about this day she used to smile a lil more and the hunt for his name and to see him again remained still...
*Flashback end*

Elena: Sonaa!! Match khatham ho gaya..Abhi bhi kya dekh rahi he!??
Sona(still recalling her flashback): Soo..uska naam Dev he!!
Elena(confused): Kaun?? Wo?? Tu usse jaanthi he???
Sona(coming back to her senses) Kya? Kaun?
Elena: Ab mujhe ullu math banao!! Tell me!
The crowd was getting cleared from the court except for Dev and his team still celebrating their victory! And then Dev turns towards where Elena and Sona were standing. Dev recognizes Sona even after long time and waves at her. Sona is taken aback by his reaction and smiles at him.
Elena:(at the top of her voice)Oh My God Sona!!! Tu usse sach me jaanthi he!! Tell me tell me!!!
Sona dint want Dev to witness his bestie's melodrama..so she pulled her away from the court towards the college.
Sona: Kya he Elena sab ke saamne aise kyu chilla rahi thi?
Elena: Ab tu mujhe matter nahi bathayegi to aur bhi zor se chillaungi!!!
Sona: Ok ok..I wil tell..ab shaanth ho ja!! And she tells her the flashback events.
Elena: Aaha!!! Not bad!!! Tu toh chupi rusthom nikli Sona!! Pehlaa pyaar n al!!!
Sona: What pehla pyaar stupid!! Me usse pyarr nahi karthi!!
Elena: Bas baa..mujhe math sikha!! I cant wait to tell this to Arjun!!!!
Sona: Nooo...aisa kuch nahi he..tu bekaar me..! Eli..tu use nahi bathayegi...!
Elena: Na baba na...Yes yes yes...
And she calls Arjun and tells everything. And Sona is sittting helplessly looking at Elena and on other side she is very much glad that she saw him..!! Dev!! Finally she found out his name...and that too in the same college!!! She could not stop smiling.
Just then.
Elena: Accha ji akele akele koi muskuraa raha he!! Kya baath he!!
Sona: Chup kar..chall classes ke liye dher ho rahi he!

Thats it for part1.
Let me know if u liked it. Will update the next part tomorrow.
Precap for next part: Accidently Dev and Sona meet at the basketball court after Devz dance event!!
Edited by star.21 - 9 years ago

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