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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: adi35

Nice update šŸ‘




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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shahcharmi21

hello tejaswi...very well written... thanks for sharing with the pm...please continue writing and reveal the secrets soon...can't wait for the next one...




thankyou so much charmi 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is awesome
Thank u for the pm
Really excited to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..thanks for pm 😊



thanks sneha😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

Zaap ...

"arey baby aapne kya kiya yeh " sona's zip was teared off by ved

And he already started giggling ...

" jau aab mein nahi baat karti aapse .. katti "

With that she turned around holding her toren zipped kurta firmly

" accha hua keechu bhaiya ghar par nahi hai .. warna pata nahi kitna embarsment hoti !" she murmered under her own voice

She had a sudden pull on her back

"abb kya baby?" "fatgayi dekho " she showed ved her condition

Ved innocently held both his ears impacting a sorry

Sona melted to his puppy face

"chalo aab mereko zip fit karni hai "

With that both reached ved's (natasha's room) room

" now sit hear mein nha needle aur thread dundti hoon" "aap yeh shinchan dekho"

She switched on the hungama channel

Dev who had accidently steped in the room just to look who had peeped in found sona strugling with her kurti ... he went forward to help her but

" kya kar raha hai dev personal hai woh " " kya sochengi woh" he yelled at himself

"miss bose you need any help? He gathered courage and spoke up

Seeing dev present in the same room tension arose sona.. she hid behind a curtain just to hide her cleavage whi the broken zip had already exposed

" I am sorry mujhe knock karke anna chahiye tha" he apologised

"its ok " she wanted to say dev but had to stop herself from the further happenings

" if you don't mind aap ko natasha ki saree de du? He asked her

" only if you wont mind Mr Dikshit" she replied

Without any second thought he picked a red saree from the cupboard it was the natasha's favourite saree ...

" aap change karlo" he threw the saree on the bed and picked up ved from the room and stormed out.

Mr Dikshit aab aap jaa sakte hai " there came a voice from behind

Dev remember the day he proposed sonakshi world was so perfect for him that day ..

The two ladies he loved were on cloud nine that day ...

Natasha on one side and sonakshi on the another side

FLASHBACK

Natasha kitni der lagega aur ?????? shouted an angry Dev... propose karne tu jaa rahi hai yaa mein ???? mein chala jaunga haan tu nahi nikli aab kamrese toh

Wait nha bhai !!!! came down a yell from natasha " tu nahi rukha toh mein sona ko bata dungi ki tujhe no bole" with that she giggled

"tujhe nha rukh " " nikal jaldi bahar"

They both drove to the venue where natasha had arranged dev to propse her bestie

"theek toh lag raha hoon nha"?

" nahi bandar lag rahe ho dev " she laughed on her own joke

"dekh meine bahot rehersal karaya nha tera aab tu successful hogaya toh mereko double party "

"double party kyu re?" dev interogated her

" tu mujhe good news dega toh mein tujhe nha kuch bataungi go now" she pushed dev and herself went back to handle the arrangments

There was sonakshi clad in a petal red long frock and a minimum makeup done.

" Mr Dikshit natasha nahi aayi usne toh bola bahot important baat karni thi " she searched natasha in every possible direction

" wohh aajayegi " " would you like to dance sonakshi"? he asked

" sonakshi?? " she was shocked

" haan abb tum natasha ki friend ho toh meri bhi friend hi huyi nha" he started giving clarifications

" ohhh lets dance " she replied

Flashback ends

" I love you sonakshi " he murmured with himself

Dev was broken by a trance when keechu bhaiya entered the hall

"dev bhaiya aap gaye nahi " he asked

" aapne kuch suna bhaiya?"

"nahi toh bhaiyaji kuch kaha aapne" keechu asked with anxity

" accha hua kissi ne nahi suna" he left without knowing that the words had fallen exactly where they were meant to

Yes sonakshi had heard them

Then with affection

Now with pain

She drifted the memorylane when he had proposed to her and the things that followed them

Flashback

She couldn't help feeling the adrenaline of her heart when he first took her hand in the moonlight. She felt so protective and secure in his presents, that she hadn't taken much notice of where he was leading her. The scenery was so exquisite, that it left her breathless to the shimmering of the water, left with the moonlight ray as it painted a precise picture of the perfect scene there was no doubt about that; but when he leaned down to her ear and recited one of the most romantic poems, she couldn't help the blush and the sound of her heart pounding inside her chest, to hide the fact that she was falling head over heals for this guy. They made the perfect couple. He spoke every word with affection; love', would make her hands go numb, you're my' would set off her heart as a ticking bomb, and I Love you' meant the world to her. I love you, was the only words she wanted to hear in the world. I love you, was the message of bells that rang in her ears, as she had become one of his to cherish.
He looked into her eyes, their heads were the same level. His eyes were the colour of a dry grass. They emphasized on the freshness his appearance gave to his beauty; but in the moonlight, they looked almost blue. From the pressure of his hands,she could tell he was as nervous as she herself was. Especially when he leaned in, so close she could spell the flouriest scent coming from his breath, which knew she would never forget this moment.
His lips reached her jaw, tracing the lines of her ear to collarbone. They were so warm against her skin as they reminded of soft, little fluffy pillows; and for that moment, reminded her of fairy floss. She couldn't stop her heart from pounding in chest. Her blood flowed rapidly in her cheeks, making the face as red as ever. She lifted her hands out of his, and pulled them up high to his shoulders, where she entwined them with his soft black hair. He put His hands down
at her waist while pulling me closer to his chest. He forced his lips on hers and there she was his, and he was hers

There they felt a stupid urge to breathe and they parted and that time they heard a boo voice from behind

" so can I expect a Mr and Mrs Dikshit in near future ?" questioned a curious natasha who herself was overwhelmed seeing both of them in each others arms

They both simply nodded in a yes

"Woaahhh woww" I am so happy for you guys sona and dev she screamed on top of her voice ..

And went to give them a congratulations wala hug

"aab toh bata do dev ko natasha . he would owe me a double party" said neil clad in his formals.

"Neil ... apko bataya tha nha meine dev and sona will be one for sure " natasha exclaimed

" yes darling " with that he back hugged natasha and kissed her on her cheek

Sona blushed at her bestfriend and newly wed husband

" waise tum dono ne hume good news di toh you guys also need a good news batadu mein?" said neil naughtily

"nahi mera bhai .. meri to be bhabhi mein hi bolungi " natasha replied

"kya chupa rahi hai natasha bata nha aab " dev asked eagerly

" sona - dev !!! guys tum dono soon mama mami banoge" natasha spilled the beans

"what "??? Dev said

" arey dev tumhi ek dum impossible it means natasha is pregnant " she hit dev's shoulder and went forward to give natasha a cheesy hug

"Congrats neil" sona gave a formal handshake

Dev who was already in his joy gave in for a group hug

Flashback ends

Precap : I don't know yet !!!



so now forum wasis your turn go and comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!
So, natasha is dev's sister🤣
And neil and natasha are married🤣
And ved is natasha's son!!
Thank you for clearing all the doubts and breaking the suspense...
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow!!

So, natasha is dev's sister🤣
And neil and natasha are married🤣
And ved is natasha's son!!
Thank you for clearing all the doubts and breaking the suspense...
Cont soon



omg when you guessed ved maybe dev and natasha's son

i was like🤣

and sorry abb tomatoes aur joote maat marna🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
🤣🤣 u made natasha and dev sister and brother🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg nats Dev sister🤣
superb update. .
All my doubts are clear nw. .
Continue soon. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
hi tejaswi thanks for pm ur ss is nice and dev and nuts are siblings ? seriously , its funny , i never imagined it.
great one keep it up 😃
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