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teju

@...tejaswi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Guys i am back since took a gap from os writing thought simply of writing a short story

Hope u guys wont mind to shower your love for this writing too

With positive Regards

prologue - page 1

part 1- page 5

part 2 - page 9

part 3- page 12 { secrets revealed }

part 4- page 16

part 5 - page 20

last part - page 23

Prologue

Tina i want the best caretaker for ved please search every search engine i wont mind even if they demand the highest salary... i just dont care but i just want the best person to look after my son .. the person must be highly qualified shouted an angry Dev ...

Tina: sir among everyone i interviewed i think she is the best but i dont think you will be ok with her sir !!

Dev: who's it tina?

Tina: sir its Miss Bose

Dev fumed in anger

Dev : ohh so now she is up to snatching even my son from me . Appoint her . I will handle the rest

In Mind : so sonakshi agai tu wapas pata nahi abb kya toofan lauogi mere zindagi mein . i will for sure make your life hell this time

Bose Mansion

Dada: sona dekh tera call letter ayya but for being a babysitter? tu yeh job kyu karna chahti hai?

Sona: dada its time to show up my gratitude ... natasha ne bahot kuch kiya mere liye ... i cant even imagine how much i owe her back ..

Dada : you will work for dev ???????????????????

sourav was baffled !!!!

Sona: back to Mr Dikshit dada

And a lone tear passed her eye

so i will continue if i get good response... do comment people and silent readers hit like .. for pms buddy me !!!

waiting for ur response

Edited by ...tejaswi... - 9 years ago

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krystle123

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Posted: 9 years ago

its really interesting and great start dear 👏 continue soon😛

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey tejaswiii😃

well dere r many ques running in my mind after reading dis bt i knww v hav 2 wait for dese 2 unfoldd😔

bt intrestingg one😳dev has a son named ved initialy reading d first line i thought it mite b spelling mistakee 😆bt realised later

okk tats very well written.soo sona will b care taker of ved (natasha n dev son😲)

i guess natasha s no more in dis worldd😳

n dev havingg so much hatred for sonaa🤔

continue soon dear👍🏼

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independent

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Posted: 9 years ago

Totally different. . Nice start. . Continue soon. .

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Ferdous_69

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Posted: 9 years ago

Different nd sounds interesting...
Continue dear...

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey dear ...
Nice start ...

I kinda enjoy these kinds of stories which includes kids who becomes an invisible thread joining the leads...

Will be looking forward to this SS ...
Do continue
- Harshada

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teju

@...tejaswi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krystle123
its really interesting and great start dear 👏 continue soon😛

sure 😉

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teju

@...tejaswi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Missadorable
hey tejaswiii😃
well dere r many ques running in my mind after reading dis bt i knww v hav 2 wait for dese 2 unfoldd😔

bt intrestingg one😳dev has a son named ved initialy reading d first line i thought it mite b spelling mistakee 😆bt realised later

okk tats very well written.soo sona will b care taker of ved (natasha n dev son😲)
i guess natasha s no more in dis worldd😳

n dev havingg so much hatred for sonaa🤔

continue soon dear👍🏼

so lets see ved is whose son i cant reveal it soon !!! natasha is alive or dead u have already got the answer without even asking me ... kudos u are a grt thinker than 😆😆😆

dev has hatred true !!

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teju

@...tejaswi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69
Different nd sounds interesting...
Continue dear...

thanks fara😊

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teju

@...tejaswi...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hey dear ...
Nice start ...

I kinda enjoy these kinds of stories which includes kids who becomes an invisible thread joining the leads...

Will be looking forward to this SS ...
Do continue
- Harshada

me too so i thought of this ... kids in the story add up spices 😆😳😛

thanks fr ur response

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