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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Intense storyline. .excited to see how the story unfolds. ..please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start ND lot more to unfold...waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: yyy

Intense storyline. .excited to see how the story unfolds. ..please continue


pdating today evening😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hermosoanu123

Awesome start ND lot more to unfold...waiting for next



thankyou so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Part -2

Dev could hear the music go boom boom than it changed into a low song !!

Whats going onn in this house????

He went out the room to have a look


she danced on the beats along with ved in her arms...


ved giggles and clapped his small hands expressing his joy...


"Uff...mai to thak Gayi" she told him pouting, ved quickly pecked her nose just like she always do with him...she smiled more widely...


"Aapko pata hai baby main na apke papaa se bohot darti Hu...bap re...kitna chillate hai...tiger ki tarha" she said chuckling not aware of the fact that dev was standing near the door listening to all her words...


"What did u say?" he shouted making her gasp...


"Mai? Maine to kuch nehi bola...sachi" she shook her head in a no...


" maine Sab suna...mai tiger Hu?"he crossed his arms around his chest, glaring her in the process...


"Tiger? Tum? Hey! Bhagwan! Aisa bolne se pehle Mai gungi ho jau..." she said dramatically giving him another reason to get irritated...


"Drama karna bandh karo... Idiot...this is your last warning...i will throw you out of my house...so better you behave properly..." he threatened her and left the room...


"Phew! Bach Gaye hum baby...kya dangerous dad hai apke" she chuckled again and this time ved also joined her...

months passed


It was a normal day in Dikshit mansion while sona busy playing with ved and keechu bhaiya was making food for them...
" bhaiya aap baby k liye khichdi bana do pehle and don't mix any spices okay?" sona told keechu bhaiya who smiled nodding his head...


"Aap na bohot achi ho didi ...jo v apse shadi karenge na bohot lucky honga..." He said smilingly...
sona turned and smiled at herself sadly...thinking that the day is never going to come as the man she loves , he hates her the most...


"Shadi kiski shadi hai?" dev asked walking down from stairs clad in his formal wears...looking as usually hansome...sona looked at him smiling...


"Woh bhaiya Mai sona didi ki shadi ki baat kar raha tha" keechu answered and dev glanced at sona who was still looking at her...


"Oh..that's great news...congratulations sona...go ahead...and I hope you don't want to ruin your reputation in front of your husband by doing this job...so...leave the job before you get married his every word dropped sarcasm...you can join JLS hospital that's where you belong


But only sona knew there is some hidden reason behind his anger ...she smiled sadly as he walked out of the house without having breakfast...


"Tum kabhi badal nehi Sakte dev ...never...mind ko samjha liya...par dil ka kya karoge?" she said in mind and hugged ved tightly who was busy playing with her kurta s zip...

Precap -Devakshi Romance


do leave your comments guys

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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Nice part!!
Tiger part was funny!!
Your precap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Lovely Update

Sona and Ved are bonding very well but every time Dev threatens her to leave his house of course he may be in anger he is also not thinking about Ved
Sona loves Dev while he hates her so something must have happened does he blame Sona in anyway for Natasha not been there for him and Ved
I'm already waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 superb. .
short n sweet update. .
Waiting for devakshi romance. .
update soon. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Nice part!!

Tiger part was funny!!
Your precap


wil make sure u like the precap 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

Lovely Update

Sona and Ved are bonding very well but every time Dev threatens her to leave his house of course he may be in anger he is also not thinking about Ved
Sona loves Dev while he hates her so something must have happened does he blame Sona in anyway for Natasha not been there for him and Ved
I'm already waiting for next update



yeah you are right !!!!😆😉

sona and natasha some link
dev and sona were ex flames

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