DevAkshi SS: Ms Caretaker last part updated - Page 13

hey teju ( hope u dont mind)

read all parts in a go and loved it
superb work yar
so natasha is dev's sister and ved is her son

loved confession part, beautifully written

whats wrong between dev and sona?? eagerly waiting to know
dev loves sona but doesnt show her
loved how u have shown sona and ved bonding
dev's only happiness is ved now and i can feel his pain when ved wants to go to sona leaving dev.

ur precap is scary

continue soon
and plz pm me

Nice update. .

Awesome update

This was very cute
Loved the bond between ved and sona
And the way she convinced them to eat food
And dev asked her to bring her food as well
Precap sounds shocking
Update soon

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
All the emotions written beautifully
Dev was hurt as ved wanted to stay with sona. Liked ending scene.
Precap: more curious to know what happened with Natasha.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: adi35

Beautiful update
but I curious
how Is sona responsible for natasha death

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Every Update the story just gets more interesting

Sona and Ved have bonded well and it seems the little one also understands her very well Dev coming and Ved does not want to be in his arms as he is fond of Sona his mom but it seems that Dev hurt is so deep that he even hurts Sona by telling her not to leave Ved as she left him .

the last scene was so soulful yes Dev is hurt and he seems to cover that up with his anger but he is has this care deep inside of him for Sona like when he says to bring Ved's food with hers

precap makes me so curious , you already know this but hey I'm going to say it again I'm already waiting for an update