DevAkshi SS: Ms Caretaker last part updated - Page 14

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt

hey teju ( hope u dont mind)

read all parts in a go and loved it
superb work yar
so natasha is dev's sister and ved is her son

loved confession part, beautifully written

whats wrong between dev and sona?? eagerly waiting to know
dev loves sona but doesnt show her
loved how u have shown sona and ved bonding
dev's only happiness is ved now and i can feel his pain when ved wants to go to sona leaving dev.

ur precap is scary

continue soon
and plz pm me

Originally posted by: independent

Nice update. .

precap omg sona responsible for nats death. . What happens ya. . Please update soon. .

eagerly waiting. ..

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Interesting concept :)

Awesome story :)

Loved it :)

Update soon :)

PM me :)

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

Read all parts in one go!
Amazing story!
Its got it all... suspense.. emotion... drama.. love...everything!

Thanks for the PM!

Waiting for the next update! 😃👏

part 5

NEIL'S DEATH

Sona was busy through the pages of her favourite forbes magazine while natasha was humming her favourite song . it was natasha's third trimster now and things needed to be more careful so sona had personally decided to assist her bestie throughtout this period .

10 am

Tring Tring Tring

Sona: Natsha tera phone bhaj raha hai utaalu mein ?

Natasha: haan dekh bhai ka hi hoga mostly

Sona: hello

Phone: hello is it mrs lakotia speaking?

Sona: sorry I am her friend I can convey the message you may tell me .

Phone: madam mr neil lakotia met with an accident .

Sona was fully shocked the world around her started spinning . she mustered the courage and inquired about the hospital details . she hurried towards the main door wit natasha s phone

Natasha: sona !!! kya hua where are you going ?

Sona could no more hide her tears with that natasha was worried too

Nats: sona bata nha kya hua

She asked cupping sona's face

Sona: who natasha I will be back right now keechu bhaiya door band kijiye

Tring Tring Tring

The phone started buzzing again

Natsha took it and held it on speaker

Phone: madam aap plz body ko legayi ye

Natasha was even more shocked

Sona took and broke it down into pieces

Natasha: sona kiska phone tha ? bata sona

Sona: natasha tu rukh mein aakar sab batati hoon plz mujhe jane de

Natasha held sona's left hand and placed it on her belly

Nats: sona tujhe mere bacche ki kasam

Sona was completely broken down now

Sona: natasha neil ka accident hua hai

She continued sobbing

Natasha well down with a thud and there was the most unexpected thing that happened natasha was in her labour pain ..

Sona picked her up with the help of 2 servants and rushed to the maternity hospital

2 pm

" sonakshi " came there a tensed dev " yeh sab kaise hua I mean abhi tak toh sirf uska 8^th month hai "

" dev please aap meri baat suniye " sona tried to calm dev

"neil ? neil kaha hai ?" dev asked

" neil died in an accident dev " sona replied still in dismay

" what ? aur natasha ko ?" dev was shocked

" dev meine natasha ko bataya hai" sona replied

" sonakshi !!!!!!! how could yo tell her this at this time were you out of your mind " "damnit " dev rushed towards the operation theater .

There natasha had given birth to a baby boy ...

The nurse handed over the baby to him along with a note

" dear bhai ! I know I am wrong leaving you behind but keep my last memory with you "

Love your natasha

She couldnot have written more than a sentence then this in that pain ...

Over the doctors brought natasha's body to the morgue along with neil's

Dev came out with his nephew no not a nephew he is his son

He is ved dev dikshit

Sona rushed to get the baby in her arms but what she witnessed was that dev dint even let her touch ved

" stay away " he hissed

" dev plz meri baat suniye"

" I said just stay away "

And there was a lady drenched in rain that whole night infront of the hospital on losing her bestfriend , love and her son too..

Present time

It was morning time when dev got ready for office and ved was still sleeping soundly on bed...

dev took ved in his arms and kissed his forehead softly thus waking up him...

"good morning ved beta "he told him slowly rubbing his tummy...

"maa ..." ved wobbled pointing towards the door...

"We will go to your maa but before that you need to get freshen up"dev kissed his nose tip and changed his clothes and nappy...

This is the first time since last 14 months when ved is up and still sona didn't come to take him, every morning sona was the first one to wake up but today there is no sign of her...

Dev thought before driving towards her house hesitantly as ved already started chanting her name...

he entered into her room and found it empty...

"sonakshi are you inside?" he knocked at her washroom door but it was empty too...

dev took a deep breath sharply as an unknown fear clutched his heart tightly...

he turned to leave for searching her suddenly a piece of paper caught his attention...

"Dear dev I know tujhe nehi pasand hai main tumhare paas rahu ...so I m leaving...tum khush rehna aur ha mere bete ka khayal rakhna...and I love you...tum believe karo ya na karo...my heart is beating for you only...take care..."

Her letter declared snatching the world under his feet...

Precap - decision pending - next part is last

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Originally posted by: Jade0001

A Shocking Update

So Neil met up with an accident and Sona did not want to tell Natasha but the situation was such that eventually Sona had to tell Natasha and in shock Natasha went into labour when Dev heard that Sona told Natasha he was furious but he also did not hear the full story from Sona so that is the reason he did not want Sona near him but now because of Ved he goes to Sona's house only to get a shock that she has left as he does not feel good when she is around .