Few Colours of Love. FF Devakshi :) UPDATED Part 3

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Loved the introductory chapter, nicely written.. Wish you'd update soon..

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Few colours of love...very apt...loved the flow and you made Sona's feeling so heart wrenching...thank you!

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Gr8 start. Can't wait to read more of why they are no longer together and why they both have their share of misconceptions.

"I hate you Dev"

"And I believe you never loved me"

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

It is too good!!

Cont soon and plz pm me

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adyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

It was amazing man ,
Dev acted like a jerk by saying that u never loved me ,
Gosh , u literally got me hooked , pls update soon and PM me when u update too

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

very well written dude... 👏

tats was realy diff nd i luved it!! ❤️

i jzt wanna say tat u portrayed sona's chrctr well...

but plz try to keep up wid the character of dev... u wrote him in a total diffrnt manner..

nyway ovrol it ws gud😉... continue soon nd pm me!! 😃

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Dhanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

thanks for all the lovely comments guys... i just tried to write a short story...
thanks for the response...
will update soon...

:)

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Dhanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Few Colors of Love...

Part 2

Asha, Sona's Mother was not pleased with her decision of moving to Mumbai and that too all alone... "No way Shona...you are not going anywhere..."

Sona shook her head and picked up her phone... she wouldn't talk to anyone. All her heart and mind were still thinking about Dev. Her life was encircled and influenced with him all the way...

"Look at this photo...you know this boy is really good for you." Asha kept the photo in front of Sona's eyes...

Sona didn't even look at the picture...how can she tell her mother that she cannot marry anyone? How can she let any other man touch her?

She remembered the first time Dev touched her body and soul...

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"Leave me Dev..." she mumbled requesting him to let her go... though her own heart never wanted to leave him...

Her little protests weren't taken seriously and he kissed her
passionately...she could feel her lips crushed ...she tried to meekly push him but the warmth of his love didn't let her...instead her arms snaked around his neck...

she felt his weight on her... she didn't realized until he bite her on the neck...

"Ouch"... she pushed him a little...

He smiled at her without leaving his grip

"What are you doing Dev?" she rubbed her neck

"I really want to bite you all over" he whispered gazing in her eyes...

"No...it hurts" she murmured with a knitted brow on her forehead...

His eyes dropped at her cleavage...the moment he tried to take off her dress she pulled away and sat on the bed... shy, she looked away adjusting her dress...

"What happened?" softly he held her hand...

She looked into his fervent eyes... she never wanted to stop him but how can she let him.

It was only today all his family went away for some wedding, she only got to know when she entered the house. Dev didn't inform her before.
He had prepared the dinner for her...

"Nothing...I...I don't know if this is right or..."

He kept his hand on her mouth "you and me will always stay together. You don't have to think about any consequences when I have hold your hand. You are mine Sona...don't think about right or wrong"

His words melted her in his arms...

She knew he's always with her. He has always assured this to her. She kissed him on the forehead...

His hands went on the zip at the back of her dress... slowly he pulled the zipper down...he showered small kisses on her shoulder and neck.

She felt her body possessed by his...she closed her eyes and held his hands tightly.

She felt her body crushed under his...the sharp pain went away after a while. And soon she was sweating under his touch...

Her body was now familiar with his. She didn't feel the shyness anymore.

"I love you Dev" she kept her head on his arm and closed her eyes...

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Sona threw the book away thinking about the night...why did she let him come so closer to her.

And not once but few times after that. Her head was spinning thinking about the moments she spent with that insensitive man who never pays attention to her thoughts.

"Sona...what are you thinking...? Did you look at the photo?"

How can she tell anything to her mother who looks so overjoyed that finally she found a Mr right for her... "Yes mom..."

Asha was happy with Sona's response... "Ok then, I will book a meeting with this boy"

She walked away leaving Sona thinking about her past. But this time she was prepared to listen to her parents...and she would try to adjust herself to her present life.

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Sona walked in the restaurant with Kushal... "You're vegetarian Sonakshi"

Sona nodded and tried to smile at his talks when her eyes fell on Dev and Natasha... annoyance had to come naturally rolling on her side...but she tried to pretend...

"Wow...what a lovely dance hall... come let's have a dance Dev" Natasha prompted...

Dev was continuously watching Sona since he entered the restaurant...
Sona was always possessive about Dev...even dancing with that girl was intolerable for her...

but this time she wouldn't give any importance to this. After all she decided to move on with her life.

Kushal was still glancing at the menu when Sona interrupted her "can we dance for a while"

Kushal smiled at her gesture "oh sure Sonakshi"

She gave her hand in his and started dancing... Dev was now burning with rage...this was the last thing he would ever wanted to see.

His own Sona dancing with someone else...

He immediately left the dance floor and walked out...

Sona was least bothered about dancing... "Let's eat something" she quickly let off Kushal's hands from her waist...

Next Day...

Sona was still sipping her morning coffee when she saw heard a bang at the door... irately she got off from her chair "how dare you Mr Dixit..."

He closed the door from behind and bolted it

"What are you doing?" she snapped at him

"Stop it Sona...what are you doing?" he held her arms and pinned her against the wall

She was now glaring at him "leave me"

Dev didn't leave her...instead held her more closely... "Listen to me very very carefully Sona."

Sona had never seen Dev behaving like this before "Dev...you can't talk to me like that"

"When you don't want to listen to the whole truth, I can speak what I want" his arms embraced her waist...

"Stop touching me" she tried to lose his grip around her...

"No one can touch you except me. And If I see this again, you can't imagine what I will do"

She could feel his fingers digging into her waist...she wouldn't cry in front of him.

"I am marrying him..." she countered indignantly

His frowns deepened... And the grip was more tight "forget that...no one can even think about you"

"You can't stop that Mr Dev Dixit...just mind your business"

"that's exactly what I am doing" his eyes scanned her features... his one hand held her waist and the other grazed her cheeks... he bend down and kissed softly on her neck.

"Stop punishing me and yourself Sona" he whispered in her ear kissing her neck again...

She closed her eyes feeling his touch. The touch that always melts her. She knows clearly that Dev loves her but still she can't forget what she saw...

"No, just leave me" she shouted furiously...

Another instance she felt a sharp pain on her neck and she pushed him away...

"Just go to your Natasha. Don't fool me"

Dev irritably opened the door and walked away...

Sona cried aloud...she couldn't understand why was Dev coming to her life every time she wants to forget him... she touched her neck and recalled he had sucked and nibbled her skin leaving a red mark.

"You have left marks all around me Dev. I trusted you so much and you..."
She said to herself crying bitterly.

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Dev saw his mother waiting for her

"Ma...I have told you so many time to not wait for me. Did you eat something" he looked at the dining table

Ishwari smiled "yes I have...you know now I am very used to it...since Sona has tuned me to follow the time table..."

Dev smiled at Sona's name... He knew his mother likes her but how can he explain anything to her unless he knows what's wrong with Sona...

"Here...I made your favourite food" Ishwari served him lovingly...

He took a deep breathe...though he wasn't hungry at all but he had to eat else his mother will start wondering...

With every bite he took he remembered how Sona used to make him eat dinner. He really missed her.

He tried his best to get her back but there was no use. She wouldn't listen at all.

"I was wondering what did you thought about Natasha" Ishwari asked her dear Son who was looking at the plate and eating slowly.

Dev nodded his head "no Ma... you know she's just a friend and a business partner. That's all. I can't think about spending my life with her and right now I just want to concentrate on my work"

Ishwari smiled... "I know and I know you're my responsible Son"

She patted his head "get a good sleep" she walked away

"How can I tell you Ma, someone has completely possessed me and my sleeps" Dev murmured to himself

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Edited by Freethinker - 9 years ago

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Unable to send pm guys... sorry bout that... i will update this one regularly ... once or twice a week... 😉

Edited by Freethinker - 9 years ago

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404_NotFound

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I only have one thing to say after reading this update...omg it's awesome ..truly it's one of the best ff I have read in this forum...I love it ...such a passionate n intense story

...I just wish this part didn't end ...I wish it was little longer...

I absolutely love to see jealous Dev...its a treat ...I wish they show something lie this in the serial. ..looks like Sona misunderstood Dev. .maybe she heard or saw something and is so angry that she is not allowing dev to explain things to her

...eagerly waiting for next part...please update twice a week ..

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