Regards-Natasha Dev and Sonakshi SS. Part 6 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Nice start dear
Loved it
Update soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wonderful.
Please update soon.
The plot is really interesting.
But the story ended really soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part II

Somewhere, sometimes, we all wait for our soulmate, seems like god plan to show those two eyes so that at right time, this person starts finding those eyes around all the time.

Dev is not able to recognise in his dreams whose eyes are they and he gets up suddenly, trying to figure out.

" why am I having such dreams these days..uff" rubs his hand in his hair and gets back to sleep.

Unable to sleep now, " urrgg" .."what" questions to no one but someone.

He waits till morning and while awake he is thinking about all happened in the night at restaurant. Why was he so disturbed not seeing her around for a while and got upset as she left for her home without informing or rather he lose an opportunity to drop her back home.

" why I like dropping her these days" a smile pops up on his face.

" Dr. Bose, Ms. Bose..Sonakshi...Sona" he remembers how during her accident he progressed to "S-O-N-A" he says her name with holds and giggles.

The thought gives him sleep.

It's 9 am now, he is ready to go to his workplace but Ms. Bose has not arrived yet, he is wondering why? As he has his breakfast and starts to leave, he looks at her arriving figure and he feels as if the flower just blossoms. He leaves.

On the other hand, Sona doesn't want to look at him, she doesn't want him to read her eyes. She is escaping herself from his eyes, he reads her mind all the time.

"How do I control myself seeing him" fidgets Sona.

"Phew...control Sona..control!" She enters in the kitchen.

After a while when she is sure that Mr. Dixit is not there, she feels relaxed and continues with her daily routine of instructing kichu bhaiya and let him follow rest of the stuff.

After finishing all day long routine, she went to auntyji and request her to sit with her privately. As usual mami was wondering for what, but she leaves them.

"Aunty ji, you must be feeling all well now, I think, since ummm, you are fine and you are taking care of yourself quite well now, so I should leave. My job for you seems to be over." She takes a pause as she sees the face of Ishwari, Ishwari seems to be surprised.

"Aunty ji, if anytime you feel the need of having me back, I will come but please understand there are more people who need me and I should help." She tells her

" Beta, kuch hogaya hai kya" a concerned Ishwari speaks " kya kuch kaha Dev ne tumse?"

"Nahi aunty ji, aisa kuch nahi hai"

" nutrition, tum alag alag lag rahi ho." Listening this Sonakshi takes her leave.

While she is leaving on the door, she meets Dev, he smiles to her" how are you ms Bose.?"

" am fine, thank you, excuse me" a stern reply.

" Ms. Bose " he stops her.

He faces her back. " Ms. Bose"

She stops but doesn't face him as it is difficult for her to inform him what she spoke to his mother and she is adamant to be on it.

hope u all like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just read both the updates.
Very well written.
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very very nice...bt why it's so short????plz update next part very soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone, the update is coming in the way.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART III

The feeling of losing oneself is very clear once you are in love and then understand the fight between your mind and heart when your conscious doesn't allow you to melt down. This can happen in fraction of seconds. The very reason Sonakshi is standing out of his house even if her mind is forcing her to just move on, her heart doesn't allow her.
"Ms. Bose" his voice is little louder giving a hint of his arriving anger.
She stops right over there not because she is scared of him but her inner world is upright down with the fight between mind and heart.
He reaches to her and face her " What is your problem?' and his phone rings; it shows "Natasha calling"
"Hello, Ms Natasha." he speaks on his phone. There listening her name, she clenches her kurtis with both hands, she excuses herself from his eyes and takes an exit only to be held by Dev and cornered by him to the side of lawn where no one can see them.
"Yes, Ms Natasha, am fine, hope you are doing good too" While he is cornering her to the wall.
He tries to remove his coat quickly with the same hand with which he held her and cornered her. He is genius at everything; he covers her against the wall.
Sonakshi gets angry with his behavior and thought what's up with him, he is not a kind to be doing these things. He intentionally keeps his face closer to hers and talks on phone leaving no stone unturned to fail all her efforts to move without talking to him once the phone conversation is done.
" Yes, I will ask Ms. Bose too."
" Ummm, I wonder if she will refuse, generally it's hard to convince her but I will try."
"Yes, off course, I won't be alone at the party." Sona surprises, she assumes that he might be talking to NATASHA about taking her to a party, but why will she go.
"Sure, BYE"
She gulps as he keeps his phone in his pocket and places the same hand on the other side of her on wall.
"what is this Mr. Dixit?" she stammers but angry
"What..What?"
She places her hands to both of his hand and gestures him to remove. He being him avoids her gestures and pretends to be stronger to be removed by her and the fact comes out to be, all her efforts went to vein.
"Mr. Dixit, I will be late." he keeps on looking to her with a strange feeling to never lose her and keep holding her till eternity.
He gets numb but stays earthy, strong and rock solid, for a moment he loses all his control to hear all voices around him, he just kept staring at her lips, he could not gather what happened to him untill Sona pinches him hard, as soon as he removed his arms apart, he kept them back as quick as he can. Sona could barely move in that fraction of time.
"What are you doing Ms. Bose, it hurts." he speaks child like.
" and what are you doing Mr. Dixit, I will be late"
"It's fine" he says
"What?" she screams and he places his hand on her mouth before she completes.
"Shhh--, Dekho." he looks at her lovingly and sees anger lines on her forehead. His fingers take the same path of anger on her forehead that melts Sonakshi, sends chill down her spine. This is being the first time he touched her all in the consciousness. in a sudden reaction she closes eyes and turns her face to the side, he runs his finger from her forehead down to her cheeks and to her neck, he stops.
He is surprised on his actions but he doesn't take off, she opens her eyes and jerks his hands off.
'I want you to be late Ms. Bose, I want to drop you home." he says that made them lost in each other. he gets a little more close that almost touches their forehead.
"Stay like this for a while, I want you to be late." he speaks between their breaths.
With heavy pounding heart and hot air they kept like this for 15 minutes, lost in each other.
His phone rings and the silence breaks apart." haan Maa, Kaun?" "Mr. Gujral, Haan mein bahar hi hoon Ms. Bose ke saath, abhi aaya." he keeps his phone back and without looking at her, he takes her hand and almost drag her with him to his house.
While they reach to the entrance, he leaves her hand, gets in to his home and greets Mr. Gujral.
Sona stays there.
When everybody seated together, Mr Gujral is offered tea and snacks, he realizes that someone is waiting for him and he felt happy to see her waiting for him, he asks for excuse from Mr. Gujral but Gujral stops him.
He says " Dev, I am here just for a while, if it's not important wait for a chat." he gestures in agreement and ask kichu bhaiya to call Ms. Bose back into house.
"Mr. Dev, I have arranged a party on Saturday that is after 3 days, I want all your family to come, it's for my daughter's birthday. I am here just for this invitation, please accept."
He accepts the invitation and after all the chit chats, Mr. gjral makes an effort to idea Ishwari for engaging their children to be life partners on which Ishwari approves a bit.
Dev on other hand lost in his thoughts with all happened just now searches for Sona around as he asked Kichu Bhaiya to call her in.
He calls him again and ask but before Kichu Bhaiya replies "ok, Mr. Dev, I shall take your leave."
Dev drops Gujral to his car and greets a bye.
Later on when he asks him again about Ms. Bose, Kichu Bhaiya replies that she didn't wait and left at that moment. On which Dev fumes and started to leave but again stops on his Mother's word.
"Dev beta, mujhe tumse bohot jarori baat karni hai."
"haan maa, bolo." Ishwari looks at Mami and felt it's not right to talk in front of her.
she takes Dev to her room.
"Dev, Nutrition keh rahi thi ki mein ab theek hun."
" yeh toh bohot achi baat hai, isme itna ghabrane ki kya baat thi, yeh toh aap niche bhi bata sakti thi." he reply with a joy.
"Haan wo theek hai par Nutrition ab chale jayegi, usne kaha ke ab sab theek hai toh uska yahan rehne ka kya matlab." his anger gets back on his head.
" Matlab, theek hai uska kaam khatam hogaya hai par pata nahi wo bohot alag si, udhas si lag rahi thi aur pata nahi mujhe bhi jyada khushi nahi ho rahi thi yeh sunke ke wo chale jayegi." she continues.
"Mein dekhta hun, aap fikar mat karo." relaxing her mother.
after taking dinner and making sure everybody are done with their day's work, he gets back in his room, throws his phone on bed " Woh chale jayegi, aisi kaise meine jab kaha ke Mere office mein kaam karo toh..why is she so stubborn, why she want to stay away from me?"

" I will see her tomorrow."
by the time he manages to cools himself down, his phone receives a text message from Sonakshi.
"I believe your Mother is doing great now, my job seems to be over at your home, good bye Mr. Dixit"
His temperature rises to a different level, he takes his car and stops right in front of her house. He calls her out at around 9: 45 PM and ask her to come out and inform family that she will be back in an hour.
There in the house she thinks, she takes Elena's help and convinces her family to allow her to be out at this time for an hour as she is going to Mr. Dixit's house for some urgent work.
She stops herself as she opens the door to get out, she sees him looking at her upset.
She closes the door but could not find strength to walk upto him, she turns her face towards the door, hold it for a while.
She is embraced between two hands again, he very silently ask her to turn around and face him.
She turns around nervously as she could not tell him "GOODBYE". He snatches her from her door to his car, makes her sit and drives away.
Purposely finds a dark place and stops there, he is no mood to bare her habit of getting scare in dark. He gets out, thumps on the front of his car to cool himself down. He wants to question her about is happening to him and why he is not able to bare a thought of not seeing her from tomorrow?
She comes out of the car and requests him to drive somewhere else. He grabs her and takes her near a tree where it was just too dark, he switch on the torch of his phone.
" Sona, I am not able to control myself for not seeing you, answer me why?"
" I don't know" She replies and chides him away to walk to the car.
He grabs her hands, twirls her around, takes her near the car, keeps his phone inside and just stare at her. Close, so close that he can hear her heart beating and she can listen it too.
" Fine, unless you answer me, none of us going home back tonight." he clams, straight and clear.
" Par aap yeh sab kar kya rahe hai."
" I want to know that too Sona, ke mein yeh sab kar kya raha hun aur kyun?" stern reply from him.


To be continued soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb dear. .. continue soon. ..
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Beautifully written.
Pl continue fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautifully written!
Plzz continue soon

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