DEVAKSHI SS: WEDLOCK Part 8 @ pg 15 on 06/6/16 - Page 7

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Dheet

Two days passed by neither sona nor dev was ready to accept their mistake. Dev used to go early morning and come late night and sona managed her house n hospital duty equally. Ishwari n girlz tried to talk to them but both were dheet to accept it or say sorry.
****
As per routine dev came late night and found no one at home. He asked kheechu bhaiya about everyone and he said everyone is in their room.
D: sabne khana khaa liya... maa ne apni dawaai li.
K: nahi bhaiyaa jee kisi ne bhi khana nahi khaya aur maaji ne bhi dawaai nahi li.
D: kyun ???
K: wo maa ji aur neha didi ke beech ladaai ho gai aur riya didi aur nikki baby ke beech bhi.
D:aise kaise sabke beech ladaai ho gai.
K: wo muje nahi pata
D: acha ek kaam kijiye aap aabko bula aaiye aur sonaskhi kaha hai.
K: wo bhabhi to apne maike chali gai
D: kyaaa lekin kyun...
Before keechu could repl ishawari came in n sent kheechu to kitchen.
D: maa sonakshi maike kyun chali gai wo bhi is tarah muje bina bitaaye aur aapne subah se khana kyun nahi khaya chal kya raha hai is ghar me koi muje batayega.
I: ghar ki itni fikar hai to ghar me raha kar pura pura din office me rahega to kaise pata chalega ghar me kya chal raha hai. Aur rahi baat sona ki to wo is ghar ki sirf bahu nahi teri patni bhi hai jab tuje uski fikar nahi to wo yaha kyun rukegi.
Dev stood there silently.
I: ab aise chup hi khada rahega ya kuch bolega.
D: sorry maa. Apne gusse me mene gharwalo ko ignore kiya muje aisa nahi karna chaiye tha. Plz muje maaf kar de. Me abhi sabko bulata hu aaj sab sath me khana khaayenge.
"Riya nikki neha" shouted dev n every one came out of their room.
D: chalo aaj hum sab sath khana khayenge.
N: nahi bhaiya muje maa k sath khana nahi khana
Nk: aur muje riya dii k sath
R: muje bhi nikki ke sath khana nahi khana
D: yeh kya bachpana hai tum teeno ka. Saath khana nahi kahana... hum sab ek pariwar hai aur family me issues hote rehte hai use bethkar suljaya bhi to jaa sakta. Is tarah se baat na karne ka kya matlab hai.
Nk: acha bhai aap me itni samaj hai to yeh samaj tab kaha gai thi jab sona bhabhi se aapne ladaai ki.
Dev was again silent as he finally understood what his family wanted to make him understand.
D: me samaj gaya
R: kyaaa
D: yahi ki meri teeno behne badi aur samajdaar ho gai hai aur ab waqt aagaya hai unhe is ghar se vida karne ka.
All three started hitting him and they shared a group hug.
D: acha ab chalo khana khaa lete hai fir tumhari bhabhi ko manakar ghar bhi to lana hai.
"Uski jarurat nahi" said sona while coming in.
Dev was happy seeing her back but being mr obhodro he dint react.
I: arey sona tum to aaj raat hospital me rukne waali thi na apni saheli ke paas. Uske pati ki tabiyat...
S: ab wo theek hai mummyjee isiliye me ghar aagai.
Nk: acha kiya bhabhi aap ghar aagaye ab hum sab milke khana khaayenge.
****
On the dining table every was busy doing masti n enjoying except dev and sona who were still not talking but were busy glancing each other in between.
N: bhai bhabhi aap dono ab bhi itne chup chup ho. Ab to narazgi chod do.
D: (without looking at sona) i am sorry me kaam ke chakkar me phone dekhna bhul gaya tha.
S: even i am sorry muje aapko andy aur uske husband ki situation ke baare me bata dena chaiye tha.
I: chalo dono ne apni galti to maani
Devaskhi smiled at each other.
Nk: haaa maa ab galti ki hai to saza bhi to milni chaiye.
R: haa maa nikki sahi keh rahi hai galti ki saza to milni chaiye jaise aap hume deti ho ab bhaai aur bhabhi ko bhi dijiye.
I: haa yeh baat to sahi hai.
Devakshi were worried n nervous on what punishment will they get now.
I: to tum dono ki saza hai yeh...
Saying this she took out an envolope and gave it to dev.
I: yeh hai tum dono ki saza honeymoon to switzerland.
All three galz were surprised n shocked n excited and devakshi were confused nervous n dont know what to say.
D: maa yeh... switzerland itna dur me aap sab ko chodke nahi jaunga
Nk: koi baat nahi bhaiya aap hume bhi apne sath le chaliye we dont mind at all kyun dii
She winked and galz giggled.
I: chup karo tum teeno. Dev sona muje kuch nahi pata tum dono jaa rahe ho matlab jaa rahe ho.
D: par maa yaha itna kaam hai.
I: koi kaam nahi meri tina aur dr sinha dono se baat ho gai hai and wo dono sab manage kar lenge.
Devaskhi had no other option but to say yes as even their family was as dheet as they both are.
****
In devaskhi room dev was lost in his thoughts when sona entered after giving milk to ishwari.
S: kya hua mr dixit aap kya soch rahe hai
D: fir mr dixit...
S: sorry dev aap kya soch rahe hai
D: humare honeymoon ke baare me
S: honeymoon ke baare me... me kuch samji nahi
D: dont get me wrong sona... but
S: agar aap nahi jaana chathe to its fine hum koi excuse bana denge
D: aap kabhi meri puri baat sunegi... mene kab kaha ki me nahi jana chatha
S: aapki aadhi baat hi aise hoti hai ki puri sunne ka man hi nahi karta.
D: fine then to baat karne ka koi fayda hi nahi
He was about to leave when sona held his wrist n stopped him.
S: achaa i am sorry... plz tell me aap kya bol rahe the.
D: i am sorry too i guess me bhi overreact kar gaya.
Dev held her hand n took her to the balcony. They sat on the the chair n dev held her hand.
D: sona i know jab se humari shaadi hui hai humne ek dusre ke sath waqt hi spend nahi kiya. Me bhi tumhare sath time spend karna chatha tumhe honeymoon par leke jana chatha hu par...
S: par...
D: maa aur behenon ko yaha akele chodke...
S: to aap unhe bhi humare sath leke jaana chathe hai
D: aap fir meri baat ka galat meaning nikal rahi hai let me just complete
She nodded n sat quietly.
D: to me keh raha tha maa n beheno ko yaha akele chodke out of india jana mera man nahi maan raha. Maa ki tabiyat bhi kuch theek nahi rehti aur is tarah teen jawan ladkiyo ko i mean... aap samaj rahi hai na
She again nodded n let him continue.
D: kya hum kahi india me nahi jaa sakte for honeymoon plz. Place aap decide kariye aap jaha bolegi hum waha jaayenge.
Sona was still quite.
D: mrs dixit ab aap bol sakti hai.
S: i feel bless to have a husband like you. Aap ek bahut ache bhai n bete hai n i m sure utne hi ache husband bhi banenge. I am ok with ur decision.
Dev just smiled and they shared an eyelock.
****

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update :)
Superb :)
Too good :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... its awesome. continue soon😛
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Superb!! Update plz! Jaldi!!! :P
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Lovely os. .
Continue soon. .
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wow!!! you are such an amazing writer, please continue ... waiting for the next part ( eagerly waiting !!!)
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Finally we are going to honeymoon
My gutter mind is fully activated now 😆
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wow i love it.can u add me to pm list too?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HONEYMOON

Finally dev was able to convinced ishwari and they decided to go to Goa for their honeymoon. Both devakshi being born n brought up in a middle class family in delhi never got a chance to go out of delhi. Dev though has been to some places for his business meetings but never got chance to explore the place n for sona it was for the first time. After lots of discussion their sister decided the place as Goa as both devakshi loved beaches n it is a perfect honeymoon destination too.
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Devakshi reached goa and dev had booked a penthouse at a private beach. As sona entered their room the first thing she did is opened the curtains of the room to have a look.
She was mesmerized with what she saw. wherever her eyes went she could only find water n water and it made her so happy. Cold breeze were kissing her face n she was feeling tickling sensation. Dev was standing their still looking at his angel.
S: mr dixit this is the best ever moments of my life. Thank you
Saying this she came and hugged him and he was taken aback with her sudden gesture. Sona realizes what she did and an awkward silence came in between them. For a moment both were confused on what to say but ishwari call broke the silence and everything got back to normal.
After talking to ishawari n daughters devakshi decided to go out for a dinner and explore the place.
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They first visited Church which are very famous there and then dev took sona to a five star hotel for a lavish dinner. Sona ordered the food of her choice and dev was happy seeing her happy he just wanted to pamper her it was for the first time he was feeling so happy. Just by being with her n listening to her made him happy n relax.
After dinner they came back to their penthouse and decided to spend some time near the pool. They sat their under a moon light with their legs dipped in cold water.
S: mr dixit ek baat puchu
D: its dev for you
She smiled n blushed
S: ok dev
D: that's better
S: aap humesha sabke baare me sochte hai maa,riya,nikki,neha and now me. Aaj aapne meri har wish puri ki thank you
D: isme thanks kya hai aap meri wife hai aapki wish puri karna meri responsibility hai
S: to aap kehna chathe hai aapne jo bhi kiya apna farz samajkar naa ki kuch aur
D: aap kehna kya chathi hai sona
S: nothing dev leave it
D: no plz say jab tak kahengi nahi muje kaise pata chalega aapke feelings baare me.
S: exactly mr dixit jab tak aap kahenge nahi kisi ko kaise pata chalega aap ke feelings ke baare me.
Dev went silent... dont know what to say
S: dev aap sabke baare me sochte hai sabki feelings ki care karte hai kabhi apne baare me bhi to sochiye kabhi to kisi se apne feelings pasand napasand ka jikar kijiye. Aaj bhi pura din aapne wahi kiya jo me chathi thi even u ate the food which i ordered for you.
Aapne kaha i am ur wife n meri care karna aapka farz hai. Dev me sirf aapki responsibility banke nahi rehna chathi.
Before she could speak further dev kept his finger on her lips shut her up
D: shhh aap bolti hai hai
She looked at him with angry face and he couldn't stop smiling
D: par jo bhi bolte hai sach bolti hai
Her expression again got changed. Dev held her hand and
D: i know me sab ke baare me sochta hu sabki feelings ki care karta hu par yeh aapse kisne kaha ki wo sab meri care nahi karte. Sona my family has suffered a lot and me unhe aur pareshaan nahi kar sakta par ab... ab se me apni har pareshaani apni har feelings share karunga coz now i have someone to handle me to take care of me to understand me and to love me. I have you Mrs Sonakhsi Dixit.
Sona blushed a lil and dev came forward. He touched his forehead with her and now they r sitting to close to each other with their heads touching and they can hear each other breath.
D: aaj jo bhi mene kiya was for you coz i love to pamper my girl. I love it when u r happy. Sona i think i am falling for you.
She was unable to take it all these emotions as it was all new for her. She just wrapped her hands around his neck and hugged him tightly.
S: i will never let you fall dev will be always there to hold you.
Dev smiled and hugged her back tightly.
****
After being their in each other arms for so long they finally came back to their room hand in hand.
D: so ab yaha to koi couch nahi i guess we have to share the bed. Only if you are ok with it.
S: ab jab puri life share karni hai to ek bed kya cheez hai (she winked)
Dev took some pillows and kept in between.
D: right side mera left side aapka
She nodded and both lied down.
The dim light was on and both were not sleepy and were looking at the ceiling.
S: neend nahi aarahi
D: nahi aur aapko
S: nahi
Sona held dev's hand and now their hands are entangled and is placed on the pillows in between.
S: dev thank you for opening up to me
D: thank you for coming in my life
S: ek baat puchu
D: puchiye
Both were still not looking at each other.
S: what was your first reaction jab maa ne aapse meri baat chalai thi.
D: to be honest mene mana kar diya tha
S: kyaaa ????
D: haaa kyunki me chatha tha ki pehle neha ki shaadi ho.
S: to fir aapne haa kyun kaha
D: maa ne kasam di aur muje aapka biodata padhne kaha and ek baar aapse n aapki family se milne kaha and then whatever my decision will be she was ready to accept.
S: so u liked my family
D: no i liked you
She turned around to face him.
S: we never met before
D: wrong we have... but never got the chance to see each other.
S: have me met before our wedding dev
D: yes sona...
She got up in a shock
S: kab kaha kaise amake kuch yaad nahi...
****
Cliffhanger
So what do you all think how does dev knows sona n how was their first meeting. Keep reading and liking and fall in love wit our love birds Devakshi.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. such a nice update.. can't wait for the next part... aghh the cliffhanger is getting me really curious... anyways really nice job. KEEP IT UP!!!

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