Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
Lily puttar !
tu toh cha gayi ! very beautifully executed. I usually find rain-romance too saccharine sweet and improbable but this one meets my expectation accurately.
Sona and Dev are very introvert, mature and privaste person...so their story is actually difficult to write...they wont break into passionate verval exchange on drop of hat...they would only let their guards down when they are inside their own cocoon of comfort...like the scenario you described. the protagonists are totally in character and the emotional quotient is controlled very maturely. v well done, dear !
I love the end para...we dont know how their story would have progressed if sona had said yes to the job offer, or Dev bowed down to the pressure and reluctantly went to dance with Minister's daughter, or if sona didnt attend the party at all. All we know, they still could have found another way to reach each other, who knows that journey might .have been even more romantic...that might inspire 1000 other love-stories !!
Thank you so, so much, Di.π I'm really glad you liked my OS.π³
You are completely right, they are two very complex characters. And I doubted I could do justice to them with a rain sequence.π
Reading your review convinced me otherwiseπ and Thank You, very, very much for your constant support and encouragement, Di.π
Edited by LilyPotter - 9 years ago