OS:Where It All Began? - In the Rain UPDATED PG 7 - Page 3

Originally posted by: LilyPotter

Thank you so much.😳

I'm glad reading my OS made you happy.

I will definitely write more, just tell me what you want me to write about.😉

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Lily puttar !
tu toh cha gayi ! very beautifully executed. I usually find rain-romance too saccharine sweet and improbable but this one meets my expectation accurately.

Sona and Dev are very introvert, mature and privaste person...so their story is actually difficult to write...they wont break into passionate verval exchange on drop of hat...they would only let their guards down when they are inside their own cocoon of comfort...like the scenario you described. the protagonists are totally in character and the emotional quotient is controlled very maturely. v well done, dear !
I love the end para...we dont know how their story would have progressed if sona had said yes to the job offer, or Dev bowed down to the pressure and reluctantly went to dance with Minister's daughter, or if sona didnt attend the party at all. All we know, they still could have found another way to reach each other, who knows that journey might .have been even more romantic...that might inspire 1000 other love-stories !!

Originally posted by: Choclate...

Very Beautifully written
It felt peace reading as your words penned down are simple but Beautiful
Please continue...
BTW Reading this I remembered one song to which I dedicate to DevAkshi only. It is... Rehnuma

Tu jo mila, sab mil gaya
Dil ki namaazein jaake
Pahunchi falak se aage
Toh jaake paaya tujhko
Mere rehnuma...

Mujhko mera Rabb mil gaya
Baahon se aage tere
Duniya nahi hai meri
Rakhle yahin tu mujhko
Mere rehnuma...

Such a Beautiful song dedicated to the moment U mentioned about Dev holding her hand saying this is not dream but reality.

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

It is FANTSTIC! So beautifully written...no exaggerations. Everything is just PERFECT! Do we get a contiuation for this?
If yes, then please update fast! I am in love with your writing!

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Beautiful one..loved it.plz continue

Originally posted by: Akhu

Superb dear pls continue

Originally posted by: diksha0102

Lovely OS.

Beautifully written😊

Hope your finger gets well soon and we'll be getting more of your stories😊

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Lovely os

Thank you for the pm

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

This was amazing. ...

Simply beautiful. ...

So divine and pure. ...

Although I don't watch the show regularly, but no doubt reading this awesome story is going to be a great treat for me.

It's my request please do continue. It is going to be a breathtaking story. ...

You have typed the whole os with your left hand, hats off to your passion.

I appreciate your effort.👏

Take care dear.

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Beautifully written...